By chance, Cai Shuyun was reincarnated into a different world. By chance, she embarked on a journey of cultivating immortality. She progressed along the long road of cultivation with like-minded partners, and finally reached the top and gained eternal life.
It is a relatively casual article, containing a small amount of male and female elements. The main character is in the early stage of the growth series, and there may be few love scenes. The main focus is on cultivating immortals and the daily pace is slow.
Reader comments
1. There are many typos, including the right and wrong words.
2. The description of the character's appearance is too lengthy.
3. The beginning is not captivating enough, the plot could be more detailed.
4. The story is quite interesting. It is recommended that there be more conflicts between characters (such as the protagonist and the system) to make their personalities distinct. Also, add more psychological descriptions and so on
1. There are many typos, including the right and wrong words. 2. The description of the character's appearance is too lengthy. 3. The beginning is not captivating enough, the plot could be more detailed. 4. The story is quite interesting. It is recommended that there be more conflicts between characters (such as the protagonist and the system) to make their personalities distinct. Also, add more psychological descriptions and so on
I can't understand it, so I'm leaving.