Harry Potter: The Grace of Betrayal

It's so cute... Ayaz's struggling life made me sympathize a little bit, especially the poisoning part, I just wanted to reach into the screen and give Coban a few clicks... The latest conversation between Harry and Ayaz made me feel warm and 😳. Will the emotional line finally make progress? Hehe. The complete friendship between Ayaz and Esmila is also very warm. It can be regarded as the most portrayed and deepest relationship so far. It can be seen that Ayaz has been constantly adapting and integrating in the past twelve years. I look forward to seeing the day when Ayaz can truly let go of the constraints and be free 💕

Ayaz is so cute. The character design is very interesting. Unfortunately, my cultural level is too low to describe it. This is the first time I have seen this kind of Slytherin character. It is novel and interesting. It is a very exciting one for me. I will follow up on it. I am really looking forward to the protagonist's past. It's also fun to get along with everyone in Slytherin (I can catch the dead tsundere and refine it in an instant. Everyone's character is very distinct and very comfortable to watch. Esmila is also a very cute and adorable girl. I really like how she gets along with Ayaz! (And Theodore) I'm very happy to see Ayaz slowly getting better with everyone bit by bit. The relationship between Harry and Ayaz is so cute. Although they don't spend much time together, they are two very cute little creatures. I look forward to the development of their relationship. I really like the author's narrative rhythm, which is very suitable for catching up with the original work. Anyway, I can't stop after reading it →_→ I hope Ayaz can find his freedom as soon as possible, and he and Harry will eat sweet pastries together at Hogwarts : D (Has Ayaz not treated Harry to dessert yet?) This is Mr. Ha's favorite episode. Boss, I want to follow you! ੭ ᐕ)੭If you will continue to write long reviews, don't give up on books! E can also write long reviews! Also: Do ​​you have any drawings of Ayaz's character? My hands are itchy and I really want to draw them! 😘

Nice! So far, it seems that everyone has done a good job, and I like that the protagonist is not too involved in the original plot. I think the logic of the participation is quite smooth. I will not say that the protagonist thinks that I will never participate in the protagonist's affairs, but in fact, I have a hand in the whole process. And it is really rare to see eccentric players in HP fans. Generally speaking, the protagonists in the literature are the ones with outstanding academic performance. This is a good portrayal. I feel that the portrayal of Ayaz is very real and closer to people (what am I talking about) And after looking at it, I can't help but sigh, the behavior of children really reflects the behavior of adults. Children of pure-blood wizards are also in the environment of pure-blood sects and are influenced by adults. But apart from these, they are actually just children. Compared with adults, they will show their strengths and weaknesses more obviously. Sometimes they will be a little awkward. I feel that the children are all very cute. Looking forward to the love line! Ha Kumon is really, really rare (even more so if you don't knock Had Ha). With Ayaz's current height level and physique, it feels like Harry, the "athletic student", can easily perform forced love (bushi). At the same time, I personally hope that there will be more psychological activities of Harry in the love line🙏 Oh yes, I hope the author can continue to write and finish it (and I personally hope he). I have read many excellent fans who have been cheated halfway. As long as you keep updating, I will keep following you...🥹

It's super good-looking~ I'm too sleepy to write too long (I was shocked when I read the article at Four Points, so I rated it) It's so good-looking, but why is the score so low?! Ayaz is a very cute baby, and this man is a complaining player hh. The daily activities are also very cute (), I don't know why I wrote it here. Vision Ayaz is walking around on the castle map (wearing a wizard robe and holding a wand, a very cute face) The interactions with Esmilla and the interactions between Esmilla and Theodore are so cute. Wow, children at this age are really cute, so cute. The description of Draco also doesn't have the stereotypes inherent in some fans... It's just a completely childish reaction and it's very cute. The author wrote it really well... It is a round character that breaks away from the flat narrative. Ayaz has shortcomings, and Esmilla will not blindly obey (I was shocked when I saw Esmilla quarreling with Ayaz, because according to ordinary works, Esmilla should have always obeyed the protagonist's setting, but the teacher did not write it that way. Esmilla has her own soul) There are also young lovers quarreling, hahaha, so cute. The throbbing of a young man~ The teacher did not focus solely on the protagonist, and did not say that all plots serve the protagonist. Everyone in the book has his or her own life. For example, Xiaolong will write a letter to his father and send him Halloween candy, which is a very lively and vivid detail. Another example is a young couple quarreling and getting into trouble, although it doesn't seem like it has happened yet, haha. But the laughter cannot erase the heaviness. For example, Ayaz and his father Coban. The scene where Coban was poisoned was also shocking, but his image was more three-dimensional and more profound... There are also many things Nodika said to him about politics... Anyway, the teacher's writing is super good, the plot is great, the protagonist is great, the characters are well portrayed, and the writing is also very good♡(*´∀`*)(*´∀`*)♡I often hallucinate foreign literature when I read()

The tomatoes are top notch. The emotional expression is very delicate, and the most important thing is that the author's characters are very full - whether it is a supporting role like Theodore or the protagonist, the characters in the original work are not too OOC, the emotions happen naturally, and the scale is well grasped. The protagonist is very cute and does not look like an adult, but still retains a bit of boyishness and childishness brought about by the physical body. At the same time, it can also trigger people's thinking about their original family. From the current point of view, I feel that the shortcoming is that the author likes to stuff characters into a scene. This is a common problem. The characters are well created, but it also makes the readers look tired. Especially the author's writing style is more similar to traditional literature. I personally feel that the writing should be a "group portrait", not such a "group portrait", and the characters can be appropriately selected, added or subtracted. When the plot takes place, the author is obviously lacking in the description of the environment, and the dialogue transitions are a bit stiff, and there are no actions that make people think about it. It is very incoherent, and sometimes it gets messed up while reading. If you look at it from the perspective of traditional literature, this book can pass my passing mark. If it is an online novel, especially a fanfic, then this book can be said to be one of the high-quality HP fanfics I have read on Tomato in the past two years. I must highly praise the author's emotional line. It is not the kind of industrial saccharine that develops naturally and the logic is very smooth. It has the kind of youthful feeling that makes people smile. Even onlookers will cheer for their interaction. This kind of smooth logic is rare in Tomato.

Extremely delicious😋 ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧ Ayaz is really a cute little boy. The details are described very well. He is warm and unique. I like the plain and warm feeling. Now I am mainly looking forward to the relationship between Harry and Ayaz (◦˙▽˙◦). The description of the Slytherin boys is also very good. There is no academy stereotype. The relationship between the children is described very well. I really like it. Ayaz is so charming that I am going to be dazzled. Ayaz has a very unique charm. I like it very much! The characters are created very well! The description of friendship is very delicious, the characters all have unique charm, and the contradictions and conflicts are also very interesting. It feels like every character has his own soul! So delicious!!! I really like it and look forward to the emotional line. The relationship between Harry and Ayaz is written particularly well. I really like this warm way of getting along! (◦˙▽˙◦) Some suggestions: Because the main perspective is Ayaz, I'm not sure what some practices will look like from other people's perspectives. I feel like I can add some other people's perspectives. I'm curious about what Ayaz looks like according to other people's descriptions. I really want to eat the love thread (◦˙▽˙◦)! Final verdict: Delicious, delicious and super delicious! Like it, like it very much! Love love love love love! Shocking and delicious, the masterpiece of a masterpiece of chef😋 Master Penguin, please cook me delicious dishes again! It's so delicious that I'm going to faint from the aroma!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Is it because I changed my mobile phone to continue reading, but the reading time is only 10 hours? , Delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious delicious! The male ghost Ayaz is also very delicious, I am starting to look forward to the fourth grade plot [][][][][]

Very delicious hp article... I have read a lot of hp articles. Some focus too much on the emotional line and neglect the plot. Once the relationship is confirmed, the entire article loses its delicious color and becomes too sweet. Some of them were too sad, and the powerlessness across the screen made my hair turn gray and made me feel bitter. The author's writing is very moderate, and the salty and sweet flavors are the best! And what surprised me was that the articles had their own style and a different sense of delicacy. It's not the kind of crushed fine sand, nor the moonlight in some image, but the afternoon in my hometown, with children learning to ride bicycles in the alley, playing by... It's probably this kind of feeling. The whole article is filled with such an atmosphere that it makes people's corpses warm up... I have seen too many pulls on the edge of desire. This kind of beauty and youthfulness is more suitable for us elderly people... It is only after seeing this that I have the strength to pursue life...

It's super, super, super good-looking, and it doesn't look like Tomato's writing! Harry Attack* I have been looking for original male protagonist articles for many years, and this is the first time I have found one that I like 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 My wife wrote it so well

Why are there so few paragraphs in this book... The writing is clearly vivid and the plot is very smooth. If it is written at this quality, it will definitely be an excellent work.

The protagonist's character is very gentle and warm, the narrative rhythm is also good, and the suspense about the protagonist's life story set up by the author is also very attractive. And now it seems that he is not going to be a nanny for the trio. Although the CP is Harry, due to the relationship with the academy, the protagonist will not follow behind the trio to protect him. There is no trace of the original work. Recommended reading 💕 For the time being, other comments probably mean that there are secondary CPs: Theodore and Esmila. The author means that they will be written about them in the extra story. But I think the relationship between the two of them in the main text also has a strong sense of CP. I haven't watched much of it now. Their roles are quite large at least in the early stages. If there are book friends who can't accept the sub-CP, I suggest you read it with caution. I don't know if there will be other CPs in the future. I can't accept the deputy CP. It's okay to just mention a few words, but if there is a detailed description, I can't stand it 🤦 However, the author's writing style is indeed very good. The above are just personal criticisms. If you don't criticize the deputy CP, I still recommend reading 💕