[Multiple Female Leads] [Love Triangle] [Slow Burn] [System]
Noah, a trainee copyist at the Royal Capital Academy, unexpectedly acquires an ancient scroll that lets him inspect other people’s attributes and exchange for items. But all his female classmates seem to have some serious issues?!
[Name: Selena Qingwo]
So it really is her. The Qingwo family is one of the most powerful ancient houses in the royal capital. No wonder she has such a commanding presence. Noah’s heart pounded as he kept reading.
[Intelligence: 8 (Far wiser and more perceptive than her peers, she can easily see through most lies and disguises.)]
[Physique: 7 (Long years of aristocratic physical training have given her excellent stamina and flexibility.)]
[Beauty: 9 (A masterpiece carefully sculpted by the gods. Her beauty is a powerful weapon in its own right.)]
[Special Traits: A cool, imperious desire for control; an almost ritualistic way of expressing affection. Rumor has it she likes to make her partner “submit,” even using a symbolic collar to bind them together.]
Someone save me!
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Excellent work of fantasy literature
Okay, the author writes well, why doesn't anyone read it?