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[First person, horror and suspense, multiple parallel worlds (infinite worlds), traditional Western fantasy, modern magic, mystery and detective fiction]
My flesh dissolves under an anomaly, claws tear my skull apart, a colossal creature from the deep swallows me without a second thought…
Every version of me will die, and each death will bring me a gift from death. All I have to do is fight with everything I have to live a few seconds longer.
This is magic, a forbidden spell, and the final memento left behind by each of me before vanishing.
[Deathly Visage] activates. The withered bones of millions of “me” pave the way ahead… Perhaps the next [Deathly Visage] will be my own, but I cannot regret this, nor can I take it back.
Go seek that brief chance to live. Go pursue the dream in your heart. Go feel the kindness that remains even under the threat of death.
Then… die a worthy death.
Newcomer, new book, please spray lightly
Not long after I read it, I personally feel that the writing technique is very unique and is similar to the protagonist's personal psychological perspective. I give five stars to support the author on the one hand, and on the other hand, the subject matter chosen by the author is very attractive to me. However, the worldview of the main world is a bit vague, and I don't know how to develop it later. The description of magic is a bit unfamiliar, maybe because I have read too many online game articles🤭, but the author has to be a bit slow, so there is no flow. In "Fruit", daily updates are very important. Come on💪oh❤️❤️❤️ I have read the latest chapter. I can only say that it has good techniques. The author's writing style and core are very good. There are no bad points. The key author is very positive. I wish this book will get better and better.
I watched a lot, but after the first death of the protagonist, I was not in the mood to watch it. I thought about it and I thought it was because the protagonist was not portrayed enough, but where exactly was it lacking? Let's briefly talk about it ... After thinking about it for a while, I think it's the villain. The author doesn't want to write a cool article, but the villain is just as disposable as the cool article. The characteristics of the protagonist cannot be highlighted without the villain. There are 1 or 2 villains in one volume, and the villain is very small, and the shaping is not enough. The major events caused by the villain can be appropriately expanded, with more branches and foreshadowing. The process is too short and it feels like it is over before it begins. There is also the "Death Sight". There is no clear main line in the early stage, so the "Death Sight" is mainly relied on to provide highlights. In the middle period, the problem is exposed. The "Death Sight" is a bit too long, causing the main line to proceed too quickly, and the foreshadowing is too shallow and often recycled within a few chapters. The author might try to lengthen the main line and lay down more and deeper foreshadowing. Or appropriately reduce the length of "Death Sign"? (However, I feel that the length of "Death Aspect" is already almost the same, no more or less would be inappropriate) I have no problem with the author liking more literary poems and songs. I think it's quite good in "Death Face", but in the main plot it kind of interrupts the rhythm of the story (this opinion is more personal) I think it's a pass for beginners, but you can write better if you work hard.
I just started reading it, but I have a suggestion. The novel is described from a third-person perspective to make the reading experience more comfortable. The first-person perspective is more common in genres such as autobiographies. Changing to a third-person perspective may increase the number of readers.
Today is a day worth celebrating↖(^ω^)↗ Because I found a book that matched my interests It's also a sad day┗(´∧`)┛ Because this book has just begun, it is not enough to read.
Overall, it's pretty good. I just wish there could be more main lines. Secondly, there are too many things and sometimes I can't remember them. But I still hope the author can stick to it.
The author gives a name to the abnormality that is not noticed, otherwise it will be called abnormal all the time, which will not sound good. "In my dream, I watched the lives of billions of people, and I also watched their deaths." This is my own unusual name. It's called "Death of All Me". If you think it sounds good, you can use it. It doesn't matter if you don't use it. By the way, I hope the author can update normally. This is not enough for old bookworms.
It's beautiful, well described, and has a sense of fate.
It looks good, I hope this style can continue, but I hope you don't end up with it Author, are you still alive? Come on
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