After Indulging the Empress a Hundred Times, I Resigned and Left

Let me first say: "Forgive me for being attracted by the title of the short drama and jumping to watch it, but I still read more than 50% of this article. What I said is purely personal opinion and may contain minor spoilers!!! However, this article is still worth reading carefully when you have free time." The characters in the author's works are so lifelike that they seem to be alive on the page. The writing is delicate and vivid, however. (Spoilers follow!) First of all, the first 13 chapters of this article are biased towards ancient female novels, which deeply and meticulously describe the love and hatred between Shen Yan and the "secondary heroine" Xiao Li. I like these top-notch writings that make me feel relaxed and happy. Then the plot about "Xiao Li" gradually faded away, so I had no choice but to skip chapters backwards. Secondly, in Chapters 120 to 183, the plot of "Xiao Li" is reproduced. In it, her real life experience is "Xuanyuan Li" of the Xuanyuan family, and she has ancient bloodline (leaning towards fantasy and immortality novels). The writing style is slightly downgraded, and the plot is somewhat delayed and highly repetitive - used to explain the reasons for the two to resolve their feud and the ambiguous scenes of mutual rescue and escape. At this point, when I thought they could get back together and make things right, the hero left the heroine and the dynasty behind to save the world? (The villain changed from the emperor's uncle Xuanyuan Ji to the void camp) (Xuanyuan Li's role is almost nonexistent) From now on, they just talk about Shen Yan's battle of wits and courage in the dragon ruins and the void, but at this time, the writing is no longer 30% as good as the previous one. In addition, I am particularly puzzled by the fact that "Aliya" suddenly fell from the sky and directly surpassed "Xuanyuan Li" in favorability. At this time, my style has also changed to a slightly science fiction style, which is also difficult to accept. But I guess that the final ending (it is not over yet) should be a good ending from the perspective of Ana Shen and Aaliya. After all, there are still so many planets that can be written across the star sea. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion to the author: Although it is a good attempt to integrate the three kinds of literature. But greed is not enough. A good novel is not judged by its length but by its accuracy. I hope that the author can write different styles of prose, or that the plot can be more timely and smooth to make the plot more interesting. I think this book could be rated 3.5 Stars, but I really don't have time to finish reading it, so I'll give it 0.5 More stars. Thank you very much to the author! I had a good experience in the early and middle stages of this article. It is indeed a masterpiece and I would like to spread the word.

Putting aside the plot, the character creation and narration are very delicate. The author will update soon😍 This is not a rebirth. It's only 11 chapters and it's such a big plot. The rest of it really attracted me. I'll update it quickly.

The emotions are described very delicately, and the plot progress is not abrupt. I update it ten times a day, and even the production team members don't dare to rest like this!

The writing is very good. I thought it was a romance, but it turned into a fantasy.

The storyline is novel

Very beautiful, really touching

It's beautiful, well written, five stars.

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Wow, that's really good! All aspects are remarkable and worthy of praise!