Ancient fantasy, rebirth, supernatural beings, strong alliances, HE
Core attractions: the hidden and passionate forbidden love between two powerful male protagonists, subverting the traditional world view setting, interlocking suspense puzzles, ultimate pulling and redemption, and thrilling battle scenes.
Reader comments
The story is okay. Of the 418,000 words, 250,000 words are repetitive descriptions. There are too many adjectives. What the extreme, crazy. The author wants Ling Zhao to show that he is strong in combat and has a cold and crazy personality, so he keeps using a lot of adjectives over and over again. It looks so tiring [awkward laugh]. Especially when I listened to a chapter this morning about saving Ling Zhao, it felt very familiar. When I recalled that the same description had appeared before, the whole chapter was about fighting, running, and rescuing people. The repetitive descriptions were almost the same. It was very similar to AI. It would be much better if the repeated descriptions were removed.
The plot advances quickly without any delay, the two protagonists have strong tension, and the author's writing skills are very good.
The story is okay. Of the 418,000 words, 250,000 words are repetitive descriptions. There are too many adjectives. What the extreme, crazy. The author wants Ling Zhao to show that he is strong in combat and has a cold and crazy personality, so he keeps using a lot of adjectives over and over again. It looks so tiring [awkward laugh]. Especially when I listened to a chapter this morning about saving Ling Zhao, it felt very familiar. When I recalled that the same description had appeared before, the whole chapter was about fighting, running, and rescuing people. The repetitive descriptions were almost the same. It was very similar to AI. It would be much better if the repeated descriptions were removed.
The plot advances quickly without any delay, the two protagonists have strong tension, and the author's writing skills are very good.