After Dressing up as a Villain, I Had Sex with the Male Protagonist.

It's good-looking and good-looking. If you like the protagonist's attitude, you must be strong. Only when you are strong can you gain the respect of others. Everything else is just empty. I saw the author said that the relationship writing was fast, but the emotion between Huo Yuhao and Dai Huabin can be written on many levels. The protagonist is actually not like a time traveler, but more like a reborn Dai Huabin who knows the plot, but has not been substituted in his memory. First of all, there was a conflict between Huo Yuhao and Dai Huabin that was left over from their parents' relationship issues, but the consequences were borne by the two children. Huo Yuhao experienced feelings because of his mother who loved him but lost it early, while Dai Huabin may have been confused about the emotion of love due to his upbringing environment. The high-demand environment at home and his mother's trial and error with Dai Hao's true love Huo Yun'er are essentially problems with the transmission of love. Dai Hao's true love is Huo Yun'er, and the Duchess will hate this. If the Duchess doesn't care about treating it as a purely political marriage, she won't remember that Zhi will take care of the backyard and play casually, and his irrational behavior is just out of love; while for Huo Yuhao, although his mother was loved by his father, his father did not protect them at all. Love is unfamiliar to Dai Huabin, because the first person a child can feel affection for is his mother, which may be toxic and incomprehensible from his perspective. This may cause him difficulty and slowness in interpersonal understanding. If he develops feelings for Huo Yuhao other than enemies, he will not be able to accept it openly. Not to mention that they are both men, and there is also the problem of orthopedics in front of them, and it is really difficult to realize that they have love for their half-brothers. It is hard to imagine how difficult it is for brothers who are already separated from each other. It may take losing them to realize the pain. However, this is also the reason why the two male protagonists can have feelings for each other, because Huo Yuhao is a child who has experienced love but lacks it. He is very eager for love. Facing Dai Huabin, who has a mentality of atonement and survival, he will inevitably have feelings of longing. Especially the feelings from brothers are even more tempting and puzzling. The more depressed they become, the deeper they become. Seriously, the two of them haven't talked openly and honestly, and the conflict has always been buried. I don't know how the author will deal with this problem, but I'm really looking forward to it. It will be exciting, and maybe we can go back to before the liberation. () It will be very satisfying when both parties feel uncomfortable. It is probably difficult to realize the feelings without a harsh treatment. But no matter how you think about it, it feels like Huo Yuhao has a long way to go, because he is the one who holds the initiative most of the time, while Dai Huabin feels more evasive. As mentioned above, the bias in emotional recognition and long-term worries caused by the family can even lead to self-destructive tendencies. I feel that Dai Huabin's self-involvement and self-abuse are actually hidden in his self-abuse behavior. If he suddenly misunderstood that what he did was in vain or dead after paying so much, I can't imagine how much more self-destructive he could be. ( Well, it's all my own superficial understanding. The author writes well, but I hope to stick to it and make the relationship between the two more delicate and tortuous. I am a lover of sweet-sadistic crossovers and like things with rich layers. The addition of other characters also has good feelings for Dai Huabin. In fact, I feel that Wang Dong and Dai Huabin can also get along. It is just because of the problem of my friend Huo Yuhao. The more suppressed the more problems arise, the more emotions arise, the more emotions arise, which is uncontrollable!

It's a great book. The quality of this book on Tomato can be said to be top-notch. There are very few books on Tomato that are more to my liking. I would like to praise the author for changing Wang Dong's gender, and there is no OOC in the whole process to the end, which eliminates the poisonous points of the original work (it's not that I can't accept that Wang Dong is a female, But I can't accept the inexplicable spoiled wife plot in the later stages of the original work) So far, the content I've read is not toxic, and I also like the author's writing style. I rarely give five-star reviews on Tomato, but this article I gave five stars for the setting and writing style. I hope the author will not stop updating😭

I really like the pure hate combination in the early stage and the feeling of secretly competing with each other but appreciating it. What attracts me the most is the male protagonist's ruthlessness and determination, and the plot is also well written, exciting and very satisfying. However, since the "system" suddenly popped up in the middle of the game (let's call it that, maybe it is an old man), the tension of the plot and characters was suddenly reduced by half, and the emotional line was unexpected. , I can only guess what the two people are thinking. Anyway, I can't understand how Huo can just accept that he likes the murderer who indirectly killed his mother. It is obvious that he can drag on and go through some life-and-death situations. The more obvious Huo is jealous, the more his previous hatred seems fake. Wang Dong's love line is even more sudden than a tornado. One second, he has to say a few words to express his displeasure for his friend, and then the next second, he is in Shura Field. The main plot has not been advanced since the system appeared, and the relationship line accounts for a large proportion... It's not that it's not good-looking, but my little red-net male protagonist has turned into a little green-net. The subsequent descriptions are all about cat sculptures, cute and arrogant wood, but what I like is that the male protagonist faces danger in the early stage. Reliable and decisive, Mr. Xuan has not appeared for a long time... The force of the system is not unacceptable. After all, the protagonist group is all hanging on the wall, but I may prefer the feeling that the male protagonist does not have a system and relies solely on his character charm. You hang up, you hang up, I roll up, I roll up. In any case, I would like to thank the author for his work. It is really well written in the fanfic. It's just that the more I like the beginning, the more I am disappointed with the subsequent development. But overall, this book is still very well written. I like it.

It doesn't look awkward (except for the few chapters before the two people's PK, where the male protagonist didn't adapt and was pressured by Huo's hatred). I really hope to be the main character, mainly because Huo is such a good mother. I really hope to be the main attacker (I've seen Chapter 26), after all, it's very uncomfortable to think about the U. S. Being so miserable that it will have to fight against the Northern Dynasty in the future😭

It's so good. I've finished reading it. I beg the author to make more updates. It's not enough. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] The characters feel a bit ooc, especially Dong and Huo at the back, but they are still nice to watch. The plot is okay, but the temperature will drop as soon as Huo appears. From now on, Hua will no longer have to worry about the summer heat hahaha😁😁😁😁 I feel like Hua Hua was a little too afraid of Huo in the early stage, but she was more generous in the later stage, but Hua Hua is really cute! ! ! [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Love, love, love

I have only read a dozen chapters, and I feel that the writing style is better than that of other fandoms, because the writing style of Douluo fandoms is so awkward that I gave up all hope when I clicked on it, but after reading a few chapters, I felt that it was okay [laughs] and there were no outstanding flaws.

I would like to ask if the main character is left or right? It's good to watch, but the plot behind it doesn't quite fit the original work and is a bit OOC.

It feels okay, quite sweet. The setting is very attractive to me, Huo Hua, unprecedented CP (at least on Tomato), but remember to lose your mind when reading, and then you will get a little sweet novel ^_^ The plot is also very exciting, but the author is a bit weak behind the scenes. . . But overall it is a breath of fresh air, and I highly recommend this book [Send Heart]. Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Good luck to the author. Although Haodong was said to have been dismantled, I think it was good to dismantle it. Wang Dong should be the kind of confident, strong and a bit cunning cute, not the Wang Donger who was timid after becoming a woman in the original work [crying]

Emmmm, what can I say about this book? The first and middle stages are actually very good. The emotions, pull, and tsundere character are all well controlled, but I can't tell whether there is OOC or not. I read Douluo more than ten years ago, but in the middle stage, it kept saying that there was improvement but felt that there was no progress (I didn't get the soul ring). It was still a bit uncomfortable. In the later games, I was said to have reached 55, but it was only revealed later. Then, there are many contradictions in the story. In the first part, it was said that Huo's bandage looked good, but in the second part, it was said that it was very messy. In the first part, it was said that it was a single dormitory, and in the second part, Huo and Dong were roommates again (although that was true in the original work), and then the comments all said that Huo was reborn. It was not stated clearly, but it didn't sound like a first-run show. This part is also quite contradictory. Then the game begins with an inexplicable battle of wits, an inexplicable life experience, and an inexplicable ending. The overall experience is that it is both exciting and uncomfortable to read, but the book written by tjss himself is very confusing and inexplicable (it happened that I loved reading it when I was a child)

It's very beautiful, the characters are well developed, and the little changes in the relationship between the two are well described, especially delicate. I like it [send my heart][send my heart] Later on, Wang Dong's relationship was a bit inexplicable, and the character's personality felt a bit changed. I always thought that the problem between the protagonist and Huo Yuhao would not be resolved until a big breaking point, and the other characters were too marginalized.

I haven't watched Dou Er before, and I don't know who Dai Huabin is. I learned about it today and found that in the original work or other fan fiction, he is actually a complete villain, and he really hurts Huo Yuhao. And this is really a sworn hatred. So I want to ask if the subsequent plot will reveal that the core has been replaced, or if it is really with the indirect enemy who killed his mother, because I see that now I feel that the relationship is good, but I thought it was just a small conflict before, but now I find that the conflict seems to be a bit big. [Laughing awkwardly]

This is well written, please write it quickly. Actually, I don't understand it very well, because I feel that the protagonist is a straight man in the early stage, and then in Chapter 90, he ends up kissing her out of nowhere. Then, I feel that if it is really a straight man, there should be some disputes in their relationship, and then he will doubt himself a little instead of just accepting it naturally. I didn't understand much about this aspect, and the plot was very good.

It's quite interesting, but the part I'm watching now seems to have a system popping up. Well, I think it would be better without a system, because I feel that the previous plot is particularly exciting. Well, a system suddenly pops up, and I feel like ⊙_⊙

This novel has an exciting plot, vivid and full characters, and solid writing skills. The content is consistent with the promotion, and the immersive reading experience is good. Overall, it's very cost-effective and worth a look.

I like it very much, very beautiful (I am not a human machine)

Finished reading. The writing is quite good. I was attracted to this special couple at first [laughing and crying]. Then the previous plot is also very interesting, but the writing is a bit slow in the middle of the training. Then I read the subsequent plot in a daze and felt a bit messy [face covering] But overall it was okay. The author insisted on finishing it and it was really amazing. The most important thing is that I stick to it until the end and there will be an extra chapter! It's so exciting, the main text doesn't give any meat, it's all a side story [laughing and crying] [like]

The author's writing style is really good, and it's pretty good to me anyway. When writing this kind of fan fiction, the description of emotions is generally very rigid, which makes people feel a little confused, and makes people wonder how it got to this point. But the love-hate entanglement written by the author is very refreshing. If you leave your brain behind, you will get an out-of-control corner of your mouth, sometimes raised to the universe, sometimes lowered to the underworld. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

It's pretty good, but can the author update it faster? More importantly, some readers start reading without reading the demining points, and start commenting when they encounter some contradictions. It makes me feel weird when I recommend Wang Dong and Huo Yuhao. After all, no one wants to see their comments scolded. There are also some people who seem to criticize Huo Yuhao and the others without having read the original work. The author's writing is not bad, but there are too many readers who are brainless. I really convince some people. Can you read it after reading the demining points and the introduction?

How should I put it, Dou Er's plot was originally very poor. This book is actually well written, better than the original in any way. . . I don't mean to disparage the original work, I am also a fan. But the plot of the original book is really too lazy to comment on. Very funny and well written. It's the style I like to watch.

The author's writing is so good, the description is so addictive to me, it's so beautiful, I love it so much, I finally found this kind of Dou Er fanfic, it's not the kind of mindless bragging, it has logic, a plot, and it's good to read. Come on, author!

The babies are really beautiful! In the early stage, the love-hate relationship between Huo Yuhao and Dai Huabin was very vividly written! Very beautiful! The plot is particularly novel, and the emotions and plot are 50/50. The author will update a lot more [Blowing Kisses] [Adoration] Looking forward to the follow-up!

I give it a five-star review. The author's writing style is exquisite and he writes Huo Yuhao's hatred for Dai Huabin in great detail. The sentences in the text are natural and easy to understand. This is the best Douluo Erli I have ever read. I really recommend it.

It's super good-looking. I like the main character's character. There's no fawning or licking. I like the two strong characters. I hope they won't be too romantic when they get together later. I like the tsundere character of the current protagonist. Come on, author. It's so rare. Ah, it changed a bit later, but I can accept it.

Ah~~~so beautiful. Also, the author, what is your major? Develop a little bit of guidance and a little bit of yandere. I searched for a whole day and couldn't find the same style. I felt so bad because I was short of books.

It is short in length and makes repeated mistakes in some places. The plot and characters are inconsistent, but the overall effect is good. It is very attractive in the early stage and the interaction is very good. The author is very active. However, in the later stage, the author may lack inspiration and be boring. You can continue to work hard. The first part of the extra chapter is very interesting, and the rest is okay.

It's very good-looking, and I think it's the best Douluo fanfic out there. [Praise]

The second book I've read with two male protagonists. How can I say that the first one is more exciting? My name is Ke Jingling. Anyway, people in the comment section said at the time that I couldn't hold my lips shut, but in fact I didn't feel anything. This one is different, it's really beautiful! And I couldn't understand a lot of that book, but the emotional lines in this one were very well written, so beautiful.

It's pretty good. Please give me your support. I have already recommended the book, but the fighting scenes are not very well written.

All I can say about Douluo Dalu is that I love watching Douluo 2. After all, I am a fan of Douluo 2, but that guy Tang San gave me a really bad impression. This book is really well written, but it's very enjoyable to read.