Grave Robbery: a Survival Guide for a Passerby

Where is the passerby, he is clearly the protagonist with a clear growth line. The addition of Shen Bing is very integrated, and there is no escape from the process of going from stranger to familiarity. It is precisely because they are so close to life that their interactions make me feel particularly alive and at ease. People with the same kind background will be attracted, resulting in intersection, and pain will be understood and accepted. It is such a mature and steady story line, as heart-warming as a diaper, and it held me firmly. I must say that every one of the original characters written in this book is very popular. He is not the labeled "simple curiosity" Wu Xie, who has thoughts, pains and struggles, nor is he the "iceberg beauty strong A" Zhang Qiling. The fat man also has a mature background and is not easy to talk to others. Even in the end, such a story will give people a sense of continuation in their hearts. Their path will continue like this, living a good life in a place where we can't see it.

Although the title of the book is "Ordinary People", Xiao Shen doesn't have any golden fingers. He can only be regarded as an "entry ticket" given by the players on the chessboard. However, Xiao Shen's own tenacity and tenacity and his vitality and growth like weeds give this original character unlimited possibilities and charm. Although I feel arrogant when I say this, I have indeed read a lot of fan fiction written by pirates. It is not a good idea to compare the fan fiction of Power Generation for Love. But what I want to say is that this is the closest style to the original work I have ever seen. It does not only refer to the delicate psychological description from the first perspective, but also Xiao Shen's unique way of survival as a stubborn and even "donkey-like" ordinary person like Wu Xie. Much like Wu Xie, Xiao Shen's kind nature has not been wiped out by the sudden changes. This kind of kindness has not become a drag on her (at least in my opinion), but makes her shine in the author's writing. In the original work, my favorite is actually Wu Xie, no It was because of the power and scheming of the Evil Emperor in the later period, but also because of his unchanging human nature and innocent persistence. I also saw this characteristic in Xiao Shen, a kind of stubbornness that refused to admit defeat, or even a kind of "childishness" that refused to give in. A naive ordinary person cannot survive in the world of stolen pens, let alone attract those powerful and seasoned seniors, but a person who has the ability to keep thinking in crisis, knows the subtleties but can actively choose to maintain his humanity in the puzzle, has the power of an alternative weed, Wu Xie and Xiao Shen, in my opinion, it is precisely because of this trait in them that they can attract such a group of companions who can go through life and death, and thus we have such an Iron Triangle (or should it be regarded as the "Iron Four" in this book?) However, unlike Wu Xie, Xiao Shen is less curious and more delicate and sensitive. This may be related to the difference in experience. She can often notice points that Wu Xie ignores (such as the brother's wounds, and the gas mask). In my opinion, this kind of character can It is said to be Xiao Shen's biggest golden finger. The more dangerous he is, the calmer he is. The weaker he looks on the outside, the stronger his heart. This also allows the appearance of Xiao Shen to fill the vacancies in the Iron Triangle without appearing abrupt. With the addition of Zhang San, a very charming character, everything seems to be natural. I typed a lot of words in bits and pieces in the middle of the night, and some of them are incomprehensible, but what I want to express is actually very simple. I am honored to meet a person like Xiao Shen on such an ordinary night. Even a little person without a golden finger can glow with a different kind of vitality. I sincerely hope that Dada can fill this story up so that we, as readers, can touch Xiao Shen's growth through words and see another possibility of tomb robbing notes. I really like Dada's words [Love]

Gee, I came across a good article by accident. It's really good-looking. The heroine is not particularly powerful or powerful, but she is very charming, smart, brave, and has clear thinking. The iron triangle blends in very naturally. The Iron Triangle is very consistent with the original work. Wu Xie is not the "white" One Hundred Thousand Whys in other fanfics. The little brother is not someone who has difficulty communicating. The fat man is no longer a talkative and mean-spirited person. His high emotional intelligence and carefulness are all shown! This is the third good-looking fanfic I've found after He Zhou and Uncle Tong. This score is too low. If my hands weren't slippery, I really wouldn't be able to open it. What a pitfall!

The heroine is well-characterized. She is stubborn, strong, and determined, but not stupid. Many articles about ordinary protagonists find it difficult to describe the wisdom of the protagonist when facing this kind of thing for the first time. They only describe the protagonist's bewilderment, which makes the protagonist look like a fool in the plot. However, the heroine in this book is very well portrayed, and the relationship between the characters is very delicate. When the Iron Triangle and the heroine meet, their respective attitudes are also very consistent with the characters of the original text, and the writing is super interesting.

It's really beautiful! The description of the protagonist is very good, the character is well created, and the psychological activities of an ordinary person (currently) are completely written in place. The inner struggle, tenacity, unyielding, intelligence, and weighing the pros and cons are all perfectly reflected. It is not as silly and sweet as other articles, more abstract. Although An Ning was not saved, the author did not relent, because the protagonist will experience these things sooner or later, and he will be hurt when he should be hurt, but he really feels sorry for him. There is no such powerful cheat, system, power, treatment, nor is it the nanny of the protagonist. He is just an existence like an ordinary team doctor who is not very powerful. He was pulled into the game like Wu Xie and relied on his own perseverance to continue until he found the truth. The transformation of the protagonist from an ordinary college student is perfectly written. It's really beautiful!

I haven't seen a fanfic of this quality in a long time, it's great. There is just one thing. Chen Wenjin's personality change after talking to the heroine is too weird. Why did he suddenly become vicious? Well, the character change is too weird. The other parts are very well written.

My wife hasn't updated it yet, so I can only go back and read it again, and I found that Shen Bing is really amazing. She has a similar life trajectory to Wu Xie. She was calculated from birth, became a chess piece on the chessboard, and was introduced into the game step by step. But what is different between her and Wu Xie is that she grows up very quickly. When facing death, she blames herself but She will not fall into the whirlpool of emotions, and she can see the harm to the team if everyone continues to indulge in it, so she can persuade Wu Xie. Facing the Riddlers such as Zhang San and Chen Wenjin, she is calm enough to deal with it and will not be led away. However, the heroine still knows too little, so she can only "voluntarily" join the game. I really love Shen Bing. Before, she was an ordinary person without super talents, but she will grow. Why do we love to read adult novels? It is because we will feel sorry for her pain like friends and feel sincerely happy for her transformation. Madam, your writing is really good. Madam, you must work hard [blowing kiss]

The writing is so awesome, it's rare to see such a flesh-and-blood book. Originally, I wanted to read sweet cp stories, or the kind of ambiguous love stories, but I was fascinated by them without even realizing it. If I had this kind of writing style, I would wake up laughing in my dreams😊. Maybe the first-person perspective is more representative of the protagonist's joys, sorrows, and joys, but it's just a cow. Just look.

Very nice, nice, nice [Blowing Kiss] I really like the heroine, this book is really well written. It's even, it looks good, but it's not good enough [crying] Write down my guess here. At present, it seems that Shen Bing has a special bloodline. Combined with the fact that the ointment given by her brother before she applied it still had the effect of repelling insects long after she applied it, it seems that Shen Bing's blood may also be able to repel insects, and it may even be Qilin blood. So the "she" Shen Bing subconsciously asked out of intuition could be her mother? Is Shen Bing's mother from the Zhang family? She always felt that the person who set up this situation was her mother, who was also the "crazy woman" in Zhang San's words. It didn't feel like Zhang San's character would agree to anyone's request. So it's two parallel lines? The Wu family trains Wu Xie, and Lao Shen trains the heroine (the heroine was familiar with the pile of rocks in the Devil's City) [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] I don't know if my guess is right [Thinking] I hope I won't be slapped in the face too hard in the future.

I like it very much. I really witnessed Shen Bing's psychological journey along the way, witnessed her step by step growth and emotional transformation. I like the heroine very much. She is an ordinary person, but she will not be resigned to her fate. I also feel very close to Zhang San. I really like their settings. Zhang San really pokes me. Also, it's really not enough to watch! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why do I have to read this beautiful serialized article! ! The book of a thousand words🩸please ask the author for a big update😭😭

This fanfic is currently very acceptable. The writing is good and not flat at all. You won't get bored if you keep reading it. You can keep reading. It took me one day to read 82 chapters. Now I have tied it. I plan to read it again when I get bored. I am looking forward to the update. , When I read about the author's private character plot, I was a little uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I read too many original works, but the characters are very well created. I came relatively late, and most of the things I wanted to say have been said by book friends. I may not be able to describe it well. In short, this book is very good 🉑

I need to continue to write more. The writing is really good! ! ! The description of the protagonist's inner activities is really good and makes people want to watch it unconsciously٩(*´◒`*)۶

Five-star praise The protagonist has a strong ability to grow, the original character is super restored without being OOC, and the author's psychological portrayal of the character is profound. Especially the interaction between the heroine and the original work is very touching. The friendship between gentlemen is as light as water, and the friendship between friends is life and death. I really like the author's description of the heroine's subjectivity, and I hope the author can consistently love the protagonist in his novel. I think that the author who can create such a charismatic protagonist must be a very charming and excellent person. Come on, come on, keep on coming! ! !

Yes, I am the female protagonist and I like Shen Bing. She is really great. She is strong, brave, smart, calm, and kind (a kind of conscience and empathy developed by ordinary people. After experiencing so much, Bingbing can still maintain a trace of kindness in her heart, allowing Bingbing to forgive and trust others). I can see many, many beautiful qualities in her. Anyway, I confess to Bingbing! I hope she can be strong, get what she wants, and be happy! I love all kinds of heroines. No matter who the heroine is, I hope she can have strength and become better and better.

It's quite interesting. You can see that the author put his own efforts into creating the characters, and each character is very three-dimensional. The relationship between Zhang San and the heroine is even more touching, and the heroine's entire mental journey is written very clearly. Except for the smaller number of chapters, since this is a new book that has just started to be updated, everything else is pretty good. The author's writing style is also good, and it's really immersive.

Since there is no one else, I can only comment on myself first.

The author writes well, the writing style is natural and smooth, the heroine is also very smart, and the original characters are not OOC, and they have their own character charm, especially Wu Xie, which is so rare, and Wu Xie is not written as a silly Baitian or Green Tea. I have read a book before and it was simply a mindless swipe at Wu Xie. I feel like many people on Tomato who have never seen the original novel or the TV series hate Wu Xie because of this type of article. Also: There is an original character Zhang San in this novel. He is very annoying. I wish I could give him the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. He is so annoying, like the ancient Tianlong people. Looking at his interaction with the heroine, I think he is a snake spirit. Many readers complain about the pull between him and the heroine, but I don't think there's anything to complain about. Are they saying he despises the heroine? Knock him and call the heroine "Little Popsicle"? Or is he teasing the heroine like a pet? I hope that the heroine will grow up and take revenge on this nerve in the future.

The story has a tight rhythm and strong logic, and the heroine's image is also very successful. The article has been updated to Chapter 73. Let me share my personal feelings after reading the latest chapter: In this chapter, there is a confessional conversation between Zhang San and the heroine. As a young adventurer who once faced danger with Zhang San in the rainforest, the heroine returned to normal life and experienced a series of things. It was easy for the heroine to be with " "Senior" reveals his true feelings; but Zhang San is a person who has lived for a hundred years, and he should be used to this kind of situation, so in the night talk, Zhang San may not peel off the layer of "Zhang San" when facing the heroine, revealing his fragile and true side. If he wants to confess to others, he feels that the behavior that is in line with his character should be to reveal a corner of his true nature, attracting others to look at him and then say something specious, which is the restraint that he wants to reveal but hides after being polished by time. The above is just a personal guess about the behavior of a person who has lived in the world for hundreds of years and is full of joking about life. Even if it is the same character, everyone's understanding is different, just like "Zhang Qiling" in each fan work is different. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update [please update]

I like this book very much. Although I have read it now, I still don't know whether the CP I am talking about will come true. I feel that from the beginning to now, the brother has gradually become stranger and cold to the baby girl... Well, doting. I feel that the baby girl is really doted on by the brother. I knock them both because I like the baby brother. , So I am talking about this pair of CPs, and I am not interested in Zhang San😷, but whether the author wants to implement no CP or who the heroine's baby will be with in the end, it must be what the author thinks is best. Well, I will update it. I think I am almost tied. This is a sad story [face covering] Come on, I like this story very much. The baby girl is slowly growing up. Her resilience and courage are what I yearn for. I admire her very much. Come on too, baby girl! Hope she is invincible!

Super good-looking! Shen Bing is just an ordinary person, so when she is involved in these situations, she will be confused. But for the sake of Lao Shen, she slowly learned to adapt, and even escaped from Zhang San, who is very powerful in our eyes! I like the character design of Shen Bing very much, and after seeing the latest works of Dada, I think it is right. Ordinary people can become the protagonist of the story, no matter what, everyone is the protagonist of their own story. In fact, I am an omnivore in my current relationship line! I feel like everyone is laughing so hard, hahahahaha, the little brother has the charm of the little brother, and Wu Xie also has the charm of the younger brother! The feeling of an innocent puppy, and Zhang San is really full of tension, I can't help but not laugh. Come on, keep updating! Don't stop updating [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

A particularly charming heroine with a complete growth line. She can reflect on herself, overcome her own fears, express her emotions, be tenacious, and try her best to find the truth. She has tenacious vitality, and the light emotional line is also very easy to touch. After going through hardships, living and dying together, she transcends simple love and recognizes that each other is an important person. It comes naturally.

It is very realistic. For ordinary people, it is a story with no golden fingers and no space. You can only rely on yourself for everything. It is not a time travel. The heroine is very delicately written, has a realistic temper, is a bit smart, and is relatively tolerant. In general, it is not a long time to update, but so far it is okay. The mental description is very good, and the growth line is also very reasonable.

The writing is delicate and gentle, and each character has its own three-dimensionality. The heroine is well established. The author's writing style is also very good, and the writing is smooth and flowing. I hope the author will keep it updated. This is a book with great potential and a good book that particularly attracts me.

The author wrote the heroine Shen Bing very well, with vivid inner activities and unique character. He did not describe Shen Bing as pure white or pure black, but presented us with a flesh-and-blood character with his own thoughts. Shen Bing has tenderness and strategy, which surprised me (∀) I am real I like this book very much. The plot is smooth and not sloppy. The original characters are not obtrusive and unique. The characters are not OOC. The writing is good and I can sympathize with the characters. The author is really amazing ๐•ᴗ•๐, so I don't understand why the rating is so low. It should at least be worth an 8.5 Or above. You can see the difference by reading my previous book review. I really think this book is much better than that one, but that book has a higher rating than this one. I don't understand why everyone's aesthetic appreciation has declined.

It looks good. The relationship between the heroine and the original protagonist team is also very natural. The description of the heart is not abrupt. The characters are three-dimensional and natural. There is a good relationship between the new character and the heroine.

It's very good-looking. Although it's not fat yet, it won't be a loss if you invest in it. It is much more logical than many high-scoring books, and the author is very serious. From the long character analysis, you can see the author's thinking about the characters and plot. ♪(^∇^*) It's so fun to watch! I will keep chasing. I'm very curious about the follow-up plot.

Very nice! The heroine's growth is reasonable and not brainless. The plot is very interesting! The author's description of psychology is very, very, very powerful! Delicate and real, very touching! It's just too little. The author doesn't update it from time to time. I hope the author will update more~ [Blow kiss]

This is the most fluently written fanfic I have ever seen. Judging from the portrayal and growth of the protagonist Shen Bing, as well as the portrayal of Fatty Wu Xieheiye, I think I can give a final and conclusive evaluation from my perspective: it can penetrate the back of the paper and penetrate deeply into the wood. This is the pen-stealing character in my mind as a person who has seen pen-stealing. The plot is also detailed and appropriate, without going into unnecessary details, and it can be seen that the author has a very anticipated big background to unfold. The big background revolves around Shen Bing and is intertwined with the stolen pen lines of the original work. I have never looked forward to the follow-up so much. I hope the author will not stop updating. The author of Three Dimensions is probably very busy and the updates are not that regular. As a reader, I would like to express my love and gratitude to the author. Thank you to the author for generating love and allowing me to eat good food. I hope that writing so much can express my inner feelings. If I have offended anyone, I apologize in advance.

I actually didn't like the first chapter, because the heroine's psychological description made me feel that she was too empty. The plot setting and character dialogue always made me feel awkward, as if someone I knew was clearly acting. But after the first few chapters, it became less embarrassing, and the psychological description didn't make me dig my toes in the same way. I can feel that "I" is indeed slowly growing up and becoming tough. Maybe I just don't like vernacular? But I do like the heroine very much. Her current thoughts and actions make me feel her seriousness and powerlessness. She is a very real person.

It's so well written. Is this fan quality that I can see on Yang Persimmon? Moved [crying] [crying] [crying] I love Bingbing so much, I hope my wife will keep writing, no matter how fast it is updated, such a good story needs an ending [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]