Traveling into the B game world, she relied on the mobile phone system to take over the redemption mission - to save four people who belong to different time and space: the young general, the mermaid prince, the warlord of the Republic of China and the immortal cultivator. After working hard to complete the task, she finally returned to reality, but the screen of her phone suddenly lit up. Four pairs of eyes looked at her through the screen, and their voices were as cold as iron: "You can't escape."
The next second, the screen shattered, and four figures stepped through the dimension and appeared in front of her.
Reader comments
I thought it was great. It was the first story that attracted me. The last two male protagonists were also very good, as well as Lan and the female protagonist. In fact, I also thought the female protagonist was the Holy Mother at first, but later I found out that it was not the case. Coming to the story of the heroine's world, I'm looking forward to Shura Field. (I didn't read it very well, but a girl's name was mentioned in it. She probably wasn't the person that the Immortal had liked before, but it seemed that the Immortal felt guilty about her.) Finally, I hope to write more about Shura Field [making faces] [making faces] [making faces]
Oops, I just discovered that the cover of the novel features four male protagonists [making faces] [making faces] [making faces], but the female protagonist is missing.
It's very interesting to watch, and the plot develops very quickly. It doesn't drag on. I hope I can pick it up in the end. After all, the main heroine only has four roots.
It looks great. Please write it well.
Super pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Very nice! Come on! ! !
It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it
I would like to give you some advice. The distribution layout may be too long. I suggest you break up the dialogue more often. The plot is okay. Then I want to watch Shura Field [Blowing Kiss].
I thought it was great. It was the first story that attracted me. The last two male protagonists were also very good, as well as Lan and the female protagonist. In fact, I also thought the female protagonist was the Holy Mother at first, but later I found out that it was not the case. Coming to the story of the heroine's world, I'm looking forward to Shura Field. (I didn't read it very well, but a girl's name was mentioned in it. She probably wasn't the person that the Immortal had liked before, but it seemed that the Immortal felt guilty about her.) Finally, I hope to write more about Shura Field [making faces] [making faces] [making faces] Oops, I just discovered that the cover of the novel features four male protagonists [making faces] [making faces] [making faces], but the female protagonist is missing.
It's very interesting to watch, and the plot develops very quickly. It doesn't drag on. I hope I can pick it up in the end. After all, the main heroine only has four roots.
It looks great. Please write it well.
Super pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Very nice! Come on! ! !
It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it
I would like to give you some advice. The distribution layout may be too long. I suggest you break up the dialogue more often. The plot is okay. Then I want to watch Shura Field [Blowing Kiss].