Venerable Daoist Xu Tian

The novel uses the real struggle of the protagonist to highlight the hardships of ordinary people's counterattack. The character creation and erotic tension are very good, and the plot structure and narrative rhythm are relaxed and relaxed. The story of the novel is wonderful and I couldn't help but read it again.

This novel is very exciting both in terms of plot and character portrayal. As a classic power-up and upgrade flow, it has many novel settings inserted into it, making it well worth a read. The current traffic is sluggish, and it is not a crime of war. It is just that the rhythm of the market is temporarily not worthy of its precipitation. I believe that one day, more people will see it. Come on, author!

The author's writing style has the charm of Eastern immortals. Whether it is the description of the world view or the portrayal of the characters' mood and actions, readers can quickly immerse themselves in this fantasy world of immortals.

The author's writing style is as delicate as a knife, and every content is carefully sculpted. The details are masterfully controlled, and the emotions are so rich and weighty that it is impossible to stop reading. Every time I read it, my eyes light up, as if I have been integrated into the story. Not bad, keep up the good work! !

A short story about an ordinary boy Zhang Chen's cultivation of immortality. It's an upgrading novel without a golden finger. It's quite good. The male protagonist is not a virgin, so not everyone will help. It's quite rare. I look forward to Zhang Chen's growth in the future. The road to immortality is long, and I look forward to Zhang Chen reaching the top.

How should I put it, the setting of each realm is very novel and the divisions are very clear. The characterization is also pretty good. It's not like other authors who read books, but there are too few daily updates. Author, you have to work hard. More. It's still worth watching now. Love to watch.

It's good-looking, no hair washed, no virginity, the protagonist kills decisively! An ordinary boy who has never met his parents relies on a jade box, an elixir scroll and a sword to travel to the immortal world. He even detects false spiritual roots and does not destroy them. He is reckless all the way to the end. There is no system! ! ! ! ! ! ! You haven't washed your hair! ! ! ! I'll go... It just looks good! ! ! !

The writing is very good, the rhythm is well controlled, the plot is gradual, the writing is good, and I write it with great care 🤔🤔🤔

The plot is ups and downs, exciting, compact and not procrastinating. It has good ideas, well-depicted characters, and high-quality plot. It also shows the protagonist's glimmer of success in difficult situations. It is a rare masterpiece.

This novel starts from ordinary life and describes the protagonist step by step to the peak of life. The plot of the novel is very nice, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the language expression is very crisp and clear. It makes people feel like a spring breeze after reading it. It feels like the author is not an ordinary person. Keep up the good work! 👍👍👍