Harry Potter: The Unread Prisoner

The article looked very good before the author changed it a lot. It's super good! I feel that Sirius before the revision of the text was the kind of lazy and dejected, but his unruly and aloof wildness made the image of Blake, a loose, evil but passionate and rebellious person, immediately appear on the page; while Leo, who seems to be a cold and arrogant aristocrat on the surface, has a soft heart, he will be moved by sincerity, and he will never complain about his illness. He is a genius or vents his revenge. He just strives to pursue knowledge and thirst for power. He is full of wisdom and rationality, but he also has family affection and friendship. When he was targeted by two aristocrats, he used almost harsh words and perfect strategies to fight back perfectly. How can this be said to be a doormat? For Leo, his strong inner The core is destined to prevent him from being shaken and painful by these "pranks". In his view, these actions cannot hurt him, and he will not feel frustrated or timid about it, because he is not a weak person, he is a strong person who can fight back beautifully. He will only be slightly irritated because of these, but these cannot affect his normal life. Live, he is free from recklessness and savagery, but he is also willing to feel the warmth of true love. How can such a flesh-and-blood character be a doormat? He solves the troubles he is targeted every time with ease. Such a charming character, even if you misunderstand him because of his cold and arrogant temperament, you will fall in love with him during the relationship. Sirius and Leo met in a rebellion to escape decadent luxury, and gradually attracted each other through confrontation and temptation. The unruly and bad people will also show their kind side, and the cold and rational people who don't care about anything will also show warmth. They all face each other due to misunderstanding. They erected high cold walls and spikes against each other. Sirius thought Leo was an arrogant and annoying aristocratic young man, and Leo thought Sirius was an annoying spirit who was reckless, stupid, and would betray his friends in the future. However, they resonated with each other when they met, and the rebels who also disliked being bound by rules would eventually get closer to each other step by step. The author's later revisions reduced the portrayal of Sirius a bit, but made it more suitable for the eleven or twelve-year-old. The previous description was more like a more mature character. Whether it was revised or revised, the author mostly wrote very well! I like both versions very much, and the character of the protagonist has been preserved even after drastic changes to the plot. It's really surprising. The author just follows his own pace. The writing is really super beautiful! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses] You should also pay attention to rest at ordinary times and don't be affected by external sounds [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

How can I put it, every character is wonderful, the content is also very good, and the plot is also very good. It really makes me love baby Leo. The only shortcoming is that I don't understand why he entered Slytherin. Because the author wrote it in a big way, I can't see the quality of Slytherin, especially In the few moments where I communicated with Lucius, this character was better portrayed in Ravenclaw than in Slytherin. There was also a feeling of being a doormat. It made me so angry. Even if it was due to physical reasons, wouldn't holding it in make me sick faster? But overall, it's still worth recommending.

It's a very interesting fanfic. Although the first few chapters are a bit stiff, the subsequent plots and emotional transitions are smooth and can be considered. The characters are not OOC. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages, and they are not stereotyped. The character of the protagonist is very charming, has his own principles and goals, is calm and venomous, has tactics and a clear sense of boundaries, but at the same time he values his family and friends. If he hates people, he can understand them but will not change his attitude. He will also fight back against the malice of others. He is a cold-faced and venomous but kind-hearted good boy😘 In fact, I have some different opinions on the views of some book friends (just expressing my personal opinions, no other intentions). I think the protagonist is not a doormat. The most obvious thing is that the relationship between the protagonist and James and Sirius at the beginning of the article is not a unilateral bullying of one party against the other, but a confrontation between both parties. Resistance, even if he can't express his feelings immediately, he will remember it in his heart. He doesn't care about other people's comments as long as they don't affect him. Generally speaking, I think he is a "you hate him but your dislike won't affect him, and if you offend him, he won't make it easy for you" type. Strongly recommend this article

It's so beautiful. A seasoned fan should enjoy this kind of two-way secret love. I really like the feeling of the two people competing against each other in the front. It's very interesting. The relaxation and becoming friends in the middle is also very interesting. And I think the best opportunity for relaxation in the middle is Apple. The apple also appeared later. I almost forgot about it, and then after they quarreled, it appeared again as a foreshadowing. It's really good-looking and I recommend you all to watch it. What I like most is probably the feeling between the two teenagers in the front who dislike each other but also admire each other. The fight between the teenagers is undoubtedly the most interesting in my opinion. After watching it as an adult, I feel that the writing is very OOC and the one here is very restored. Not a shill [please update]

So good, she is a goddess. . [Blows a kiss] We are really saved. In fact, I have read a lot of fanfics about HP for a long time, because I watched the original work a long time ago and never got over it [face covering]. There are many fanfics that write about the CP of characters who are difficult to understand. I'm not saying that other writings are not good, but so far I still like this kind of delicate emotional line, which is very to my liking. What the author is writing now is very good! [Love][love][love] I caught up on the previous updates when I was about 40 or so (?) I can't remember clearly, or maybe I forgot about it when I was 70, but there weren't many updates at that time, so I started to read Yangwen first. Smith Marseille! The emotional lines written by the author are very delicate, and Sirius revealed a little bit of his feelings earlier. As the saying goes, curiosity is the beginning of love. I only paid attention to it because I had a desire to explore. Although it started as a rivalry, after all, the protagonist had not finished reading Prisoners, hahaha, but later on, I became suspicious and convinced. This is a step-by-step process, in which the protagonist and Sirius gradually understand each other deeply and help each other. Finally together now! ! What the little girl watched today was that she was very moved to see them together😭, finally together! There was just an awkward little couple in front of them. I hope Leo and Sirius can always be 99! Let the young couple stay happy like this. After reading this article, I feel that the author must have carefully thought about Sirius's life and personality! As a white moonlight character, Sirius undoubtedly has his unique personal charm. He is passionate, strong and stubborn. But no matter how strong a person is, there are times when he is vulnerable and doubts himself, and at this time, Leo's calmness and composure can complement him. Every character is flesh and blood, and people will have some shortcomings, but it is precisely because of these small shortcomings that they are more charming and attractive enough. And love itself has a strong color of tolerance. So even if there are setbacks and difficulties, they can't really be separated from each other. It's the young man's sincere and passionate emotions! All in all, Leo and Sirius must be 99! The author writes very well, keep up the good work! In fact, I feel dizzy every time I open a tomato! Please update more often [sending my heart]

This is a book that will make you laugh out loud. The friendship lines and the love lines are all very well written. It has the feeling of gradual development. It is particularly delicate and the plot is also very interesting. I feel that the pro-age era will probably develop like this! I don't know why the rating isn't high, but it's really nice! Very good fanfic in HP

It's really super, super good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love] This is the best book I've read among all HP's CPs about Sirius [Love] I like it very much, and it's worth putting on my bookshelf [Love] My bookshelf is full of good-looking books that I carefully selected, and this book is completely enough to stay in my bookshelf [Cry] [Love] Don't miss this book. But if you haven't read it yet, I suggest you don't read it yet, save up a lot before reading it, because this book is so good that you want to read it all at once, you can't stop, and if you save up enough, you can read it all at once [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] Come on, author, I will follow you until the finale [Love] [Love] [Love] It's really, really, super good to read [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS]

Oh my god, it feels so good. I never had the desire to open it because of the ratings, so I opened it because I didn't know what to read. I have been browsing for several hours since about 10 o'clock in the evening until now at 1:30 in the morning. Enjoy it! A very unique and original male protagonist, and he describes Sirius' proud and awkward mentality very well, the unknowing feelings and cares, and the fact that he can't stand the other party seeing his embarrassment. The unexplained jealousy and sourness that arises when you are treated indifferently, but your friend can get along with each other normally, is very good! ! !

Super pretty! Super pretty! I personally think it is the best among the articles with Sirius as CP! First of all, the author's writing style is really good, which is among the best in Tomato, and the plot setting is also very good. Especially the emotional lines are really well written! It's very natural and unobtrusive, and the emotional line that makes people smile from time to time is also so delicious. . . Just eat happily. . . Thanks to the author for the divine food! I hope it won't stop and the updates will continue until the end! Lao Chi Jia carefully selected, I have always been very strict with writing requirements, just read it😋

It's really great and beautiful. The characters and plot are great [Blowing Kiss] The writing is very high-level in Tomato. It's really great to see that the writer is writing for the first time [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The pull between the two people is really super natural and not stiff. Sirius's inner transformation is also very natural. The turning points all come naturally, which makes me feel super happy! ! ! I just hope that my brother will not turn against the protagonist in the end [crying] [crying] I hope that my brother will change his philosophy and not be too harsh in the end.