Demon Slayer: Starting from Yudake

The psychological description of Yuan Yue Yue is very good, there is no big trap, and he is down to earth. The character of this version - Yue Yue is also very consistent with the character of the character, which is quite good. I don't know if it's a single heroine or multiple heroines. There is an original heroine, but Yue Yue-this article actually gave Magatama away? ! Watch Lei's Chuchu with caution.

It's good-looking, the psychological description of the protagonist is funny and cute, and he grows up relatively quickly. According to the protagonist's personality, there shouldn't be a female protagonist. As long as the emotional line is not forcibly added and it continues to be like this, it will be good. If it really doesn't work, you can mark it as an extra and write an if line and a love line like this.

A good meal is a reward! ! ! ! It is a potential stock, right? (? The psychological description of Yue Yue is very accurate and detailed. The author also studied this character carefully. The plot is reasonable and will not cause OOC or incongruity. After the Yu Guo chapter is over, Yue Yue will become a pillar, right? I am more curious about the pattern and meaning of the markings in the later period. The reading speed is too fast, I finished reading it in one night and I fell into it unconsciously... I look forward to updating my mouth.

The writing is very good, but Higake actually gave away the magatama. Also, I thought it was non-CP, but when I saw this, I felt that Mochizuki was CP. It's really my fault. I hope the author can add a label to indicate whether there is any CP? (Just expressing your own opinion, don't scold me, don't scold me) The author writes very well.

Very good article, Butterfly Ninja and Yue Yue are CP lightning protection

After watching the Demon Slayer movie, I was actually deeply impressed by what Zenitsu said when he used Fire Thunder God, "This move is for when you want to fight side by side with your senior brother." In the original work, when Yu Yue was a child, he helped ghosts eat people and got along with Zenitsu, or maybe after turning into a ghost, his grandfather committed seppuku. It really makes me feel uncomfortable, but this fanfic satisfies my inner feelings. It cleverly integrates the memory of Yugake, and the description of Zenitsu and others is also very close to the original work. At one point, I thought it might have been written by Teacher Crocodile's trumpet account. The psychological description of Yue Yue is very delicate. Although the pace speeds up at the end and may be a bit jumpy, I think this is a very good fanfic.

The author is undoubtedly a genius, his writing is very good, he has done his homework, and he has the potential to become a great master. This book feels a bit like The Loneliness of the Master and The Legend of the Great Sage to me, but more like Ta Ge Xing. Tagexing is an eunuch, and I recommended it to a friend of mine, but she would often criticize the books I read to her as being eunuchs, and occasionally she could only read half of it when I reviewed it [face covering]. So come on, eunuch, I will support you if I have the conditions, but now I am at a low point and I feel very uncomfortable.

Although it is written in the first person, the senses are not too bad. Secondly, although the writing style is not superb, it is not a novice either. After dissecting Demon Slayer's world view, some details are written very delicately, and every passerby and every character has its own existence. The meaning of "Demon Slayer" is that although it died, it still left a mark, and it is difficult to write as a fan novel. The author not only combined his own understanding of Demon Slayer, but also wrote something of his own. My personal evaluation is that if it is a fan novel, this is a superior work.

It was very interesting up to the ending, and it was well written to capture everyone's feelings. The ghost transformation line in the first if is also very interesting, but unfortunately the pace is too fast. But to be honest, the title and introduction are really not very attractive. The title "Start from..." Makes people think it is an infinite stream or role-playing or something, and the introduction is even more uncomfortable. Why should the time traveler have to atone for his sins without doing anything? Still destroyed physically and mentally? , I felt very aggrieved just by looking at the introduction. Those who didn't know better thought it was the kind of super disgusting story about abuse of the main character, haha. And the if line at the back, is it really written by the same author? Yu Yue is super OOC, the main family has become the main villain, and they are all bastards. The tragedy of Yushiro and Tama's reincarnated family is also written very clearly. There is a feeling of "Oh, why did you all die inexplicably", and I don't understand what I want to express.

It's very well written, and it's totally like Gōdake Hondake! The character design is very solid!

I declare it to be my favorite fanfic of the year now! . There is no blackness, no charm, no messy little plot (grateful). The protagonist Tsundere is very good, the plot is also very reasonable, everyone's descriptions are very realistic, there is no intellectual difficulty! The regret is also saved (big brother——)! I just want to see this kind of fanfic! The only regret is that it's only 100,000 words, which is too short to read. I hope there will be more and faster! Modo Modo!

This author is truly invincible. The characters are invincible, the plot is invincible, the details are invincible, the battles are invincible, and the emotional drama is invincible. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Author, what else can't you do? ! ! Your relationship is like a soul mate, two souls working together in a career. Oh my god, even if you don't have CP, your emotional line will outshine those who write about love [crying][crying][crying] The perfect Demon Slayer fan, you are the top. Such delicate writing. What an invincible characterization, no OOC, you are a god I am tied for first place with Fanzhu! ! ! I would like to call you the strongest!

This tn is really a masterpiece. The writing of the main film is smooth and comfortable to watch. The second volume may be a bit messy but it's okay. The emotions of the characters in it are also incomparably written. It's a word all day. I still hope to add a good ending with the butterfly. The ending of the main film [crying] [crying]

It is very interesting. People are not purely kind. There is always a despicable side in human nature. The protagonist is just like the bad side of ourselves. He looks at himself indifferently and objectively in the face of his own darkness, but at the same time unconsciously acts towards the good side. This novel is really good. It faces oneself and at the same time leads people to do good without losing their authenticity. It is very good. After reading it, I feel a little relieved and motivated to do better. I really appreciate the author for writing this article. In short, maybe the purpose is different. It not only completes a relatively happy ending of ghost killing, but also guides our development. I really like it. If, if possible, senior brother can really do this, vanity is not a bad thing, right?

Wu Di Wu Di is so enjoyable to watch. The plot is reasonable and rigorous. It is not like Seizing the Body. It retains many of the emotions and characteristics of the original owner. In short, it is good to watch. The only pity is that there is no old man Kuwashima in the ending [crying]

So pretty! ! ! If you want to read it, I suggest you keep the book until the end, and then read it all. It's so cool. The author updates it three times a day, and it's not enough to read. ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

Exceeded the standard. I thought I wouldn't see any good demon slayers, but I didn't expect there were masters. I have basically read all the old demon slayer novels before. Except for the very good ones, they are basically very cliche. They just follow the plot or have a lot of personal settings, and then I grind on it day by day. This book is considered one of the top five. It has its own ideas and plot, but it is not obtrusive. The plot is actually very exciting, and the characters are very good. It can only be said to be the pinnacle of Zhu Yue's "whitewashing" work. How can a person who grew up in a smelly ditch figure out all the problems by himself? Zhu Yue in the original work is very good, but the lower limit of a person is like that Although this novel does not take the initiative to whitewash, after reading it, I still feel that Zhuo Yue➗ is reasonable and reasonable. Maybe it's because I'm too paranoid. Anyway, it's very interesting to watch. If you really hate Zhuo Yue, you might not be able to stand it, hahaha

The finale is coming soon, and the reviews for this book are amazing. To be honest, I really hated the design of the villain Eyue at first, but the author cleverly cut into the weakness of his human nature, ruthlessly tore apart the unbearable past and fed it into the audience's mouth. He did not brush off the wrong things he had done, but added correct values ​​​​and brilliantly neutralized it. Since then, Eyue, who represents the weak evil, has turned into a tough-talking and gentle kind. This kind of personality creation of "attributing all the faults in the world to oneself and then being willing to correct the world's faults even if it hurts oneself" reminds me of the great teacher in "Aomono", which is really to my liking. In addition, in terms of plot, it is a little sad but not disappointing. It is like watching Demon Slayer again from another perspective, and the obscure emotional line also adds a touch of extra flavor. Good grass xdm!

Very nice! Incredibly beautiful! The writing is very good and the setting is very complex! It makes up for the regret I felt towards the original author😭 It's a very interesting creation and I hope the author can keep making more updates! ! So far, it is the highest quality and most original work among all the demon slayer stories I have read! No loss in investing! ! !

It's really amazing. It's the best demon slayer novel I've ever read (it's also a bit like a prose). The protagonist grows up quickly and is very strong in the end. But it's not a cool novel, but the redemption of himself (Zhou Yue) after the fusion between himself and Yu Yue. He uses his arrogant heart to deceive himself into doing things to protect everyone. Compared with the original Demon Slayer, it is less happy and comfortable and more serious and steady. The pace is faster and not sloppy. The emotional scenes are more similar to Tanjiro's and are integrated into the growth line. But the difference is that the protagonist may have some feelings, but there is no relationship, and there are very few appearances. They are just passers-by to the growth of the protagonist's heart and strength. I personally think the plot is better than the original Demon Slayer. I highly recommend everyone to watch it. The following second volume is considered a side story and an if line, and contains some regrets for the protagonist. In fact, the ending here will not be so amazing after reading it, but it can also be regarded as a happy ending.

How should I put it? After reading it, I feel that it is a better demon slayer than Iibashira. There is no lag in the plot and no pressure to fight. Except for the unexplained special physique and overcoming the sunshine, everything is the most reasonable arrangement. The logic is self-explanatory. It can be seen that the author's writing is very online. Although I have always expressed Yue in my way, it makes people feel like writing a diary, but if you look closely, This allows readers to better understand the complex character of Yue Yue, because after the protagonist's soul has passed through his soul, his body retains part of Yue Yue's consciousness, making this character less inconsistent. Bit by bit, the soul that has traveled through time dominates Yue Yue's own character, and later shows himself. A arrogant character image is well created, and the fall of the maternity house in the if line later It looks pretty good to me. There is no absolute justice. Wuhan is also from the Utsuya family. He has lost his absolute enemy. Will there really be a righteous lord? The extremes of things must turn against each other. So the descendants of the Ukuya family are cursed. Before the Breathing Technique came out, ghost hunters fought against ghosts purely as a gift, so fate gave birth to the Breathing Technique. I think the author's private design is very reasonable. Then I don't know if those who give low scores are biased against the character itself. This is an excellent article. I hope that people who really like Demon Slayer will not generalize and ignore this good work. Finally, I hope the author will continue to update new works. This writing style is online and has its own logic. After all, Kan Yue, the original CS character of Demon Slayer, can still write like this. . . Vivid? All in all, it's awesome, keep creating.

Yes, I actually want to read the second volume. In terms of combat power, the author did not use Crocodile Teacher's set where the other pillars are not much different except for the rock pillars. Instead, he used the original work to express the classification into strong pillars and weak pillars. He also studied the original work very carefully, especially the big ones. The obvious tactical thinking can be seen in the battle between the elder brother and the third elder brother. I seem to have read the battle analysis of this battle before. The supporting role of Yue Yue, who was not described too much in the original work, was also written with verve. Overall, it is okay (in fact, I quite want to read the second volume)

The psychological description of Yugake is very good, and the first-person perspective does not feel abrupt. The pace is slightly faster than other demon slayer works, but it is just right and does not feel dragging. The changes in the Uyashiki clan in the final ending are also very real. In short, it is highly recommended to watch it.

This book really gave me a big surprise. It is better than most books about demon slayers, and the content is completely enough to read. I hope the author will work hard to write this book to the finale and then make another book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's very interesting. The descriptions of the characters in the original work and the psychological description of the protagonist Yue Yue are all very well presented in the author's writing. Although his mouth is still poisonous (I'm really afraid that one day he licks his lips and poisons himself to death), we all know that he is no longer the annoying person in the original work. The only thing that may be a little flawed is the final part of Infinite City. Crocodile used many battles in the end to reestablish the character arc for many people. This kind of group portrait where everyone is in place is much less and weaker here by the author, which is still a bit of a pity.

This book can be said to be the best among Demon Slayers. While other novels were still making love and a lot of Chinese people were pushing Demon Slayer, this book had already begun the journey of the big brother's redemption; The article adopts the first-person perspective for ease of introduction, while also vividly portraying the characters. Although the second volume is a bit messy and splits into two different directions, the final ending is good. The logic is clear and the priorities are clear. Most of the writing focuses on the protagonist's transformation and psychological changes, which makes it easier and more intuitive to bring the Ningba person's perspective.

Please, write more, I will do anything. This is really the best Demon Slayer I've ever seen, whether it's the relationship (not limited to men and women, but also teammates, friends, etc.) Or the plot, it's really great [almost crying]

It's good to watch. I really like the character of the protagonist that is so integrated into the original work. It won't easily make people act out of the drama. It will feel like it's natural and in line with the protagonist's personality. Moreover, the author's plot progresses very quickly and does not drag out. The protagonist's strength is not suppressed, and the extent and time of getting stronger are relatively reasonable. All in all, it's very comfortable to watch 😌 Finished with flowers 🎉 It landed smoothly, and the subsequent plot did not drag on, and the development was very reasonable. After getting the three-piece set of Demon Slayers, I immediately attacked the Ghost King. For example, the three on top and two on top were all instantly defeated, and the one on top lasted a little longer. The author wrote two story endings, one is a ghost line and the other is a human line. The heroine in the former ending is the author's original female character, and the latter is a butterfly ninja. Overall it's pretty good, the protagonist's character is really immersive [shy]

Although it's a bit flimsy, it's worth watching overall. I don't really like the setting where the consciousness of the time traveler merges with the character (it's neither the character herself nor can it be said to be a complete original oc, which I always find very strange), as well as the ambiguous plot with the original female character. Perhaps due to the length, the combat power increases rapidly in the middle and later stages, and the character's growth in both spiritual and combat power is a bit erratic. Other than that, it's pretty good. The plot is cool, the protagonist's personality has been transformed very likeable, and the psychological talk is interesting.

It's like eating the Demon Slayer anime directly. The characters in it are very well created. None of the characters behaved contrary to their original characters. It's so awesome👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍