Distant Star: Perseus

Support me, Yuanxingxing is still quite niche.

The writing is pretty good, there's nothing major wrong with it, it's just that it's too little and not enough to read.

From the current point of view, this book and the other book "Starting from Space Junk" have chosen two paths. This book focuses on more modular forces, while "Starting from Space..." Focuses more on the interactive calculations of several forces. This book only needs the author to focus on the interaction of new forces, more types of battleships, and the description of void battles to bring readers a sense of freshness. At the same time, there must be some calculations, but don't be too outsmarted. Just like what Harvest Mosquito said, it's a big chaos among the grass-roots teams.

Very good. There are no serious problems so far. The author is also very active and the discussion in the comment area is friendly. Overall, this book has high potential.

Our fleet of pig's feet is gone, and the fleet of pig's feet on the other side is still traveling through the universe. This is why it flies so slowly without star gates and jump devices. The plot of this governor is too ordinary. The protagonist now believes what others say, and these AIs should normally listen to the protagonist and are not personal. After all, the protagonist is an official high-ranking official and usually has records. I feel that the latter part is too ordinary. Let's see how it is written after the fleet arrives.

It's well written. So far, the writing and plot are okay. Come on.

Not bad, I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs

Very nice and detailed. For a book with such a large scope and influence, if you keep writing it, the number of words will not be short. How many words do you plan to write? Moreover, the update speed needs to be increased to two to three chapters a day. Another book with the same theme is read by many people. This updated number of chapters is also one of the main reasons why so many people read that book.

I hope there will be space navigation and super battleships in the future

Is this timeline hundreds of years or decades after the collapse? 🤔 The Fourteenth Legion has already become the overlord in hundreds of years, right?