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Oh my God, who knows? I like Dumbledore a lot, but the female protagonist feels a sense of redemption after reading this book [cry][cry][cry][cry] Finally there is a book with a heroine with strong leadership skills who is going to be the Minister of Magic and not the third generation Dark Lord to engage in feudal rule [cry][cry][cry] The writing is good, the characters are well grasped, the heroine is a guiding lover, gentle and sassy! !

I finally found Dumbledore's original female bg, yes, it's a beautiful thing. Goddess, you must keep writing and writing [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's tied, it's so good, it's rare to see a Dumbledore BG novel, the ones I read before were all about GGAD. I really like Dumbledore. When I read HP, I liked almost every Gryffindor, except for the mouse. But every time I look for books, there are basically not many good descriptions of the Lion House. Every time I see Dumbledore, he always takes the blame. The iron triangle is reckless and ignorant, the predators bully the weak, and then madly worship the noble, elegant and noble chief of Slytherin. I am tired of reading it. A normal person with no obvious bias towards other colleges is really super invincible and rare. The most important thing is that he has CP and a love line! I don't want to fall in love in real life, but I do CP every day! Every time I am forced to pursue novels without cp, I still feel a little regretful. Anyway, this book is super good-looking. Wei Xi is gentle and strong. She is firmly rooted in it like an anchor. I feel completely safe when I see her. I hope Xiaoha can be happier this time. I will continue to pursue it, so keep up the good work!

It's a very interesting novel. The first time I read it was Dumbledore, and it wasn't from GGAD. I thought it would be embarrassing, but it turned out to be quite interesting. I hope the author can keep writing.

The heroine is so charming, and she and Albus are soul mates. Whether it is career or love, she has a very clear goal, is willing to work hard for it, and walks unswervingly on the right path to achieve her glorious life. She is transparent enough and knows exactly what she wants, so she decisively abandons those entanglements and hesitations and goes straight to her destination. She is a natural leader. She can become a legend no matter where she is in time and space. Everyone in the future will feel honored to be in the same school as her.

It's so beautiful. I personally really like this kind of book where the protagonists shine, just like I participate in their fascinating experiences that shine like gold! It's a very charming and high-quality fanfic, I like it!

I like it so much, I finally have Deng Xiao gb... I really like and admire the heroine. I used to chase people like Deng Xiao for three years. I studied him little by little and was certified to see through him. Then I couldn't help but start slandering him, until finally he couldn't bear it and disappeared overnight. I really I really admire that the heroine can not take advantage of a person's psychological flaws after fully understanding him, but guide and persist peacefully and uprightly, without any negative control. How many people can insist on not controlling while being able to completely guide the other person? They all have the great qualities of Hufflepuff.

Let me ask you, is this rating reasonable? I think this is a super nice HP article, the author's writing style and concept are very good! The character design is also very good. I feel that I have completely fallen in love with the heroine. The creation of this character has really made me accept the love that spans a hundred years. I couldn't accept it before. The writing is so good! It would be better if the author adds more updates hahahahahahaha

The heroine is a born leader! Great guiding lover! The top genius who understands human nature! A savior who solves problems at their root. I have never forcibly intervened in other people's lives, I respect others, and I have never subjected anyone to moral judgment! Have a sparkling personality! He is a genius on the same level as Dumbledore! The love between two people that spans time is so delicious!

I was attracted by the introduction, but I didn't expect to see a BG fanfic about Albus Dumbledore. I decided to watch it instead of criticizing GGAD. I stayed up late for two days and watched it. It was really good to read. The heroine is very smart. I feel that the heroine has always been involved in the plot, instead of being a bystander like the HP fanfics I watched before. I also searched for other Dumbledore fanfics, and without exception, almost all of them were about Grindelwald. I couldn't find a replacement for this book [crying] Please ask the author to update it ten times a day [crying]

I really like Dada's novels. I recommend Deng Xiao, but there are really few Deng Xiao's Dream Girl novels, and there are really many GGAD novels. Although they are official dramas, I hate corruption and don't like Grindelwald. Dada's writing is really good. I love reading it [sending my heart], I hope it won't stop updating, please [I'm about to cry]

To be honest, as someone who loves GG AD, I think this book is really well written. This is the first time I have seen a book with Dumbledore. The author of the older version is really very imaginative. There are very few books specifically about Dumbledore. At least this is the first one I have seen so far. Overall, I like it very much. It is very beautiful [Blow kiss]

First time writing a long review! First of all, this book is really good-looking, but it obviously belongs to the type with obvious bias. (First of all, I've read a lot of fan fiction, from all IPs, but I'm not very good at reading the original novels or comics. However, I really like to watch the video analysis of the original novels... So I won't judge based on the content, and I don't have any likes or dislikes for the characters) Advantages: The idea of ​​the article is very clear, and the author's writing style is also excellent. The key is to grasp the character's personality very well (this is almost the most important point in fan writing), and often writes some sentences that will hit the heart. Disadvantages: In fact, it shouldn't be called shortcomings, because everyone's understanding and preferences are different. Objectively speaking, the style of this article is really "outlined". If the words filled in are flesh and blood, then it is obviously a bit dry (which is not to say that it is wrong to be detailed and comprehensive, because it is really not easy to condense so many original books into a specific timeline and just a few dozen chapters). Moreover, there are many perspectives, the scenes are fragmented, and many different stories are interspersed in the middle. The situation at the time point is used as a supplement (the chapters about Vichy's actions in the Order of the Phoenix are very obvious). It doesn't mean that it is difficult to read, because my browsing speed is still very fast, and I don't particularly process this additional information, so it doesn't matter to me (because it was only after reading more that I discovered that the author had used many short sentences to cover some omitted content). Another point is that the author's writing is a bit light, and if it's more popular, it's a bit streamlined. However, I also like this light feeling, so it still suits my taste. Let's give you a little more impression of the emotional line. Wei Xi is really capable hahaha. I also like the atmosphere between the two of them getting along. It's very natural. From what I've seen so far, their relationship line is perfect. Generally speaking, the original intention of fan writing is to rewrite the life of your favorite characters, but once original characters are added, how to balance the roles and relationships between the characters is a very important issue. Finally, I would like to praise the author's hard work and love, because there are indeed very few authors who can match my brainwaves. However, for most readers, the shortcomings I mentioned above should be considered serious problems. Author, you can listen selectively or continue writing according to your own ideas, but don't be fooled🥹Thank you, you are really excellent🥹

Waiting for the update, I discovered it last night. I watched it at 2 o'clock in the middle of the night. It was really interesting. The relationship between the heroine and Deng Duoduo is interesting and warm. I can see through the love between the heroine of Deng Duoduo and Deng Duoduo who trusts the heroine. The two people's ideals, personalities, and abilities are very well matched. What's going on with the ratings? Help, this Dumbledore bg is so good, so good, so good! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author's writing style is very good. A few sentences highlight the strong and gentle core of the heroine. The writing is particularly charming! One of my favorite HP heroines. The story between Dumbledore and the heroine is a little sad, lovers separated by a hundred years [crying]

It is a completely masterpiece. The warm, inclusive and sympathetic atmosphere between Vichy and Al is so good... The teacher's description is close to the original work, the logic is clear, and each character is vivid and vivid. It is a really perfect work.

It's really beautiful. The author's writing is very good. You'll be immersed in the content as you read it. It's also the book that made me fall in love with the two heroes. The heroine makes me feel very powerful. When I see her appear, I think that's great! When she comes, she will definitely be fine. It is written by a really great author, because I have read many novels that write about two strong characters, but often at the end of the writing, the authors seem to forget this setting and blindly give highlights to the male protagonist, while the female protagonist relies on the help of the male protagonist to get the highlights. And I have read this novel from beginning to end. The female protagonist is strong. Even if she just stands there, she can make people feel at ease. Highly recommend! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

A very special, very special, very special book, not only in the plot, but also in the narrative style. All in all, it's like the sense of adventure throughout The Adventures of Tom Sawyer and the sense of madness throughout The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It has a very impressive style.

It is rare to see GGAD being dismantled, and the cp is written by Dumbledore. It's really delicious. It belongs to the unpopular male protagonist, but it's really delicious~

It's very interesting. I feel like I won't see anything like this in the future. The heroine is very powerful and she and Dumbledore are true soul mates. In fact, you can feel the author's love (admiration) for Dumbledore from his words. But why did the author stop updating? [Crying] I am definitely angry. [Angry][angry][angry] Finally updated [crying] [crying] [crying] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] Author I love you😘 Author I love you😘

Let me talk about it first. I recommend it to those who watch the original work, the kind of real original work party. Non-originalists can also read it, but it will be a lot less fun, but without that fun, this book is also an absolute first-rate Harry Potter book. This book is first-class. Firstly, it has the writing style of the original work (which I hope to maintain). Secondly, the speculation about the characters can be said to be absolutely top-notch among fans. I am writing this first, hoping that everyone will fall into the trap, and then watch the advertisements to support the author together.

It's a fairy product! ! ! ! ! The heroine is a guiding lover! ! ! ! She was dominant in her relationship with Dumbledore. And the role of the heroine is very, very well done! Powerful, gentle and very charming! ! ! !

This is the Dumbledore bg fanfic that I can read so far on Tomato [like][like][like]. The name actually put me off a bit at first. After reading two more chapters, I found that the author's writing style and the portrayal of the heroine were both to my liking. The heroine is a decisive leader and a charming person. I felt it was easy to fall in love with the heroine, she deserves to be loved. Who wouldn't like a heroine like this? The relationship between her and Dumbledore was also very difficult, like two meteors spiraling forward in the same orbit at the same time, with their own direction and tacit understanding. This is love (super loud)! [Love] [Love] The author's wife is simply the god of our cold circle! I think that even if one day the author's wife no longer wants to write, the words you have written now are enough for me to miss this time and to maintain my enthusiasm for this cold circle. (Of course I still hope to finish it, they deserve a happy ending [shy])

The writing is comfortable to read. The amazing encounter at the beginning and the fun of age reversal attracted me instantly. From then until the Triwizard Tournament, there is no reference to the main plot and no conflict of events. It is too dull and may lose readers. Fortunately, the Triwizard Tournament was exciting and perfectly presented the image of the protagonist without deviating from the main line or diluting Harry's highlights. The emotional entanglement between the protagonist and Dumbledore is a major attraction. The onlookers are constantly adding fuel to the fire and making random thoughts, which is particularly interesting. It is rare for a protagonist to get along well with Dumbledore. He is always condescending and presses forward step by step, trying to penetrate the avoidance on his face and touch the desire in his heart; it is not the preference for juniors or the connivance of naughty people in the popular routine (I am really tired of seeing it) After that, his language skills are also quite excellent, with sudden cold humor, smooth and silky scene transitions, applauding metaphors, and thought-provoking philosophical sentences. I will not allow a masterpiece to be published without applause. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏 🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Move a small stool and wait for the next step.

The author writes very well, and handles the emotions of the characters very delicately. I am surprised that Tomato has such a good HP novel. I can only say that I am lucky that I did not miss it easily because it is not famous now. I recommend that anyone who likes HP novels should read it [][][][]

This story is so fascinating! ! ! And I prefer strong women as protagonists. A female leader like a heroine who is intelligent, calm, gentle and firm is really my favorite type of protagonist! Not to mention the love line with Deng Duoduo. The hypocrisy and pride of the INFJ in him was very obvious in the original book, so he was the Riddler from beginning to end. But in this book, someone can actually make him speak truly candid words. I suck. I saw that the author said it would definitely be finished, so I looked forward to it! ! ! I hope the author will come back soon and update soon! ! (Bang gongs and drums in the author's ears

It's good to read, very good to read, super invincible, but this book is about the relationship between Dumbledore and Grindelwald, so don't read it if you don't like it. The protagonist went through time travel due to some things. He was originally one year older than Dumbledore, but after experiencing time travel, he is 97 years younger than Dumbledore. If you don't like it, don't enter. If you don't like reading, you can exit in the upper left corner. Don't scold this book because I particularly like [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

I met an amazing person when I was young, so I will never forget it Rare subject matter, but beautifully written It's the regret of sudden separation when we were young and passionately in love. It's the lover whose heart is still beating when we meet again a hundred years later I trust you more than I trust myself, dear Will Will is a true guiding lover, she taught Albus to love himself

Tied! In fact, this book has appeared on my recommendation page many times, but I originally clicked in and took a look and found that the cp was DD, so I didn't read it because the official recommendation was GGAD. Although I don't agree with it very much, I will not go against the official recommendation. And no matter what I say, DD is a very old novel. I can't imagine that he will experience the feeling of love at this age. However, this novel combines the young DD and the current DD very well. It doesn't feel too abrupt, and the emotional line is very natural. Anyway, I like it very much [send heart][send heart][send heart][laugh]

I like it very much. The characterization is perfect. I hope it can be the ending of he (｡ì _ í｡). The love between Albus and Sylvia was once separated by the river of time, but fortunately they were linked together again in the end. Words are magical. It's great that their story continues. This is love. Sylvia makes a pool of stagnant water flow again, and the suspended past resumes writing a new future.