Red Mansion: How to Prevent the Death of Crimson Pearl Immortal Grass

The teacher is so powerful, he is like the Red Mansion version of Emperor Kangxi, no worse than Er Yuehe. I really doubt that this is a book that can be seen on the Internet.

The writing is so good, the wording, writing, logic, etc. Are all very classical. This book is actually serialized on Tomato? ? ?

The writing is very good, the characters are well drawn, the small characters and supporting characters are well and logically portrayed, and there are no brainless black characters. The overall story is wonderful. The only flaw is that the two protagonists grow too slowly and appear less often. They are still young children now, so the plot progress is very slow. It is expected to be a long story. I look forward to [sending my heart] and hope it will not be a trap.

Super Invincible is very, very, very beautiful. I would like to call it a sacred book. The writing style is very good and the literary talent is very good. It feels like a person who was born to read books. The writing is very, very, very good. The plot is also very well written. The family line of the Lin family is also very well written. The literary talent is really very good. Well, it is a literary talent that I have never had in 30 years of studying. The classical Chinese language is also very good, and the portrayal of each person is very good.

A rare masterpiece by a Red Mansion fan in Tomato. The brushstrokes are delicate and the characters are deeply drawn. They can accurately capture the characteristics of the characters without whitewashing or discrediting them. At the same time, they are also more suitable for completing the character designs that lacked roles in the original work. It's just that this article is written in too much detail, and the plot advances really slowly, which makes it even more painful to wait during the update phase. Ps: Every time Jinwu speaks, I have a weird feeling like a vision system [staring][staring][staring]

It looks good, everyone has a good side, please Jia Min and Lin Ruhai, please do well [laughs] It would be best for sister Lin to have parents

This book is well described. Daiyu is so cute, and the relationship with Lin Ruhai and Jia Min is so warm. The parents' love for their children is far-reaching, and it is really reflected in them. I hope their family will have a good ending. I love the author's writing so delicately [crying]

The perspective and writing style are very novel, and the characterization of the characters is very clever. Although I haven't seen the plot yet, the early foreshadowing is worth this score. I look forward to the author's subsequent chapters. How come there is such wonderful writing. . . . Teacher, teacher, how many Cao Xueqin did you eat in one meal with your character creation? Thousands of reds and a cave of beauty and sadness made my heart tremble. Everyone was trembling with fear, as if they were walking on thin ice in the abyss. After the second follow-up review, it became even better after we met.

The writing is really good, it's not the kind of mindless and cool writing, and it doesn't go out of its way to slander anyone. It's better than what many Red Mansion fans are writing now.

The writing style is very good, but I really can't imagine Lin Ruhai, Jia She and the rest of the group looking half-bald😇 It would be better if it was just a stand-alone story. When Baoyu appeared later, there was no crown for him to wear, and the girls' skirts no longer had any difference. They were all Qing Dynasty cheongsams. Daiyu and Yinreng were paired again, and they couldn't go back to the south to wear nice clothes.

The pace at the beginning is very slow and has little to do with the main male and female storyline, but the design is very three-dimensional. But it seemed really boring, and I wanted to give up several times, but finally I closed my eyes and flipped through the book. In the later stage, when the male and female protagonists slowly enter the main line and get to know each other, it becomes more interesting and more satisfying. The love between Lin Ruhai and Jia Min's parents is beautiful, the Lin family's prosperity is beautiful, and Daiyu's eldest daughter was raised particularly well and is beautiful. Overall, the quality is very high. The language, character control, and plot design are all a level above other Red Mansions fans. Even the plotting is very nb.

I probably started catching up on it from Chapter 100 onwards. Here are some of my thoughts on this book: 1. The writing style is considered to be very good among Tomato fans. The overall ancient atmosphere created is very good and will not make people feel out of place. 2. The overall pace of the novel is slow. After more than 200 chapters, it slowly begins to enter the main line of the original work. The pros and cons are obvious. Li Shi's novel is well laid out, and each character has ample space to express himself. The chapter that left a deep impression on me was probably the chapter where Aunt Zhao and Aunt Zhou talked about each other under the moonlight. Two characters who barely had much writing in the original novel took on different vitality in the author's writing. The disadvantage is that it may not be very friendly to impatient friends. I myself have wanted to abandon the article several times, but I always save it for a while and then reopen it. 3. The author's updates are fairly stable, and there has been no long interruption in updates. Although the quantity is not much, the quality is guaranteed. Considering that the popularity of the work may not be very high, I am very lucky that the author is willing to insist on updating. Be content and happy. 4. It is an ancient novel written by modern people for modern people. There is no plot about the concubine who is a concubine, and it is comfortable to watch without being noisy. 5. In the early stage, a lot of ink was devoted to Lin Hai, Jia Min and his wife. Later on, Daiyu's role will gradually increase. Currently there are far more family lines than love lines. To be precise, there is no trace of the love line. In the end, it can make up for my regrets about Dai Yu's original work. I like reading it. 6. The two worldviews are very harmonious. Although sometimes it is inexplicable to see some Manchu names and Manchu surnames popping out of the mouths of the original characters, it is completely acceptable considering the basic worldview setting of this book. 7. I feel that the dialogue between the male protagonist Daiyu and Jinwu is a bit childish (?), But it is acceptable considering the age settings of the characters. After all, we are not human, so we cannot ask for so much. 8. It can be seen that the author respects every character in the original work. There is no blind embarrassment or whitewashing without explaining the reasons. It is probably speculated that the author should be an emotionally stable adult who can empathize and understand different characters. Friends who have strong likes and dislikes should watch with caution, as they may accidentally step on something interesting. All in all, the follow-up should be completed slowly if nothing unexpected happens. Among the Tomato Red House fanfics I have read, it is one of the best.

Anyway, for me, it's an epic masterpiece among Red Mansions fans. It has almost no shortcomings and the writing is good. The character design is not OOC (finally there is a normal author!!! Mrs. Wang is no longer written as a vulgar village woman who speaks foul language, Jia Baoyu is not a stereotyped nymphomaniac who can't speak words, Xue Baochai is no longer written as a villain who has been completely good at calculations since she was a child, and Jia She, Jia Zheng, Jia Zhen and others are no longer written as inexplicable dormant forces.) I saw someone complaining that the story line is too long. There is too much space about parental love, and the male and female protagonists only start to interact in a large space after one or two hundred chapters. In fact, I think this is quite good, because the original work of Dream of Red Mansions itself does not have much description of parental love. We read the fandom to give Daiyu a different life in another world. Describing parental love is also a way of writing. Some people like to watch Daiyu pull up weeping willows upside down. Most of the opening chapters are in the timeline of entering the Jia Mansion or later. There are also those who like to watch Daiyu try her best to create a life of happiness and longevity even before she was born.

Oops, it's good to read, but the front part is really hard to understand. It's too obscure, and there are no paragraphs to explain it, so I read it intermittently. Maybe it will be better after going to the main line of Red Mansion. Then I hope that the father-son relationship between Kangxi and the prince can be good. I had this dream twice [laughing and crying]. I dreamed about Baocheng and his father's daily interactions, and my heart melted. I hope our prince can take charge of his own affairs as soon as possible

Not bad, the writing is very good, group portrait writing. The plot of the male and female protagonists may advance a bit slowly, but other plots are very compact.

Suddenly I thought of looking at the ratings of this book, and found that it was not very high, so I gave it a rating to show my appreciation (otherwise I am afraid that one day the author will find that no one will read it, hh). At first, I thought this book was quite interesting. Although Yin Reng and other things in the front seemed a bit dramatic, I felt that the combination was quite good. Even if this point is removed, it would still be very harmonious. The logic is self-consistent, the plot is reasonable, and the writing style is quite interesting. Damn it, it's not popular. Hope it lasts until the end. Recommend.

It's nice to watch, delicious, and cute. But the plot progress is too slow. It's over 250 chapters and there are two kids. There are too many flowers, birds, and dragons, which is kind of obsessive, but it's very cute. I hope Yinglian can be found soon.

My mother, you gave me fine chaff! ! !

Tomato, what's the matter with you? Why does it only show a score of 6.6? I can't imagine it's a Tomato work. Although I'm too illiterate, it's a bit difficult to read, but it's really good... I'm really looking forward to the follow-up and hope the author can give everyone a good ending TT

The writing is very detailed, and everyone has written something, not simply skipped over. I am impatient and have watched eight or ninety times of it (sometimes I have ignored it, and even after watching it, I can't remember or understand [face covering]). I only wrote it when I was six or seven years old. The palace really wanted more people to see Daiyu's talent and just wanted to keep praising it.

It's very interesting, it fits the original work, and it's not limited to describing a single character. It's like a classic and has a lot of ink about each character. Of course, my favorites are Daiyu and Taizi, they are two very cute little ones. Little Golden Crow is a cute little Yue Lao with a short head. I look forward to the follow-up development!

I like good-looking books. I originally didn't like Qing Dynasty elements, but this article is very big, but round and well-shaped. The writing style is so good that it leaves a lasting impression on my lips and teeth when I read it. It also has an original flavor. I often feel that the author has studied history and literature carefully [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It has the characteristics of the original work. It feels like another possibility of Sister Lin. The text is very comfortable to read and very cultural. The thinking of Sister Lin described in the book is very subtle and profound. I feel that Sister Lin really wanted to do this when she was growing up. The characters are very smart.

I have the highest respect for every author who writes a long novel seriously [like][like][like][like]

It's great to watch, but I can't get enough of it. It feels like it's a long novel. There are many and vivid characters, and the threads are all connected. I really can't get enough of it. I can't wait to finish it in one sitting [Like]

Why do you get such a score? It's so beautiful. It's my first time reading this kind of subject matter. The author's writing skills are not new at all. There are some unfamiliar words in some places. I have to look up how to pronounce hh.

A masterpiece, no need to say more Can you let me wake up and find that 100 chapters have been updated? [I'm about to cry] It makes my heart feel weak [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very well written although very slow

The level is very, very high

Very good book