My Little Pony: A Romance Diary From Luna to Big PP

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The emotional scene with Luna is very good, very thorough and reasonable. It's not like many other Xiao Ma stories where you fall in love very quickly out of nowhere, but the attraction to each other after getting to know each other deeply is natural.

A book with very high potential. Although it has multiple female protagonists, the emotional scenes are written in detail, and the emotional changes are relatively obvious. There are not many metaphors. At least there is no stallion or philandering. The protagonist gives me a very distinct character, bohemian, and humorous. , And there are quite a few updates per day. I can just watch enough when I get back from school. All in all, it is highly recommended. I admit that you are Xiaoma's sunshine☀, loyal✋😭✋. I hope that the subsequent development will not be too hasty and will be steady and solid. What I want is that kind of perception and emotion.

The protagonist's company for Luna, the meals he cooked for Luna, and the fireworks he brought to Luna made Luna understand little by little that she doesn't need other people's attention and opinions, and she doesn't need to be anyone, as long as she is herself. After reading this part of Luna's arrangement, you will feel warm. Luna is still the same Luna as before, but she has become completely different, freer and more vivid and three-dimensional. Let Luna understand that she doesn't have to be anyone but herself. The arrangement of Celestia is also very good. The protagonist makes Celestia understand that Celestia who makes mistakes and has flaws is the real Celestia. Every pony can be tired and not good at it. Celestia's long-term protection made her forget where the protection came from, trapping herself for a long time. With the help of the protagonist and his childhood "self", he gained the courage to face difficulties and the determination to face inner problems, and solved his own knot. The "reconciliation" between Celestia and Luna was well laid out. It was when Luna found her own spiritual support and was in a passionate love period with her lover that Luna could look at these things more calmly and discover the things and people in front of her that were worth cherishing. The scene chosen is also very clever. It is a familiar scene in the dream world, a familiar place, and the pair of sisters. This time, Luna finally told Tia all the hidden problems and told Tia that she hoped her sister would look at her more and say a few more words to her. During the years of loneliness and hesitation on the moon, the only thing that kept Luna going was her unwillingness and obsession. Luna said she didn't need any compensation, she just wanted an upright apology. (And Luna also got her wish and waited for her sister's "apology") Overall, this book is sweet, the emotional lines are natural, warm and delicate. The relationship with Tia and Luna is not a one-sided sacrifice, but a two-sided healing and redemption, which not only warms oneself, but also illuminates the people one cares about, allowing them to find their own safe haven. (Another point is that Luna did not directly forgive Celestia, but told Celestia that she needed to see her performance to see if she had a chance to become a sister again. Also, it was not the other self who chose Luna, but Luna chose to embrace the other self)

The emotional lines are written very delicately and the psychology of the characters is very vivid. The battle scenes are very well written, very clean and neat, and very graphic. The only flaw is that the author's update is too slow. It makes the old lady cross the road and touch slowly.

Absolute praise. This is called a heroine. Sweet at the same time. There are also details. That's right. After finishing writing the first heroine. The emotional line after the second one, I was a little worried about whether it would be poorly written. After all. There are more or less seven or eight female protagonists in other fics. Available in this. It seems that the kind of pure love that is more suitable in this childhood is pure love. Or two heroines. If there were too many female protagonists, this would be a mess. But the author's level is still quite high. Personal advice. I hope that after the author finishes writing this book, he will open another book with two female protagonists. The specific framework is because Pony holds the power of reincarnation. The protagonist is a time traveler who was an orphan before traveling through time. The Moon Princess section was either not written, or it was sealed for some reason, or the protagonist traveled through time thousands of years ago. I didn't bother to think about the rest. After all, I didn't watch the little Maria in the back. Apart from the two princesses and that so-called Discord, I don't know anything else. According to my diploma, I can only give you a framework. I really can't write. It's the author's business whether to do it or not [laughing evilly] I won't say, but I definitely recommend it [like]. This book is an absolute five-star

It's the first time I've seen a My Little Pony fanfic. It's nice and okay. It just describes those intimate actions. When I think of two horses, I feel weird. I have a suggestion. If there is a new book in the future, you can change the pony into a human form. The characters will remain the same.

This is the first time I have really come across this kind of harem-oriented pony story. Whether it is the portrayal of the characters or the delicate emotions, the description is very good. It is a very good harem novel. It can be seen that the author is a true fan. Hahaha, I recommend everyone to read it.

It's quite good. At least I can't find another novel that I think is sweeter than this one. Alas... I originally wanted to find some childhood memories, but I was shocked by the negative similarities of other books. I haven't read too many My Little Pony. Very sweet, it would be better if the author could come back. (I can't find a sweet article with the same writing style as this book…)

It's 5 stars. Did you read in the comment section that the rating is understated? Rated 4 stars. A rare thoughtful article, the character description is in line with the personality, not OOC, the logic is smooth, and the emotional expression can be considered, it is very high-quality