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This version of Penny is still a Muggle but has great ambitions, I like it! She wants to change her and Lily's destiny, and start with small actions to change the decadent system of the magic world bit by bit. Come on, run!

I like the angle that no one has written before, but please, please don't have a CP! Yes, please don't ask Snape😭😭

Very nice. After reading a lot of HP, this is the most unique perspective and entry so far. The combination of the magical world and the Muggle world is very harmonious and unobtrusive. It has a rigorous logic that is rare in this type of novel. The character's personality and behavior are very consistent with the original work, not OOC, and very full. It's rare that I can read it slowly without skipping chapters. Good luck, author!

A purely Muggle perspective, Penny intervenes in the magical world, using the logical vision that is generally lacking in the magical world to break the situation. Although the heroine is a bit too rational and calm, Sif and Sirius' handling is very reasonable. The current plot is strong and super exciting. I hope there won't be any unnecessary emotional drama in the future.

I don't quite understand why this book only has this score. Among all HP fans, this is considered a good book. Not to mention, there are very few books with Petunia as the main character, and this one is quite outstanding. I think that most novels are born out of "uneasy thoughts", and the same is true for HP fans. Not to mention some purely erotic works, this was satirized to the extreme in the book "(Hp) Joking with Mary Sue". The difficulty comes from the sympathy for the unfortunate fate of the characters in the book, and also from the fact that the description of the characters or the plot in the book always feels rough or unreasonable. Fanfiction basically solves these two problems. The logic of this book is correct, the story is well-written, and all the characters in the original book are not OOC. It is a good book. In addition, the protagonist no longer relives the role of the original book. The entire book follows the original book's context, but has its own story. It deserves high marks for telling a new story based on the original story rather than renovating the original book. And I really like this kind of mature, rational, and online IQ, and will not be easily dominated by hormones, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role.

The author has a very novel angle, writing style and content, and I can feel a hint of an iron rice bowl atmosphere. The format is related to the sublimation at the end of each chapter. If the author has confidentiality requirements, the comment can be deleted.

The more I read, the more confused I became. How come this book has such a low score... After thinking about it, it may be because the reaction of the heroine at the beginning to get married after time travel made many readers who read a lot of fan fiction feel uncomfortable. They felt that the heroine was too cruel to Vernon Dursley after time travel. But considering that the heroine died suddenly and time traveled, it was the start of the collapse of heaven, so it's quite understandable to put it into perspective [face covering] In short, after reading this part so far, I feel that the author has written it very well. The heroine has a very charming personality. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Wait until you finish watching before commenting

Super beautiful, an industrial revolution about the magical world. When I read the middle, I was worried whether Penny's approach would streamline the mysterious and interesting teaching environment of Hogwarts. However, the author handled it very well and did not let the magical world lose its original glory. On this basis, he also added modern reforms that benefited wizards a lot. I absolutely love the magical world of Hogwarts, but it's a shame that as a Muggle I can't experience it firsthand. As a person who has the opportunity to enter and stay in the magical world, Penny is sober and rational. She knows what she needs and works hard for it. "I love Hogwarts and I love the wizarding world. But I will remember my roots and where I come from, and build on that and work hard for the people I love."

It's good-looking, HP is written from a new angle, and I think HP's characters are reasonable and have a deep understanding of each character's personality. There is no OOC yet. At the same time, it is not black and it is consistent with the heroine's character. It is a sensible third party and the plot extension is also reasonable. Come on, keep it up~

This book is really good to read, very logical and not OOC. Every time the plot is about to get dull, new conflicts can be arranged in a timely manner. However, the plot is very innovative, so will there be CP [Thinking]

I really liked it after reading two chapters. The heroine is not a good person in the traditional sense. If she were not a Muggle, she would be a standard Slytherin with exquisite egoism. Ps: Don't read if you have a strong sense of morality.

Very exciting, no longer limited to small love, wands beating each other. Petunia brings the industrial revolution to the wizarding world as a Muggle, which is a super unique entry point. Looking forward to seeing the changes in the wizarding world. Moreover, the characters in the original work have a certain aspect of the original work. For example, Dumbledore is "thick and seems fake, and he is so wise that he is almost a demon." His stability-seeking and suspicious characteristics show White's number one character squarely, rather than simply existing as an old honey tool man who loves CP and eats sweets.

It's pretty good-looking, but I came here just for the no-cp [blowing kiss]

Shrewd Petunia, this image has been extremely successful. She is good at seizing opportunities, finding breakthroughs from the worst situations, and directly crushing Snape in terms of IQ and handling ability. This angle is very new and very good.

Nice! Another possibility for Hogwarts!

Penny, as a sane purebred Muggle, raises children in the wizarding world, makes money everywhere, and messes with Voldemort. In terms of plot, there is daily life, main plot, and business war. Especially on the business side, the author writes in great detail. Emperor Ge also came out later. There is no cp in the main text. You can go to the extras if you want to, but it is open-ended. In fact, I feel that the main text is also very interesting, after all, the heroine is very good.

It's a very novel angle. It doesn't whitewash or discredit the original characters. The protagonist's personality is the rational type that I like, but the emotional line is a bit abrupt [face covering]

That's interesting

Well, rational, efficient, reasonable, good-looking

It's quite interesting, I hope the author can continue to work hard~

Come on! You think it looks great! Super pretty! !

Very nice! HP from a new perspective

Harry was raised well [love]

Super beautiful, come on

Very novel angle, recommended

Not bad, relatively novel

Cute, the heroine is amazing! !

Author, I like you, your books, and your ideas, I like you (I hope you will update me with 100 chapters)

Good looking good looking good looking

It's an interesting entry point. Among my recent novel readings, I'm willing to give this one a 100.