Hp: the Unread Prisoner

The article looked very good before the author changed it a lot. It's super good! I feel that Sirius before the revision of the text was the kind of lazy and dejected, but his unruly and aloof wildness made the image of Blake, a loose, evil but passionate and rebellious person, immediately appear on the page; while Leo, who seems to be a cold and arrogant aristocrat on the surface, has a soft heart, he will be moved by sincerity, and he will never complain about his illness. He is a genius or vents his revenge. He just strives to pursue knowledge and thirst for power. He is full of wisdom and rationality, but he also has family affection and friendship. When he was targeted by two aristocrats, he used almost harsh words and perfect strategies to fight back perfectly. How can this be said to be a doormat? For Leo, his strong inner The core is destined to prevent him from being shaken and painful by these "pranks". In his view, these actions cannot hurt him, and he will not feel frustrated or timid about it, because he is not a weak person, he is a strong person who can fight back beautifully. He will only be slightly irritated because of these, but these cannot affect his normal life. Live, he is free from recklessness and savagery, but he is also willing to feel the warmth of true love. How can such a flesh-and-blood character be a doormat? He solves the troubles he is targeted every time with ease. Such a charming character, even if you misunderstand him because of his cold and arrogant temperament, you will fall in love with him during the relationship. Sirius and Leo met in a rebellion to escape decadent luxury, and gradually attracted each other through confrontation and temptation. The unruly and bad people will also show their kind side, and the cold and rational people who don't care about anything will also show warmth. They all face each other due to misunderstanding. They erected high cold walls and spikes against each other. Sirius thought Leo was an arrogant and annoying aristocratic young man, and Leo thought Sirius was an annoying spirit who was reckless, stupid, and would betray his friends in the future. However, they resonated with each other when they met, and the rebels who also disliked being bound by rules would eventually get closer to each other step by step. The author's later revisions reduced the portrayal of Sirius a bit, but made it more suitable for the eleven or twelve-year-old. The previous description was more like a more mature character. Whether it was revised or revised, the author mostly wrote very well! I like both versions very much, and the character of the protagonist has been preserved even after drastic changes to the plot. It's really surprising. The author just follows his own pace. The writing is really super beautiful! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses] You should also pay attention to rest at ordinary times and don't be affected by external sounds [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

How can I put it, every character is wonderful, the content is also very good, and the plot is also very good. It really makes me love baby Leo. The only shortcoming is that I don't understand why he entered Slytherin. Because the author wrote it in a big way, I can't see the quality of Slytherin, especially In the few moments where I communicated with Lucius, this character was better portrayed in Ravenclaw than in Slytherin. There was also a feeling of being a doormat. It made me so angry. Even if it was due to physical reasons, wouldn't holding it in make me sick faster? But overall, it's still worth recommending.

It's a very interesting fanfic. Although the first few chapters are a bit stiff, the subsequent plots and emotional transitions are smooth and can be considered. The characters are not OOC. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages, and they are not stereotyped. The character of the protagonist is very charming, has his own principles and goals, is calm and venomous, has tactics and a clear sense of boundaries, but at the same time he values his family and friends. If he hates people, he can understand them but will not change his attitude. He will also fight back against the malice of others. He is a cold-faced and venomous but kind-hearted good boy😘 In fact, I have some different opinions on the views of some book friends (just expressing my personal opinions, no other intentions). I think the protagonist is not a doormat. The most obvious thing is that the relationship between the protagonist and James and Sirius at the beginning of the article is not a unilateral bullying of one party against the other, but a confrontation between both parties. Resistance, even if he can't express his feelings immediately, he will remember it in his heart. He doesn't care about other people's comments as long as they don't affect him. Generally speaking, I think he is a "you hate him but your dislike won't affect him, and if you offend him, he won't make it easy for you" type. Strongly recommend this article

It's so beautiful. A seasoned fan should enjoy this kind of two-way secret love. I really like the feeling of the two people competing against each other in the front. It's very interesting. The relaxation and becoming friends in the middle is also very interesting. And I think the best opportunity for relaxation in the middle is Apple. The apple also appeared later. I almost forgot about it, and then after they quarreled, it appeared again as a foreshadowing. It's really good-looking and I recommend you all to watch it. What I like most is probably the feeling between the two teenagers in the front who dislike each other but also admire each other. The fight between the teenagers is undoubtedly the most interesting in my opinion. After watching it as an adult, I feel that the writing is very OOC and the one here is very restored. Not a shill [please update]

So good, she is a goddess. . [Blows a kiss] We are really saved. In fact, I have read a lot of fanfics about HP for a long time, because I watched the original work a long time ago and never got over it [face covering]. There are many fanfics that write about the CP of characters who are difficult to understand. I'm not saying that other writings are not good, but so far I still like this kind of delicate emotional line, which is very to my liking. What the author is writing now is very good! [Love][love][love] I caught up on the previous updates when I was about 40 or so (?) I can't remember clearly, or maybe I forgot about it when I was 70, but there weren't many updates at that time, so I started to read Yangwen first. Smith Marseille! The emotional lines written by the author are very delicate, and Sirius revealed a little bit of his feelings earlier. As the saying goes, curiosity is the beginning of love. I only paid attention to it because I had a desire to explore. Although it started as a rivalry, after all, the protagonist had not finished reading Prisoners, hahaha, but later on, I became suspicious and convinced. This is a step-by-step process, in which the protagonist and Sirius gradually understand each other deeply and help each other. Finally together now! ! What the little girl watched today was that she was very moved to see them together😭, finally together! There was just an awkward little couple in front of them. I hope Leo and Sirius can always be 99! Let the young couple stay happy like this. After reading this article, I feel that the author must have carefully thought about Sirius's life and personality! As a white moonlight character, Sirius undoubtedly has his unique personal charm. He is passionate, strong and stubborn. But no matter how strong a person is, there are times when he is vulnerable and doubts himself, and at this time, Leo's calmness and composure can complement him. Every character is flesh and blood, and people will have some shortcomings, but it is precisely because of these small shortcomings that they are more charming and attractive enough. And love itself has a strong color of tolerance. So even if there are setbacks and difficulties, they can't really be separated from each other. It's the young man's sincere and passionate emotions! All in all, Leo and Sirius must be 99! The author writes very well, keep up the good work! In fact, I feel dizzy every time I open a tomato! Please update more often [sending my heart]

This is a book that will make you laugh out loud. The friendship lines and the love lines are all very well written. It has the feeling of gradual development. It is particularly delicate and the plot is also very interesting. I feel that the pro-age era will probably develop like this! I don't know why the rating isn't high, but it's really nice! Very good fanfic in HP

It's really super, super good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love] This is the best book I've read among all HP's CPs about Sirius [Love] I like it very much, and it's worth putting on my bookshelf [Love] My bookshelf is full of good-looking books that I carefully selected, and this book is completely enough to stay in my bookshelf [Cry] [Love] Don't miss this book. But if you haven't read it yet, I suggest you don't read it yet, save up a lot before reading it, because this book is so good that you want to read it all at once, you can't stop, and if you save up enough, you can read it all at once [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] Come on, author, I will follow you until the finale [Love] [Love] [Love] It's really, really, super good to read [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS]

Oh my god, it feels so good. I never had the desire to open it because of the ratings, so I opened it because I didn't know what to read. I have been browsing for several hours since about 10 o'clock in the evening until now at 1:30 in the morning. Enjoy it! A very unique and original male protagonist, and he describes Sirius' proud and awkward mentality very well, the unknowing feelings and cares, and the fact that he can't stand the other party seeing his embarrassment. The unexplained jealousy and sourness that arises when you are treated indifferently, but your friend can get along with each other normally, is very good! ! !

The characterization is perfect, and you can even feel the underlying crisis. Let's make a bet. It's Chapter 67 now. I think my brother will still study black magic and will have conflicts with his younger brother. Although the relationship between the brothers is super good, the older brother may have hidden jealousy and dissatisfaction with his younger brother, just like a time bomb.

It's really great and beautiful. The characters and plot are great [Blowing Kiss] The writing is very high-level in Tomato. It's really great to see that the writer is writing for the first time [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The pull between the two people is really super natural and not stiff. Sirius's inner transformation is also very natural. The turning points all come naturally, which makes me feel super happy! ! ! I just hope that my brother will not turn against the protagonist in the end [crying] [crying] I hope that my brother will change his philosophy and not be too harsh in the end.

This is the best emotional novel I have ever read. Of course, emotion is not the only advantage, but I didn't expect so few people to read it. It's a pity that it's so good [crying]

Super pretty! Super pretty! I personally think it is the best among the articles with Sirius as CP! First of all, the author's writing style is really good, which is among the best in Tomato, and the plot setting is also very good. Especially the emotional lines are really well written! It's very natural and unobtrusive, and the emotional line that makes people smile from time to time is also so delicious. . . Just eat happily. . . Thanks to the author for the divine food! I hope it won't stop and the updates will continue until the end! Lao Chi Jia carefully selected, I have always been very strict with writing requirements, just read it😋

It's very beautiful, it's an immortal product, it's simply an immortal product, it's worth appreciating. The emotions between the protagonists are very delicate, the plot is not watery at all, and it looks very touching. The relationship between the two people is very good. They were enemies at the beginning, then they had a good impression of each other, and finally they fell in love with each other. It was very easy to get along with each other and it was very natural.

After reading it for more than a day, I finished reading all the plots updated by the author. It was very interesting. (When I first saw the cover, I thought it was Hard [thinking]) The characters are also extremely three-dimensional. Everyone in the protagonist group has a positive and negative side of their personality. The author is very good at grasping the relationship between people. The emotional connection between Sirius and Leo is very natural. It is obvious that Sirius did not have a good attitude towards Leo after rejecting Leo's inner feelings towards him at first, but after seeing his soft laughter, I suddenly felt itchy in my heart, which reminded me of the meal replacement CR I saw on dy before: pineapple beer. I get excited every time I hear you snickering But you will always just laugh muffledly and quietly As if God will snatch away your only happiness So the first time I heard you laugh I froze I want you to be so happy all your life) I think it fits Sirius's initial feelings towards Leo. Later he found that he fell in love with him, but was he afraid of Leo's inner identity? I think it fits the inner sentence very well (it's okay to be his brother, his friend, anything for him, just don't be his lover) The author's character creation is not OOC at all. I really like Sirius's inner torture and behavior because of the Whomping Willow incident. The author's portrayal is very good. The plot here makes me feel that Leo is still the same Leo. He has not changed. In his bones, he still has the fear of the other world? Naifen doesn't want to be associated with trouble. Even if he loves Sirius, he still wants him to become a good person instead of doting on him? Sirius's growth in this period is even more rapid. Both in the original novel and in the author's novel, Sirius is a somewhat rebellious young man. He does not know how to be afraid, does things regardless of the consequences, and has the blood of a young man. Was this always a trait of his? Perhaps it was inherent courage in Gryffindor? But the author gave such a plot that he grew up to understand others. This paragraph also portrays Lupine in great detail. He is afraid. Whether it is living in the human world with werewolf blood or the fear of losing his friends, he always feels wronged. He swallows the original pain and feels pain, but still forgives on the surface like it doesn't matter. Leo also relieved him greatly, letting him know that he was also an independent individual and his emotions could be seen. There are many more characters and plots, so I won't give examples one by one... The author's writing style is very good. This is really the best HP fanfic I've seen this year. I hope the author will work harder and write more articles!

This is the first time I read a Sirius fanfic. I think it is one of the few very good HP fanfics written on Tomato that I have seen so far. The writing is not childish and the characters are basically not OOC. It feels like the author is very familiar with the original work, and the stories about the appearance of James and Sirius in the original novel are very reasonably mentioned, and there are related story lines. The other fictional protagonist is also very charming, smart and has a bottom line, and is dedicated to his friends. The emotional relationship between the two protagonists is also very interesting. In the early stage, it is a confrontational path. In the later stage, they know that the other party likes them, but they do not say it clearly and play ambiguous. It's also very sweet after being together. Really recommended! ! ! !

Very natural emotional scene! ! I haven't seen such a delicate emotional drama in a long time! ! Very good! It's gradual and natural, not the love-at-first-sight, inexplicable love drama. Great, we are saved! ! 🥰🥰

I would like to call Sirius the top two men. They compete with each other, fall in love and kill each other. Sirius's enthusiasm and the occasional paranoia and gloominess of the Black family are all well displayed. Please be sure to complete the happy ending. This is my lifelong wish!

The emotional description is very delicate, from the tense situation to the mutual understanding and love, the experience of the two people can make people feel excited for them. They redeem each other and are evenly matched. It is very comfortable to watch🥺❤️ The following contains spoilers The part that makes my nose sore the most is when Leo returns to France because of his fiancée. In a place where his brother has gone from sunshine to losing control and is under house arrest, and his father is softly oppressing him for the benefit of the family. Complex information and emotions tear Leo apart. "I want to see him" is an emotion that would not be revealed, with a softness. Carrying this emotion and returning to the mansion in England, he was the person he wanted to see the most. He was there, waiting for him tacitly when Leo was at his most vulnerable. That softness turned into dependence on him, the sense of security on his shoulders. He tentatively wanted to hold Leo in his arms. The two hugged each other silently. What else is there to say? Sirius, you are worthy of a wife!

This book is really good, with good characters and storyline, but I don't understand why Leo went to Slytherin. From his attitude towards Lucius and the neutrality concept that their family has always adhered to, I personally think Ravenclaw may be more suitable for him. I can't think of any other reason other than that he is a pure-blood noble. Ps: I don't mean to accuse. I believe the author has his own reasons for writing this. The above is just my own opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Why did I just discover such a beautiful book now? It's so beautiful [][][][][][] is the most beautiful hp article I've ever read. The author is really amazing. It's the first time I've seen it. I almost missed it because of the rating. Why is the rating of such a beautiful article so low?

It's super good-looking. Don't miss this book. I'm looking forward to the subsequent development of the emotional bond between the two [laughs][laughs]

This book is really beautifully written! The writing is really smooth, and it's already dozens of chapters before I even read it. The characters written are not OOC at all, they are very consistent with the original work, and the protagonist's behavioral motivations are very reasonable, like real people. I am very grateful to the author for writing the emotional line between the two people in great detail. It does not feel abrupt at all as you read it slowly. The relationship is a natural one and does not make people feel uncomfortable. Moreover, the long emotional line is very consistent with the original plot [Blowing Kiss] I must say, this is really the rising star of HP's dual-male novels! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

My parents scolded me. I'm not convinced. The teacher targeted me. I'm not convinced. My boss exploited me. I'm not convinced. Life abandoned me. I'm not convinced. Society insults me. I'm not convinced. Money spurns me. I'm not convinced. Equal this book. I'm convinced. Leo and Sirius's tug and tug was so exciting. The ambiguity finally got what they wanted. Just talk about it in bed properly! Leo is not the kind of protagonist who is only passive and frustrated. He really thinks about himself, his friends, and his family. The setting of this book is very good. It does not let the protagonist learn about Sirius, but it makes it more interesting. The early fights are really good. The many quarrels and cold wars make their relationship stronger. Besides, they have grown up a long time ago. The quarrels really have a unique sense of life! ! Let me mention it again. James who likes this book so much assists and illuminates everyone like a little sun. Eric and Leo's best friend group cb is super delicious. You two sit at the main table!

I have been reading for 8 years, and this is the first time I have seen such a well-written emotional line in Tomato. Especially when I was in third and fourth grade, the ambiguity was really well written! ! In the ambiguous period, rise up! ! !

Beautiful, beautiful! I finished reading it in one go, ah ah, cheers. The text description is very delicate, the emotional progression is also very good, and it is not stiff at all, and the protagonist is also very well portrayed.

Fragrant! So delicious! The setting and characters are so touching, and the plot is great. I sit back and write better and better, which is amazing! I hope the author will not stop updating, I will follow the author 😼 I love this so much! The interactive writing is also super good! ! Fragrant! It made me stay up all night and I have to finish it right away😼! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha It smells so good! ! ! ! ! I simply love it!

It's really good-looking. It's because of this that I completely fell in love with Sirius. The whole story is very sweet and relaxing so far. There is nothing particularly sad. Of course, there are many, many knife warnings. The protagonist is not that powerful without reason. He is the heir of a French family, and the whole article is quite logical and story-telling. It is the kind of thing that makes people look forward to [shy][shy]

It's so sweet that I don't know what the world is! The characters are really relatable, the friendship is sincere and flamboyant, the love between teenagers who try their best to hide it is burning like wildfire, and the undercurrents under the cracked ice are all super good, shocking and delicious! 👍

Five-star support. From the characters to the writing, it is very smooth and comfortable. The cp feeling is also very good. However, I feel that there is still a little distance from the completion. No matter how I hope the author will not give up updating, it is really a very rare thing.

This is my first time writing a reviewᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ The plot is very reasonable, especially the emotional aspect, and the description is very delicate, which surpasses many books. It has its own private design, and its ideas about magic are bold but consistent with the worldview. The image creation of each person is very successful and fits the personality. It's really beautiful, why only 8 points...(*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)