[Drama between two female protagonists fighting for a husband + no time travel, no system, no golden fingers + gentle male protagonist] The story of Fairy Xiyue and Fairy Jinghong competing for the male protagonist, we are here to pursue the online IQ of all the members. .
Reader comments
The writing is quite good, but I feel that the male protagonist is incompatible with this world of immortality and is a bit too nice to strangers. However, this can be regarded as a kind of personality charm. The author's ink on the character's personality resolves a lot of discomfort. Many plots can be motivated through the character's personality. I personally think the writing is quite good. Come on.
It is neither the end of the story nor the acceptance of everything. His feelings are always jumping up and down. Qin hides everything, but he always cuts things off first and then tells them later. In terms of picking things that are beneficial to him, this kind of person is undesirable. The male protagonist has become the person I hate the most.
A very nice book, with a smooth rhythm and good character portrayal. It is considered an excellent work among classical immortal cultivation novels and is a novel worth reading. Occasionally seeing funny plots can make people feel happy😊
The writing is very nice. I originally thought that the heroine gave it to me for free, but I didn't expect that there would be a twist in the follow-up. Now I want to know if the heroine is sincere. Come on, the author.
What do you think of the author's writing style? There is a sense of jumping, and the words are very jumpy. At first, I quite liked the perspective of the male protagonist to unfold the story. The person I served had two sides, and I fell in love with the male protagonist by chance. Of course, I was also very confused at the beginning. Why did I treat the male protagonist so well? The author's later descriptions were also in line with his intentions, but the two heroines appeared too early, which resulted in the abandonment of one in order to describe the other. For example, the misunderstanding of Qin is getting deeper and deeper, and everything she deliberately concealed from the male protagonist. Now she knows that this world is just a small world, so what will happen next? Three people cheating together? Keep pulling? This is why I think that if they don't grow up together, there must be a strong person between the male and female protagonists, so that the narrative rhythm of the plot will be more comfortable, instead of the male protagonist's strength almost surpassing Qin's, which will only lead to the misunderstanding between the two getting deeper and deeper. Of course, if anyone feels that this kind of pull is necessary, just pretend that I didn't say it. Anyway, I find it quite torture.
I was wrong, I was deceived so much, Qin was a bad woman from beginning to end, but since she only wanted to use the male protagonist, why did she have to cultivate feelings with him? Do you need emotions to take advantage of his physique? I still don't understand. . . .
Not bad, I feel a little put off by the title of the book. The writing skills are good and the descriptions are detailed and quite comfortable to read.
Eight points, because in Tomato, it's okay not to keep running accounts
4 stars is a bit missing, give it a 6 star rating
Well, I have been looking for a book for several days, and this one is good. I read the latest one in one go.
It is indeed a new angle to write about cultivating immortals, with ups and downs in the plot. Unfortunately, it is too short and leaves much to be desired.
The storyline is really good. I haven't found a good novel for several days. I never thought that the novels with low ratings would be much better than those with random high ratings.
When I first looked at the ratings, I thought it was a short story, but as I continued reading, I found that the writing was good and the details were appropriate. I finished reading it in one go. There are also shortcomings, that is, the protagonist's character is too silly and sweet. Maybe he will grow up later? Also, there are too few and it's not enough to watch.
It is a very good fusion of classical fairy tales and tomatoes. The protagonist's experience and growth are very story-telling. In the era of fast food, such novels can still exist because of its excitement and charm.
It's beautiful, but it's still being serialized [crying]
I feel this is the best novel among similar novels. Five star encouragement
Xiu Xian is my favorite. The plot design is perfect and I can't get enough of it
The author is great, the writing is super good. I like this kind of writing in fairy tales. It's very top-notch. Don't make it worse. Please🙏🏻 @tweenweiwuwenmubenousasas
It's very beautiful. I originally wanted to kill time at night, but as soon as I saw it, I stayed up until dawn [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]
It looks good. The author writes very carefully.
Can be sustained by V
The ultimate invincible giant horse looks good
It seems very good so far
The heroine is well portrayed.
Xiao Song's portrayal was so good [I almost cried]
Very good, five-character patch
It's so beautiful, come and see it.
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The author knows a lot about cultivating immortals, and I really feel the same when reading the book.
Good👌🏻Hahahahahahahahaha
It's quite interesting, I'm happy to watch it
Pretty good, but the writing is a bit bland
Nice. , Or come on.
Not bad, not bad. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. Come on.
The writing is quite good, but I feel that the male protagonist is incompatible with this world of immortality and is a bit too nice to strangers. However, this can be regarded as a kind of personality charm. The author's ink on the character's personality resolves a lot of discomfort. Many plots can be motivated through the character's personality. I personally think the writing is quite good. Come on. It is neither the end of the story nor the acceptance of everything. His feelings are always jumping up and down. Qin hides everything, but he always cuts things off first and then tells them later. In terms of picking things that are beneficial to him, this kind of person is undesirable. The male protagonist has become the person I hate the most.
A very nice book, with a smooth rhythm and good character portrayal. It is considered an excellent work among classical immortal cultivation novels and is a novel worth reading. Occasionally seeing funny plots can make people feel happy😊
The writing is very nice. I originally thought that the heroine gave it to me for free, but I didn't expect that there would be a twist in the follow-up. Now I want to know if the heroine is sincere. Come on, the author.
What do you think of the author's writing style? There is a sense of jumping, and the words are very jumpy. At first, I quite liked the perspective of the male protagonist to unfold the story. The person I served had two sides, and I fell in love with the male protagonist by chance. Of course, I was also very confused at the beginning. Why did I treat the male protagonist so well? The author's later descriptions were also in line with his intentions, but the two heroines appeared too early, which resulted in the abandonment of one in order to describe the other. For example, the misunderstanding of Qin is getting deeper and deeper, and everything she deliberately concealed from the male protagonist. Now she knows that this world is just a small world, so what will happen next? Three people cheating together? Keep pulling? This is why I think that if they don't grow up together, there must be a strong person between the male and female protagonists, so that the narrative rhythm of the plot will be more comfortable, instead of the male protagonist's strength almost surpassing Qin's, which will only lead to the misunderstanding between the two getting deeper and deeper. Of course, if anyone feels that this kind of pull is necessary, just pretend that I didn't say it. Anyway, I find it quite torture. I was wrong, I was deceived so much, Qin was a bad woman from beginning to end, but since she only wanted to use the male protagonist, why did she have to cultivate feelings with him? Do you need emotions to take advantage of his physique? I still don't understand. . . .
Not bad, I feel a little put off by the title of the book. The writing skills are good and the descriptions are detailed and quite comfortable to read.
Eight points, because in Tomato, it's okay not to keep running accounts 4 stars is a bit missing, give it a 6 star rating
Well, I have been looking for a book for several days, and this one is good. I read the latest one in one go. It is indeed a new angle to write about cultivating immortals, with ups and downs in the plot. Unfortunately, it is too short and leaves much to be desired.
The storyline is really good. I haven't found a good novel for several days. I never thought that the novels with low ratings would be much better than those with random high ratings.
When I first looked at the ratings, I thought it was a short story, but as I continued reading, I found that the writing was good and the details were appropriate. I finished reading it in one go. There are also shortcomings, that is, the protagonist's character is too silly and sweet. Maybe he will grow up later? Also, there are too few and it's not enough to watch.
It is a very good fusion of classical fairy tales and tomatoes. The protagonist's experience and growth are very story-telling. In the era of fast food, such novels can still exist because of its excitement and charm.
It's beautiful, but it's still being serialized [crying]
I feel this is the best novel among similar novels. Five star encouragement
Xiu Xian is my favorite. The plot design is perfect and I can't get enough of it
The author is great, the writing is super good. I like this kind of writing in fairy tales. It's very top-notch. Don't make it worse. Please🙏🏻 @tweenweiwuwenmubenousasas
It's very beautiful. I originally wanted to kill time at night, but as soon as I saw it, I stayed up until dawn [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]
It looks good. The author writes very carefully.
Can be sustained by V
The ultimate invincible giant horse looks good
It seems very good so far
The heroine is well portrayed.
Xiao Song's portrayal was so good [I almost cried]
Very good, five-character patch
It's so beautiful, come and see it.
The nickname for this comment is invalid
The author knows a lot about cultivating immortals, and I really feel the same when reading the book.
Good👌🏻Hahahahahahahahaha
It's quite interesting, I'm happy to watch it
Pretty good, but the writing is a bit bland
Nice. , Or come on.
Not bad, not bad. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. Come on.