King of Elden Starting at Hogwarts

Children, come and watch, it's an absolute masterpiece, especially the battle of wits with that group of purebloods. My heart beat faster and my breathing became rapid. The level of wits was comparable to Zhongli's fake death. They stepped on their faces and danced, and only a few unimportant people died. Female videos are not so outrageous. This kind of thing can be said in any novel. A group of weaklings who have no strength and only rely on the shadow of their ancestors to dominate, step on their faces and dance, those who deserve to be exterminated, come to Akaishi.

Very good hp fan, it makes my old head spin, love comes from the south of the river

Overall it's pretty good, a smooth start. It's just that the protagonist's performance is a bit unsatisfactory, and he should be beaten first before talking about his bloodline. The magic system of Elden's Circle can be well integrated into HP's magic system, and the most important thing is to supplement the melee ability that HP lacks. As a melee mage, it is almost no problem to open unparalleled here.

The writing is good, but it's a bit OOC for "Harry Potter". I can't deny that I like this book, and I can't ignore the strong differences between the characters and the original book.

Every door that cannot be opened cannot block my journey. I have lost countless souls in my wanderings for many years. I have endured the torture of fast and slow knives for my ideals. If I hesitate, I will lose. Avoiding the impact of the big iron ball, lying in poisonous pools and traps, the three dogs were scared to death in the fire-slaughter formation. They tried their best but could not defeat it. After passing one level, they stepped on many pits. Three hundred and sixty-five miles away, you can't drink orange juice. Three hundred and sixty-five miles away, how can you be disqualified? Those huge treasure chests have never been held in hand. Only storms can knock down big trees. How much has been added since Praise the Sun, this shameful health bar. Three hundred and sixty-five miles, from the evil spirit to the Dharma ring, three hundred and sixty-five miles, from secret to secret. There are so many 365 miles to go, so many bonfires to be lit, 365 miles to go, so many wonderful sights to witness. How many 365 miles of road, from Immortal Town to the Holy Tree, 365 miles of road, from boy to bald. Three hundred and sixty-five miles long road to becoming a king. . . That loneliness~

OK I just respect the plot too much~

Awesome, even newbies who have never played the Ring of Magic can accept it. The old ass of Soul Travel thinks that we can introduce some small garbage, such as small snack pots, disintegrating pyroxene, charm branches and other very useful small garbage, and there must be DLC for all collection accounts. The rock heart and witch heart can be directly turned into the ancient dragon boy to open the elbow.

Finished reading. Part of the reason why Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba has good reviews is that it ends appropriately. The same goes for this book. The pace in the early stages is okay, but later on, more and more descriptions become confusing and complicated. The author's writing skills do not get better as the length of the book unfolds, so let's just end it like this. If you can read it in one sitting, it is still good.

A lump of

Four stars for the subject matter and this is my first time writing a novel. As a newcomer, there are still many shortcomings... I don't know why it didn't hurt me. I hope the author will not be hit by the comments and learn from his experience. I look forward to the next book. After reading the comment section carefully, most of the comments were very exciting... It seems that the reading time is very short, most of them are even half an hour, and only one or two reading time reaches an hour or close to two hours. If the protagonist is frustrated... What they probably want to see is the protagonist being jumped in the face by a few insignificant characters and blowing up half of Hogwarts to the sky. The image of a strong man in their mind may be so sensitive and irritable.

I heard Sun Xiaochuan say that this book is very interesting, so I came [laughs]

Still too red tape

The quality of the underwear is very good, the workmanship is fine, the style is good-looking, it is very comfortable to wear, the fit is good, the color is good, it is worth buying, five-star reviews, worth recommending to everyone to buy good things, don't miss out on friends who like it, hurry up and place an order! ! ! [Sinister smile]

You can watch it even if you haven't played it. However, there are some problems with some details of the Harry Potter worldview, but only the details are problematic. Overall, it's five stars and it's super beautiful and the writing is excellent, but if you don't watch the details, you'll be tortured to death [crying]

The ideas and creativity are very good, and the viewpoints are also very novel. The author's writing style is considered to be above average in Tomato, but the early development is a bit slow.

Although I have never played Elden's Circle. But that doesn't stop me from thinking this book is particularly good. If you haven't played it before, you can try it and you'll probably understand it. The writing is not bad. It's one of the better books I've read in recent times, but it's a bit short for the time being.

The best, the best, the best. The longer you watch it, the greater the mood swings. Looking back, you can be more sure that this is the best.

It's great. I read it in one go. The plot is pretty good. The main character in the whole story is also the most powerful one. He kills people fiercely [laughs]. It's just a pity that it's a bit short. There are some places that could be written more, but considering it's the author's first book, I'll work hard for the next one. [Like]

Very, very excellent

It's over as it should be. It's not particularly good-looking, but it doesn't end badly.

Where can I find an author who writes about Old Touhuan fanfic? (Suddenly I found that the score of this book is a bit low, please give it a good review) Don't finish it so early! I also want to see the Dragonborn elbow flying pink toad!

The dark brown lump looks a bit like chocolate

So what about the ashes? Why not summon ashes?

Comparable to three betrayals plus Zhongli's fake death

It's pretty cool. Those who have played Ring of Magic won't find it too frustrating. In the early stage, I only have 99 intelligence, and everything else is 10 points. I think it's normal that I can't cast spells. In the game, if you have 10 points of mana and 10 points of stamina, you can basically cast a duck for less than one second. If you have three broom stars, you have to scratch your head or wave them in vain. Come on, author.

It's okay. It's a short fanfic, but overall there's no big problem.

Looking forward to the author's new work, this one is well written

The combination is very nice and encouraging.

It looks good, but unfortunately it's a bit short, but it doesn't overwhelm the combat power or anything. The combat power is enough to sweep it straight to the end.

Very good, light-hearted novel