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It feels like there is something different. It is different from the fan fiction I read. I feel that the author has something and the control is good. The plot is probably about rebirth. I left Handong to develop. There is no need for revenge or revenge. It feels normal. I also went to Beijing to develop again. After a few chapters, it was filtered and I immediately entered the main plot. It was okay. I also felt that I had a good grasp of the dialogue between people.

The first two chapters shaved the bones cleanly and thoroughly! Just the first two chapters of the tomato novel can make you a god

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupted and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why tomatoes are strong is because they have inherited the etiquette and skills of their ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why the great masters in the palace can have tens of thousands of royalties and are not harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!

I didn't expect that this fanfic with a score of 5.7 Would be more readable than a score of 9.5? So rating is not the only criterion!

Don't talk too much, don't nag too much

A very good book, a very new idea, such a nominal work needs more praise!

It's still very beautiful, highly recommended, a different angle.

Good-looking, love to see lots of hair

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The style is different from ordinary fan fiction, okay

I hope the monkeys are wiped out completely

The first two chapters are interesting, and the extra chapter is also good. I might consider following the extra line.

This book is well written.

The extra chapter is very interesting and touching.

Super good, with the character of Zhou Meisen [like][like][like][like]

Just because the protagonist is from Suzhou, I gave it five stars.

The writing style is mature and sophisticated, and the writing is smooth and natural!

The author writes well, it's very interesting