Whales Roaring in the Abyss, Practice in the Doomsday

Finished reading Chapter 48. It's quite good-looking. It's a rare protagonist who is a demon cultivator. There are no complicated conflicts, such as love, hate, and hatred. I personally like it. However, the plot is a bit monotonous. There are less descriptions about the protagonist and more about the content of the copy. I still hope to strengthen the shaping of the protagonist and the description of relatives and friends. After all, it is all about growth and there is no room for relief, which will make it a bit boring.

There are no obvious bugs so far. Although the protagonist's personality is not very distinct, there is little interaction with other characters. But for a demon cultivator protagonist, this is not a problem. And I just started writing, come on. The future is promising

So far, it seems that it is still a very good novel, but I feel that the author is a bit lacking in the numerical value of whales. It is only 50 tons at 30 meters, and the blue whale has exceeded 180 tons in length. Generally speaking, a 30-meter carnivorous creature should have exceeded 80 tons. For example, the Titanosaurus, which is more than 20 meters long, is already more than 60 tons. As for the protagonist's Golden Core stage, 30 meters is only 50 tons. You can increase the value a little higher, about 200 tons at 30 meters. This is almost ՞˶･֊･˶՞, but the author has already written it very well. Please don't mind my personal opinion.

It's good-looking, the author's writing is good, unlimited flow + demon cultivation, it seems that the plot is mainly written in the dungeon, and the plot of the dungeon is also innovative and full of humanistic feelings (it's really strange, the demon is more like a human than a human), but many of the current dungeons are all human actions, I am still looking forward to the protagonist's demon body, but I really feel that it is difficult to write Also, there is little description of the main world. They are either practicing in seclusion or eating and drinking. Other players basically meet in dungeons, and they don't even have private chats after adding friends (what an introverted little whale). I am still looking forward to the player ecology of the main world. The group is stable, and the protagonist is completely like a traveling whale, cruising the sky.

I really look good! ! ! The author's imagination is so great, and the unfolding plot feels particularly exciting and reasonable! The key point is that the heroine is a demon cultivator, and she doesn't like to help others. She focuses on herself, and when she encounters danger, she can decisively withdraw and ignore others. This is so rare! ! ! It's really good-looking, and every copy is super interesting! It's just that there are too few updates.

Six-star praise ⭐️, very pure, original content, the heroine's design is flawless, and my thoughts after watching it are [Awe of nature! Although the heroine is a monster, she is very adaptable, smart, eager to learn, and has strong execution ability.

The plot concept is very good, the content of ♂ in the whale group is relatively low, and there are many women in daily dungeons. The author has a sense of love for women but not much, but it is still a good article. The newly opened Martial Arts Changsheng has more female group awareness than this one. He can see the situation of similar people and will help to change it. It is not bad.

This is the first time I read an article from the perspective of a demon cultivator, which is quite interesting. The content of the copy is also innovative and very nice. But I would like to make a small suggestion to the author. Every time the exercises and skills in the panel content appear, it is the complete version. This seems too redundant and affects the perception. If it appears later, you only need to show the name.

Very special article! ! The author is so good at writing fighting, does it feel like reading a martial arts novel? (I don't read martial arts novels, I just feel) The heroine is a particularly ambitious whale and also a smart whale. She's so cute!

It's rare to find a good-looking post-apocalyptic upgrade series with a heroine who is still a demon cultivator.

The plot is compact and the language is concise, which makes it more enjoyable to watch.

Very cool. This is the first Mugen-ryu that I have read that is developed from the perspective of a demon cultivator. It is very well written and retains the part of being a demon so that we can see the growth of the heroine. Big cheers. The writing is very beautiful, even if it is equal, it is not enough.

It's very nice to watch, and the copy is quite interesting, but I feel like the protagonist is gone before he has fully grown up 😂 The protagonist's bloodline has not transformed, he only gained a trace of Kunpeng's origin and later cultivation level, and his Yuanying has not yet reached a powerful standard. After all, there are so many Yuanyings in the real world of immortality like dogs, and they are everywhere. Looking forward to a sequel.

It's particularly beautiful. I didn't expect the rating to be so low. I participated in a survival game with the background of cultivating immortals to improve my strength. The game is more of a horror genre. The author's writing is very good. The heroine is a lone wolf from beginning to end. Although there are only a few hundred thousand words, the content is concise and concise. There is no unnecessary nonsense. It is very beautiful. I highly recommend it. Although it is not a female-oriented novel, there are no degrading words in the whole novel, and there are no disgusting settings and supporting characters. It is very interesting.

It's so beautiful, I highly recommend it! I like this kind of CP-free and powerful one.

Super pretty! High quality grain!

Super good-looking, and the female-to-male ratio is okay too

It's so beautiful, it's really hearty. The only drawback is that there are too few. I hope there will be more [Sending Hearts]

Okay, okay, the pace is pretty fast, this is the battle that's fun

The killer whale heroine is powerful! There is no entanglement of love and hate, the heroine practices, plays, learns, and becomes stronger. The copy is not cliche, but has new ideas, and the plot is compact without being watery. See the world from the perspective of a demon cultivator, a unique scenery

Nice. A rare masterpiece of tomatoes. Use refined words. The heroine is a demon cultivator. There is only the pursuit of supreme power in his eyes. Love love that no one cares about. Loved it. The author keeps up the good work. 😍😍😍😍😍😍

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, but it's a little lacking.

Beautiful, the heroine is great

Nice! ! No one has good works

Although this is a pretty good Zhutian game novel, the setting of the protagonist being a demon cultivator is quite novel.

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It looks good, and I personally think the author's writing style is also very good.

The author would like to give you a big boost for the update. This novel is my favorite recently.

It's so good. It's the best fantasy novel I've read in recent years. I still have a few chapters left and I can't bear to read it. I highly recommend it.

Very good, I like the heroine's character very much, and the plot progress is also good.