I Created a Copy of the Game in the World of Comics

Personally, I think it's okay, but in the fifth chapter, I really recommend changing the double standard of the male protagonist. In the previous chapter, I just opened the dungeon and didn't care about the lives of passers-by. However, in the fifth episode, it was said that the male protagonist saved Qinzi because of his conscience. It was really a double standard. It might as well be changed to because the male protagonist thought she was cute. Or maybe she gave him money to save her before, and it seems normal. You see, half of the bad reviews in your comment section are basically because of the double-standard behavior of the male protagonist. You can just change this paragraph in the fifth chapter, and it will not affect the subsequent development. At least it will not poison new readers in the future.

It's a lovely read. The heroine, Kotoko, is also very vividly written, but there doesn't seem to be the saucy language in the original novel.

It's okay for now, after all, it's only part of it. There are many female protagonists, and I am one of my favorite themes.

So far, it's okay, just plain, no ups and downs. I want to ask, is the copy only for Diablo? [Smile]

A very interesting story

It's worth watching. If you haven't played Diablo 2, just treat him as a career system and it won't affect the viewing experience.

The writing is very good, with an 8-point level. Big boost to the author!