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It's okay. The introduction is quite passionate, but the plot is not very clear. There is also a small question at the end of each chapter. To a certain extent, it is also very powerful. It can come up with so many questions, especially each question is followed by a rhetorical question. Although it may be for the sake of better data and more people commenting, that rhetorical question really makes me feel like "Kids, what do you think?" I watched cartoons when I was a child.

Just don't forget the Ultra spirit in the middle. If you implement the Ultra spirit in place, it will be a good book.

Compared with other series of Ultra novels, this one has a very good development prospect. Among them, Ultra beliefs, writing methods and plot sublimation are very good. It can be regarded as an Ultra extra chapter to see if the world view of this book changes in the future. If it is stable and sublimated, then this The evaluation of this book will greatly increase (except for some black fans) (Small question: If it exceeds one million and the world view is not destroyed and can have new growth, then congratulations) (If you have the ability, you can make a novel on Douyin, then turn it into a comic and then a video, which can attract some Ultra fans)

It is non-toxic, and the character creation is relatively successful. It is considered good among Tomato Ultra fans, and even ranks among the best. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Suddenly I no longer want to hide it. I like your cheerful tone when you speak, I like your eyes like stars falling when you smile, and I even like the way you tap your fingertips on the table unconsciously when you are occasionally stunned. These present moments make me feel as if my heartbeat is always half a beat faster than usual. I used to feel that "Jia Geng" needed to pave the way for a lot of emotions, but now I just want to say it directly: every second I spend with Ji Geng makes me feel very comfortable, and I really want to keep doing this. I wonder if you are willing to give me a chance to make this comfortable feeling last longer?

So well written! I didn't say that! Such dedication in desperate situations! This is the Otwin I want to see! Woohoo, I'm really going to cry when I see the latest four-person team dedicating their light to Qin Ping! Really good! Big cheers for the author! I support you! ( ｰ̀εｰ́ )Write slowly! Consider it slowly! I trust you!

Keep faith, this book will get better and better 10.20 The content of this book has been completely popularized, with familiar routines and familiar plots. 9.8 The latest section of the college entrance examination is unsatisfactory and overly portrays other characters. A plot infected by darkness, but everyone actually writes it once. Did the author have no outline later or is it just a waste of words? Reading the introduction, this book doesn't seem like a group portrait novel. How many chances do these characters have to appear? There's no need to give so many pictures, it's tiring to watch

It's ok. It seems pretty good now. As long as no poison comes out in the future, it will be pretty good if I update it stably and write it well [shy] Please support me

There is no foreshadowing for some emotional turns. You can depict the desperate inner feelings of some special little characters to foreshadow the emotional turns. Of course, the setting and background of this book and the character of the protagonist are all unique to Owen in my reading. If some blunt turns can be changed and the plot rhythm, plot depth and character portrayal can be changed, then I will keep reading and keep supporting 😋

One of the few Tomato protagonists with Ultra spirit, worth watching

I finished reading it in one day. It is different from what I expected to be a cool novel. What the author wants to express is the Ultra spirit and the meaning of the name Leo. The protagonist has the aura of the protagonist along the way, but it is not enough to express what an ordinary person can do, because as the protagonist of this book, he is destined to be extraordinary. The protagonist wants to overturn the injustice of this world, and does his best under the circumstances that injustice cannot be absolutely eliminated. I think there is nothing wrong with this idea. It also makes up for a lot of regrets. It does satisfy the fantasy elements of the novel. The overall pace is very fast, but it is okay in Tomato. I think it would be better if the protagonist had more experience along the way. Because the power jump in the later period is too big, I can't feel the hardships along the way. In short, it is an okay short story.

This is the best Ultra fan I've seen so far.

The author is very good and allows readers to participate in the characters.

Owen is pretty good. If you keep it up, it should be at least 8.5.

The introduction is quite exciting. Let's look at the content behind it. Let's take care of it first.

The author basically likes every comment he makes and is worth recommending.

Come on, author, great subject matter [blowing kiss]

The protagonist is trained hard and hard. I like this, at least it is better than being invincible without brains! !

Great, cheers author

There is almost no Ultraman for all. Otherwise, the writing is not good. Or else. Very few. There are almost no wild Leo ones.

It was good at the beginning, I felt a little tired and painful [I almost cried], but later on I solved the regrets of other Ultraman, so can your regrets be solved? So what do you stand for? The origin of the glow? [Sinister smile]

I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time.

It's a good read. A great book. Highly recommended. It's considered to be of high quality among Ultra fan fictions. I just can't get enough of it. The author will add more updates. There is too little written, not enough to read. It seems I can only put it down for a while.

Logic Online is indeed worth watching!

You can write the fight scenes well, keep up the good work.

Author, have the characters I conceived been selected? When will it be online?

Come on Chengjie Agulu⛽

It's very interesting and allows readers to create their own characters

So far, it seems that he has an Ultra spirit.

Very good, come on