The Big Shot Who Dimensionally Crushes the Quick Transmigration Worlds

It's really good-looking. I really like Xing's character design, but I think the plot is a bit weird. In the first copy, I felt that the two protagonists got together inexplicably. Although there may be a bond from the front, it seems to be very sloppy, and it is also a more important point. Dear author, can you give more details about Che?

I think the setting of the novel is quite good, and the ideas for each copy are pretty good. The author's original ideas should be very rich, but when reading the novel, the author's own expression problems cannot be fully displayed. Also, I only saw the more obvious three-dimensional characters, the protagonist Gong and the protagonist Shou, but the author probably wanted to write a micro-group portrait. The character traits of other characters were seriously weakened, especially the chosen ones in the second world. Their speech was almost the same. Generally speaking, it was a writing problem. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Many settings in this book are very novel, and there are no cliche formulas common to most novels nowadays, but it can be seen that the writing style is still a bit immature, and compared to me, the emotional line is drawn a little faster? But it's understandable. After all, it's about fast travel, so it's impossible to write a long story about each world. But I also really recommend this book! Currently, there are no plots involving the inexplicable weakening of the protagonist or breast hyperplasia such as system backstabbing, and the characters are very distinct. At the same time, the little sugar cake interactions between the young lovers are also very delicious! ⚠️Key points: Don't worry about the plot content, there will be no cliche plots or inexplicable weakening, but the emotional line is a little faster (personal) In terms of writing style, it has the immaturity of a new work. But it is also comfortable. There are no extremely gorgeous words or too bland descriptions. It is just the right feeling. If you ask me to describe it, it will be like a spring breeze? ⚠️Note on demining: This book is not mindless, and there are foreshadowings for the upgrades. You should know the general content of the book by reading the title, but aside from the title, you can guess the general background of the book just by looking at the foreshadowing in the text. Secondly, don't come here if you don't accept male-male love, don't come here if you don't like fast-paced narration, why do you need a slow pace to wear fast❗️❓ Finally, I want to say that the author of this article is very warm-hearted and not cold-hearted. He will have a little fun when he writes, and I would like to touch him!! When I saw Zuo Hua, I thought it was a new book, so I couldn't stop writing a book review [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] (Quickly click on one in a few minutes)

Look!!! Come and show it to me, it's so good. Give me a dozen novels with this setting. The character identity of the protagonist is made more real through the recognition in the world. The ending is also very good. It's not BE, but it's also a candy. I really love it 😳😳💕💕

I feel that the story line of this book will be relatively grand, and the background of the protagonist will not be simple. Overall it was okay, except that the first two worlds were a bit too rushed and rushed, and it felt like Kucha came to an end very suddenly. Especially the emotional line, I feel like I fell in love with the protagonist before he even did anything. I hope the author will work hard₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Why is the update discontinued!!! Why!!! Do you understand how good your writing is?!! I have no books to read!!! Woo woo woo 😢 😢 😢 Come back, author, come back 😢 😢 😢

It's very interesting. The author writes every world very well. It's very interesting. The author's IQ is really high and he's always online. The descriptions of other people are also very good. How can I describe it? It's a very interesting novel. It needs to have a character, a vest and a vest, and the cool points of the vest must be exposed, and there's violence. It's more fun to show off your waistcoat. I like this type of novel. The protagonist is very strong and other people know that the protagonist is very strong and mysterious. I just want to read this kind of novel. And this novel is simply tailor-made for me. It's super beautiful. I hope the author will continue to write at this level. It's super good-looking. You can read it~

At first, I passed it because of the Tik Tok tweets, but the more I read, the more I understood the protagonist's psychology. At first, it might be because of the mission, but later it was because he knew that this was a real world and they were living people. He was also infected by this emotion, but as the author said, there are many ordinary people in the world, both good and bad. Tongren, they are selfish, but they are also selfless. They want to keep the male protagonist, but in order to survive, they have to give up the male protagonist, so the male protagonist uses the mission as an excuse to save the world. According to the encounter between the male protagonist and another male protagonist, it may be like that cycle, or I fell in love with you outside the world (the above is my own opinion) But in some places the author's portrayal is still very good, and in some places it is still empathetic. The author needs to continue to work hard. I love you ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱ In fact, if possible, I think the male protagonist of the first world does not need to live, or it would be good to make him the savior. How can I put it? It's that kind of dead savior. The idea is... To make him a savior who will be remembered forever, and then build a new city on the site of the village because of him, and then build a statue of the male protagonist on the well. It is the kind of statue that is indescribable. You can think about this yourself, and then you will look at the male protagonist every time you attack, or miss him (the above are my own thoughts, because the ending feels a bit rushed, and the emotional line is not very well written) The author can hone in on how to write the emotional line. For other places, it's just small fragments. I think it's OK and very empathetic. As for the emotional line, I feel like you can write something where the male protagonist and the attacker are outside the world. You can also write it according to your original ideas. This is just a suggestion I give you.

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Highly recommended! Except for the fact that the plot is a bit messy at the beginning, and it doesn't make people feel pretending to be evil as mentioned in the introduction, all the designs are very good! Very to my taste! Big cheers for more updates! 😘