Doomsday: Trapped in Disaster with My Ice-Cold Manager

It's similar to my exclusive dream game, but there are some issues and the male protagonist is a bit too low-key. Overall, it's worth watching. How to say it? The rest is okay, I hope it won't stop updating, the male protagonist is growing up This kind of thing is about taking your time. Maybe most tomatoes like fast pace. I can only say keep going. It's not easy to find a similar book. But if you really want to give up, there is nothing you can do. After all, people always have to live.

Romance novels written in a game setting. I have read many successful novels where the main character is a small character who counterattacks and succeeds. The chapters of the story of the male protagonist in the cool novel will be very short, but it is better to write a long story from weak to strong. Although in the game, a year is equal to one night, dozens of chapters are too long for us readers, and the rewards are too common. How can the male protagonist convince so many female protagonists to coexist peacefully if the male protagonist is not strong enough? Will it be possible to learn in the game for a year and bring back reality, making the male protagonist an all-powerful story more attractive? Personal opinion, I also want to write a novel. When I wrote it myself, I realized that writing novels is not that easy. It is not easy for the author to give 5 stars to support you in your creation.

If it had a single female protagonist, it would be a masterpiece. The emotional scene between Han Jiangxue and the protagonist is so well created that later on, the interaction with (any other female characters and the protagonist) and (Han Jiangxue's emotional pull has always been unrecognizable) will become poisonous points. It's perfectly fine to create a new book with a heroine based on the emotions of the author of the first simulated doomsday plot. In novels with multiple heroines, all heroines must have the same emotional level (average) and the protagonist should always pursue a career. Otherwise, the reader will have a sense of betrayal and cuckolding because a single heroine's emotional depth will make (extremely pure love readers) feel betrayed.

Well written and the first copy is stunning. But I feel that you wanted to write more in the second copy, but failed to control it well, which resulted in a bit of delay for everyone to read. Also, I feel that the protagonist should not have the memory to know that he is in the game when entering the game. In this way, he will be very indifferent when he takes over, and the sense of cruelty will be greatly reduced when life and death are separated. Other aspects are very good. I hope there will be more updates.

Although it is based on my exclusive dream game, and even the world view and heroine design of the first copy are so similar, it is still a 5-star review, because I want to see how the second copy and the relationship with the first heroine can be written. The most enjoyable part of the exclusive dream game is the drama of two realities recognizing each other, but unfortunately there is no plot later.

Not bad when I was a kid. I have been looking for this type of novel for several years. Finally found it. Author, please don't abandon the update. I hope that I can follow this rhythm and not end up unfinished later. Come on, author! Deep love, deep hatred. No wonder so many people gave it bad reviews. Not enough. And a little sadistic. Forget it. Let's wait until he's been raised for 10 days and a half before taking a look.

It's good to read. There are very few novel books like this. Although The Last Days of the Orangutans is not very good, it can't end so hastily. A woman who is too smart is indeed unlikable, but there should be more plots in The Last Days of the Orangutans that are good for her.

It's very beautiful. As for the heroine QC, she is very good at avoiding lightning. There are too many other tomatoes to win. Come on, don't doubt yourself. As long as the heroine behind does not have any big surprises, the book will not be bad. I see a lot of people commenting on the plot. I don't really care about the plot, but I care about the heroine first. Of course, it's also because the main selling point of your book is the heroine. Let's talk about a very important issue. The character of Xiaoyu is really a failure. You said he is a springboard, not the heroine, and you gave him too many scenes. She likes her so much. If the male lead Huan is not accepted in the end, I think he is giving away the girl, so he must be depressed, and it must be considered a minor surprise. If he is accepted, his previous character has an ex-boyfriend and he is a little depressed, so this role is a bit too high, and at first I thought you said he was a springboard for the minister and the male lead to get to know each other. Board, it turns out that in such a long article, this character actually does not have the springboard role you mentioned at all. It just exudes the personal charm of this character. I can only say that I am very disappointed. There is also a pull. Your pull level is really a bit poor. It has been mediocre for a period of time and the bland plot must be It needs a cool point to support it. After a long time of pulling, there is no cool point. I can only say that the design of these bridges is relatively failed. In short, the two important heroines in the introduction have no interesting points. I am still looking forward to it. If you see my review, I hope you can refer to it.

I have read a similar book. The protagonist became a top student in one life and had a girlfriend. The real-life woman also has memories of being together. She also became a strong runner in another life. I forgot what novel it was, can anyone tell me?

I almost got mad at you. Can Goldfinger be a little more cocky? Why do I, a macho man, like this? I feel itchy in my stomach [shy]