I Established the Immortal Sect in the Mortal World

I've read a lot of cool articles, but this one was okay. You can season it a bit. If you are about to fall into a trap, give me a warning. More everyday. Hey, I'm tired of reading those cool articles, I just like the daily life now. As plain as water, it develops slowly. Damn it, why did so many troublesome things suddenly happen? I can't even watch it everyday. I fell into repeated slaps in the face again.

After reading the latest chapter, I will talk about the book review first. Others said that the first dozens of chapters are all about farming, which is indeed inconsistent with the introduction of founding a sect. There is also talk about recruiting girls. If you only accept girls, you should not give a negative review. Only accepting girls will give you a negative review. Indeed, the author accepted three people before the Mortal Transformation Chapter, two women and one boy. After the Mortal Transformation, he accepted 10 inner sects and 72 outer sects. The men and women of the outer sects are unclear, but there are 8 men and 2 women in the inner sects. In total, there are more men, so it is wrong to only accept women. Let's talk about the plot and writing. The plot is okay. It has an outline to support the direction of the plot. It's not too bad. After reading the content, the protagonist doesn't have any thoughts about women. He has been pursuing a career, looking for disciples and accepting disciples, and pretending to be cool (not in a derogatory sense) All in all, not bad

Very creative! Many people who write about the development of sects directly start recruiting disciples and then start fighting. This book starts with the mortal world, and then moves on to the sect's income. It's really a step by step process. It may be unbearable for readers who expect the battle to begin.

The poisonous points vary from person to person. The poisonous points mentioned in the current comments seem to be related to the collection. On the contrary, I have no feeling about this poisonous point. In terms of plot, I personally feel that there are no flaws, but there is nothing too outstanding. The first volume is a bit like traveling in the world of mortals. In addition to accepting three apprentices, I guess it did dissuade many book friends who came to build a sect directly for the beginning. To sum up, four stars for praise and five stars for encouragement.

Okay, I just read a few pages and found that the writing has a sense of order. The main characters' logic and main plots and branch plots also complement each other. It can make people want to read more. After reading for a while, I will continue to evaluate.

From making money to starting a nationwide craze for cultivating immortals, build a huge world of cultivating immortals step by step Some people say that the reason why my book is not popular is because there is no gender change. I have written more than 300 chapters and I actually want to change my gender. God damn gender change... I might consider it...

To be honest, it's really good

It's beautiful, the author's writing style is very good

Why not give it 5 stars?

For now, I'll give it five stars.

Brother, do you update weekly or monthly? Why are you fishing for three days and drying nets for two days?

It's nice to watch, but there isn't much about cultivating immortality at the beginning.