I am just a newbie who has been fooled by myself when writing a book. I am very unsatisfied with it because I have signed a contract and cannot change it. I can only rewrite it significantly. I have to change almost every chapter. I do not recommend reading it for the time being. Please understand.
I hope that people who see this book will save it on your bookshelf and wait until I finish the revision to read it.
The introduction is within the word count: A man dressed in red emerges from the coffin, starting the road to eternal life. Wearing black clothes and crossing through the ages, you can cross others but not yourself.
When I was young, I went out to explore, became a general when I grew up, raised an apprentice when I was tired, brewed wine in my free time, lived a life of idle clouds and wild cranes, laughed at the ups and downs of life, and sat idle with a fan and a pot of tea. But do you think this is good? At least I found it boring. Until I met them, especially her.
My name is Lin Qingyan, the Marquis of Wuding in the Qin Dynasty. I hold the Yin Yang Sword in my hand and have no enemies in the world.
Reader comments
I didn't know where to complain at the moment... Personally, I feel that the writing is good, but the narrative is not clear. It makes people dizzy sometimes. The transition is a little bad. I originally thought it would be a slow-paced fairy tale, but it turned out to be like a company of heroes...
I didn't know where to complain at the moment... Personally, I feel that the writing is good, but the narrative is not clear. It makes people dizzy sometimes. The transition is a little bad. I originally thought it would be a slow-paced fairy tale, but it turned out to be like a company of heroes...
What is the highlight of this book?