Dream of the Red Chamber: How to Stop the Crimson Pearl Immortal Herb from Dying

The teacher is so powerful, he is like the Red Mansion version of Emperor Kangxi, no worse than Er Yuehe. I really doubt that this is a book that can be seen on the Internet.

Super Invincible is very, very, very beautiful. I would like to call it a sacred book. The writing style is very good and the literary talent is very good. It feels like a person who was born to read books. The writing is very, very, very good. The plot is also very well written. The family line of the Lin family is also very well written. The literary talent is really very good. Well, it is a literary talent that I have never had in 30 years of studying. The classical Chinese language is also very good, and the portrayal of each person is very good.

The writing is so good, the wording, writing, logic, etc. Are all very classical. This book is actually serialized on Tomato???

The writing is very good, the characters are well drawn, the small characters and supporting characters are well and logically portrayed, and there are no brainless black characters. The overall story is wonderful. The only flaw is that the two protagonists grow too slowly and appear less often. They are still young children now, so the plot progress is very slow. It is expected to be a long story. I look forward to [sending my heart] and hope it will not be a trap.

A rare masterpiece by a Red Mansion fan in Tomato. The brushstrokes are delicate and the characters are deeply drawn. They can accurately capture the characteristics of the characters without whitewashing or discrediting them. At the same time, they are also more suitable for completing the character designs that lacked roles in the original work. It's just that this article is written in too much detail, and the plot advances really slowly, which makes it even more painful to wait during the update phase. Ps: Every time Jinwu speaks, I have a weird feeling like a vision system [staring][staring][staring]

This book is well described. Daiyu is so cute, and the relationship with Lin Ruhai and Jia Min is so warm. The parents' love for their children is far-reaching, and it is really reflected in them. I hope their family will have a good ending. I love the author's writing so delicately 😢

It looks good, everyone has a good side, please Jia Min and Lin Ruhai, please do well 😄 It would be best for sister Lin to have parents

The perspective and writing style are very novel, and the characterization of the characters is very clever. Although I haven't seen the plot yet, the early foreshadowing is worth this score. I look forward to the author's subsequent chapters. How come there is such wonderful writing. . . . Teacher, teacher, how many Cao Xueqin did you eat in one meal with your character creation? Thousands of reds and a cave of beauty and sadness made my heart tremble. Everyone was trembling with fear, as if they were walking on thin ice in the abyss. After the second follow-up review, it became even better after we met.

The writing style is very good, but I really can't imagine Lin Ruhai, Jia She and the rest of the group looking half-bald😇 It would be better if it was just a stand-alone story. When Baoyu appeared later, there was no crown for him to wear, and the girls' skirts no longer had any difference. They were all Qing Dynasty cheongsams. Daiyu and Yinreng were paired again, and they couldn't go back to the south to wear nice clothes.

Anyway, for me, it's an epic masterpiece among Red Mansions fans. It has almost no shortcomings and the writing is good. The character design is not OOC (finally there is a normal author!!! Mrs. Wang is no longer written as a vulgar village woman who speaks foul language, Jia Baoyu is not a stereotyped nymphomaniac who can't speak words, Xue Baochai is no longer written as a villain who has been completely good at calculations since she was a child, and Jia She, Jia Zheng, Jia Zhen and others are no longer written as inexplicable dormant forces.) I saw someone complaining that the story line is too long. There is too much space about parental love, and the male and female protagonists only start to interact in a large space after one or two hundred chapters. In fact, I think this is quite good, because the original work of Dream of Red Mansions itself does not have much description of parental love. We read the fandom to give Daiyu a different life in another world. Describing parental love is also a way of writing. Some people like to watch Daiyu pull up weeping willows upside down. Most of the opening chapters are in the timeline of entering the Jia Mansion or later. There are also those who like to watch Daiyu try her best to create a life of happiness and longevity even before she was born.