During his first time travel, Wang Mian came to the Ultra Showa Universe, but turned into a monster and went offline at the speed of light.
During the second time traveling, Wang Mian came to the digital world, but without a digital partner.
However, as a time traveler who traveled twice a day, Wang Mian got his plug-in, the power of fantasy, during his first time traveling. With this ability, he strived to develop and become bigger and stronger.
"Is that really what you think?"
"Say any more and I'll let you evolve into a poop beast!"
Reader comments
Tomato is one of the few digital novels with a conscience and one of the rare Ultra novels with the Ultra spirit.
Summary: Personally, I feel that the plot has almost no key shortcomings, except that it lacks the priority of God's perspective, and most of the characters are well-shaped.
If possible, you can add in the follow-up what the Molecule Beast, Chang Hengxing, and Vampire Beast did during this period, and what impact they had on the original plot.
The writing is okay but the plot is a bit difficult to comment on. Nothing related to Ultra should be inserted. By the way, the title of the book could even be changed to The Villains Defeated in Those Years. It's good that the protagonist accepts the villain
Yes, it has its shortcomings, but it reads smoothly and won't be too dramatic.
This kind of rare novel should not be too demanding, support viewing, and give the author motivation. Come on⛽＾0＾~
Well, very good, very interesting. Summary, 1. The protagonist has Ultra spirit. 2, 2. The protagonist has his own atmosphere and does not completely follow the main plot. 3. The overall planning is excellent. 4. I want to know if the protagonist can turn into the super space dinosaur Zeton and elbow the ultimate body in the later stage.
This is a rare Digimon fanfic, maybe it's because I'm slow to react, I don't see any poison so far, please give it a good review, please keep updating.
Yes, the content is very novel and the creativity is good. Except for the first chapter, which has a small flaw, there are no problems. The writing is very good. This novel (≧∇≦*)
The ending of the first volume is still very touching, come on!
What a novel novel, very interesting to read
Awesome, so pretty! Great author, come on! ! ! ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ✩
Very nice, a rare high-quality Digimon fanfic
Not bad. If it weren't for a novice's writing skills, this book would be a masterpiece.
Personally I feel pretty good
OK! You write well! Ha ha ha ha
Elbow Gaomon with his bare hands!
Gaomon: Is this right?
Gaomon evolves into Red Riding Hoodmon!
Leomon: Isn't that right?
Luifa Island Demonmon looked at Holy Angelmon: Is this right?
The molecular beast, which had snatched up all the sacred badges in advance, looked at the group of perfect beings in front of it: Isn't this right?
Evolution! Gabaton C sauce! Attack!
Beetlemon recalls the human knowledge that Mitsuko taught him: This is simply not right!
Rolling Ball Beast: Right, right!
Very good, very beautiful
Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
Gabaton girl is so cute [shy]
Hahaha Liuliu has become awesome🤣You old six
Come on, come on, come on, come on
The thinking is very clear, but there are mistakes sometimes, such as the name of the ultimate vampire monster always changing.
Since your writing is quite good, I will mercifully give the author an encouragement! That's it, meow [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Finally a fan hero with his own badge
It's okay, the writing is average, the cover is good, and the setting is fairly fresh.
After reading it, although the writing is a bit immature, the emotions are expressed very well (whisper a few words, it's time to add some storytelling)
It looks good, I love watching it, come on
It's pretty good, keep it up [like][eat melon]
It's a great book with potential! Come on!
Mickey has entered the wonderful house and wonderful home.
It's quite interesting, a second creation
The protagonist and the first generation get along very naturally and harmoniously, and the plot transition is also very natural, but the combat power increases very quickly (but it is acceptable)
Tomato is one of the few digital novels with a conscience and one of the rare Ultra novels with the Ultra spirit. Summary: Personally, I feel that the plot has almost no key shortcomings, except that it lacks the priority of God's perspective, and most of the characters are well-shaped. If possible, you can add in the follow-up what the Molecule Beast, Chang Hengxing, and Vampire Beast did during this period, and what impact they had on the original plot.
The writing is okay but the plot is a bit difficult to comment on. Nothing related to Ultra should be inserted. By the way, the title of the book could even be changed to The Villains Defeated in Those Years. It's good that the protagonist accepts the villain
Yes, it has its shortcomings, but it reads smoothly and won't be too dramatic. This kind of rare novel should not be too demanding, support viewing, and give the author motivation. Come on⛽＾0＾~
Well, very good, very interesting. Summary, 1. The protagonist has Ultra spirit. 2, 2. The protagonist has his own atmosphere and does not completely follow the main plot. 3. The overall planning is excellent. 4. I want to know if the protagonist can turn into the super space dinosaur Zeton and elbow the ultimate body in the later stage.
This is a rare Digimon fanfic, maybe it's because I'm slow to react, I don't see any poison so far, please give it a good review, please keep updating.
Yes, the content is very novel and the creativity is good. Except for the first chapter, which has a small flaw, there are no problems. The writing is very good. This novel (≧∇≦*)
The ending of the first volume is still very touching, come on!
What a novel novel, very interesting to read
Awesome, so pretty! Great author, come on! ! ! ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ✩
Very nice, a rare high-quality Digimon fanfic
Not bad. If it weren't for a novice's writing skills, this book would be a masterpiece.
Personally I feel pretty good
OK! You write well! Ha ha ha ha
Elbow Gaomon with his bare hands! Gaomon: Is this right? Gaomon evolves into Red Riding Hoodmon! Leomon: Isn't that right? Luifa Island Demonmon looked at Holy Angelmon: Is this right? The molecular beast, which had snatched up all the sacred badges in advance, looked at the group of perfect beings in front of it: Isn't this right? Evolution! Gabaton C sauce! Attack! Beetlemon recalls the human knowledge that Mitsuko taught him: This is simply not right! Rolling Ball Beast: Right, right!
Very good, very beautiful
Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
Gabaton girl is so cute [shy]
Hahaha Liuliu has become awesome🤣You old six
Come on, come on, come on, come on
The thinking is very clear, but there are mistakes sometimes, such as the name of the ultimate vampire monster always changing.
Since your writing is quite good, I will mercifully give the author an encouragement! That's it, meow [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Finally a fan hero with his own badge
It's okay, the writing is average, the cover is good, and the setting is fairly fresh.
After reading it, although the writing is a bit immature, the emotions are expressed very well (whisper a few words, it's time to add some storytelling)
It looks good, I love watching it, come on
It's pretty good, keep it up [like][eat melon]
It's a great book with potential! Come on!
Mickey has entered the wonderful house and wonderful home.
It's quite interesting, a second creation
The protagonist and the first generation get along very naturally and harmoniously, and the plot transition is also very natural, but the combat power increases very quickly (but it is acceptable)