The Immortal Venerable Who Can't Decide Between Laying Low and Living It Up

I think it's okay. The comments section said that the Qingluo poison did affect the perception a bit in the early stage, but there was no role at all in the later stage. I feel that the author may have wanted to write Qingluo as an important female character, but it may have been changed because the reviews were not very good. I remember that there was originally a scene with Qingluo in the chapter when the protagonist returned to his hometown, but it was deleted, so the previous description of Qingluo was a bit redundant. Yes, it seems a bit incoherent, but it's not a big problem. If you can get through it, it's still quite interesting as you go on. In the plot of The Secret Realm of Fire, you can see that the author's writing style is quite good. Later, I feel that the psychological description of the main character breaking through the Nascent Soul is quite real and flesh-and-blood. Overall, there are no big problems, just some minor poisonous points. I highly recommend reading it.

It's really good-looking. Once you reach the golden elixir level, you spend more than 10 million spiritual stones. Once you reach the golden elixir 3, you can't even spend 30 million spiritual stones to upgrade it. When you reach the golden elixir, you start to overwhelm your combat power. It's really good-looking.

The author writes that he has become addicted to his art and cannot extricate himself, 🤭

The setting of Goldfinger is relatively restrained. The protagonist upgrades step by step and works hard to set the probability of no collapse. The rhythm of the climax is well controlled 👍

I think the golden finger of the protagonist can be slightly strengthened. For example, I don't think the Yuan Chen Pearl points have to be used up as soon as they are used. They accumulate to the second level of Yuan Ying, but I only use half of them to use the strength of the first level of Yuan Ying. For example, I can only accumulate one point per day for Qi training, two points per day for foundation building, three points per day for golden elixir, and so on. It can also be said that 100,000 points can experience the first level of Yuan Ying for 6 seconds. Does it mean that you can experience the sixth level of Yuan Ying for 1 second?

The plot is smooth without overpowering the combat, and the plot is well planned, with both wisdom and courage. Good book. The only thing is less.

The plug-in is a bit weak and needs to be strengthened

Come on, great author,

Not bad, basically no shortcomings

Five-star praise, the protagonist is both smart and brave, the heroine is innocent and cute, the man is talented and the woman is beautiful, the plot is very fresh, if you want to be popular, just call me 😳😳😳