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It's really good-looking. I really like Xing's character design, but I think the plot is a bit weird. In the first copy, I felt that the two protagonists got together inexplicably. Although there may be a bond from the front, it seems to be very sloppy, and it is also a more important point. Dear author, can you give more details about Che?

I think the setting of the novel is quite good, and the ideas for each copy are pretty good. The author's original ideas should be very rich, but when reading the novel, the author's own expression problems cannot be fully displayed. Also, I only saw the more obvious three-dimensional characters, the protagonist Gong and the protagonist Shou, but the author probably wanted to write a micro-group portrait. The character traits of other characters were seriously weakened, especially the chosen ones in the second world. Their speech was almost the same. Generally speaking, it was a writing problem. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Many settings in this book are very novel, and there are no cliche formulas common to most novels nowadays, but it can be seen that the writing style is still a bit immature, and compared to me, the emotional line is drawn a little faster? But it's understandable. After all, it's about fast travel, so it's impossible to write a long story about each world. But I also really recommend this book! Currently, there are no plots involving the inexplicable weakening of the protagonist or breast hyperplasia such as system backstabbing, and the characters are very distinct. At the same time, the little sugar cake interactions between the young lovers are also very delicious! ⚠️Key points: Don't worry about the plot content, there will be no cliche plots or inexplicable weakening, but the emotional line is a little faster (personal) In terms of writing style, it has the immaturity of a new work. But it is also comfortable. There are no extremely gorgeous words or too bland descriptions. It is just the right feeling. If you ask me to describe it, it will be like a spring breeze? ⚠️Note on demining: This book is not mindless, and there are foreshadowings for the upgrades. You should know the general content of the book by reading the title, but aside from the title, you can guess the general background of the book just by looking at the foreshadowing in the text. Secondly, don't come here if you don't accept male-male love, don't come here if you don't like fast-paced narration, why do you need a slow pace to wear fast❗️❓ Finally, I want to say that the author of this article is very warm-hearted and not cold-hearted. He will have a little fun when he writes, and I would like to touch him! ! When I saw Zuo Hua, I thought it was a new book, so I couldn't stop writing a book review [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] (Quickly click on one in a few minutes)

Look! ! ! Come and show it to me, it's so good. Give me a dozen novels with this setting. The character identity of the protagonist is made more real through the recognition in the world. The ending is also very good. It's not BE, but it's also a candy. I really love it [shy][shy][send heart][send heart]

I feel that the story line of this book will be relatively grand, and the background of the protagonist will not be simple. Overall it was okay, except that the first two worlds were a bit too rushed and rushed, and it felt like Kucha came to an end very suddenly. Especially the emotional line, I feel like I fell in love with the protagonist before he even did anything. I hope the author will work hard₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Why is the update discontinued! ! ! Why! ! ! Do you understand how good your writing is? ! ! I have no books to read! ! ! Woo woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] Come back, author, come back [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's very interesting. The author writes every world very well. It's very interesting. The author's IQ is really high and he's always online. The descriptions of other people are also very good. How can I describe it? It's a very interesting novel. It needs to have a character, a vest and a vest, and the cool points of the vest must be exposed, and there's violence. It's more fun to show off your waistcoat. I like this type of novel. The protagonist is very strong and other people know that the protagonist is very strong and mysterious. I just want to read this kind of novel. And this novel is simply tailor-made for me. It's super beautiful. I hope the author will continue to write at this level. It's super good-looking. You can read it~

At first, I passed it because of the Tik Tok tweets, but the more I read, the more I understood the protagonist's psychology. At first, it might be because of the mission, but later it was because he knew that this was a real world and they were living people. He was also infected by this emotion, but as the author said, there are many ordinary people in the world, both good and bad. Tongren, they are selfish, but they are also selfless. They want to keep the male protagonist, but in order to survive, they have to give up the male protagonist, so the male protagonist uses the mission as an excuse to save the world. According to the encounter between the male protagonist and another male protagonist, it may be like that cycle, or I fell in love with you outside the world (the above is my own opinion) But in some places the author's portrayal is still very good, and in some places it is still empathetic. The author needs to continue to work hard. I love you ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱ In fact, if possible, I think the male protagonist of the first world does not need to live, or it would be good to make him the savior. How can I put it? It's that kind of dead savior. The idea is... To make him a savior who will be remembered forever, and then build a new city on the site of the village because of him, and then build a statue of the male protagonist on the well. It is the kind of statue that is indescribable. You can think about this yourself, and then you will look at the male protagonist every time you attack, or miss him (the above are my own thoughts, because the ending feels a bit rushed, and the emotional line is not very well written) The author can hone in on how to write the emotional line. For other places, it's just small fragments. I think it's OK and very empathetic. As for the emotional line, I feel like you can write something where the male protagonist and the attacker are outside the world. You can also write it according to your original ideas. This is just a suggestion I give you.

I don't really like reading novels, but I fell in love immediately after seeing the tweets about this book. I never thought in this life that I would become a novel girl [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

Highly recommended! Except for the fact that the plot is a bit messy at the beginning, and it doesn't make people feel pretending to be evil as mentioned in the introduction, all the designs are very good! Very to my taste! Big cheers for more updates! [Blowing kiss]

I picked it up through book recommendation. The content is quite exciting and it's my favorite type. It seems very nice at the moment. For someone like me who only has the patience to read a dozen or so chapters of Kuaishou, I won't feel bored even if I read twenty or thirty chapters. It's the serialization that will always pain me. The author will update soon [currently working on the manuscript] [blowing kiss]

It smells so good, the rhythm is fast and imaginative, and it is relaxing yet moderate. The settings of each world are slowly filled in. It's been a long time since I've read such a new article, and I finally stopped reading my old booksヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

It's good-looking, very good-looking, really good-looking. It has cured my book famine, but why haven't I grown up yet? Dear author, can you let me see your manuscript storage box? If not, can you update it ten times a day? Really want to see, want to see, want to see, want to see

It's a very nice book, so good cheers to the author! It will definitely be popular!!![Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Shy][Shy][Shy] This is my dream love letter!

Teacher, can we play a role play, and you play the role of a domineering president. His slender fingers slowly went around his waist and took out a stack of manuscripts from his pocket. After rolling his Adam's apple up and down, he opened his thin lips and said to me: Woman, you have successfully caught my attention. This is the 10,000 chapter manuscript. After reading it,

I like the world view and characters and the main plot, but after reading two copies, it seems that the main plot and the emotional line are very separate. The emotional line is a bit too confusing, but there are so many emotional lines inserted during the plot, which makes even the main plot feel like a young couple later (). Maybe the author just likes this kind of flavor of two male protagonists having a strong relationship and falling in love, but it is really a pity for the plot part. And although I only read 2 dungeons, it seems that they are more vulnerable to strong attacks (if there are any slaps in the face later, I sincerely apologize and reflect on it😣), it is obviously normal for the two of them to write separately, but how come the characters are so weird once they are together in the plot... What a pity... Come on, teacher. And if the plot becomes exciting in the future, be sure to give me a kick and I will come back to watch it again.

It's really nice to watch. Each small world has a very novel and attractive "character design". Although the overall progress is a bit fast, it is really fun to watch. The characters in each world are a bit mysterious and powerful like the Riddler.

It's good-looking. The character of the main character is very well developed so far. I can't help but feel affection for you [Sending my heart to you]. The framework is also very good and the writing is okay. I didn't expect to finish reading it in one go. Dear author, please work hard and update it [Grief]

Okay, okay, I really like this type of novel. But there are very few protagonists who write this type of novels that I like more. After all, I am really good at reading novels. The author needs to work harder [shy][shy]

Very nice! It's just that the author's writing style still feels a little green, but it shows that he has worked hard and the setting is great👍🏻This is a novel worth reading! ! ! [Blows a kiss] I hope more people see it! ! ! I saw that the author wanted to review the book, so I wanted to share my thoughts. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, the subject matter is very novel, and the author's writing is also very good. I like Shen Xing's character design very much. I have already finished reading one plane. The plot is well written, but I don't know why the update was discontinued. I hope the author is okay in the third dimension.

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It looks good. The first world is a bit cruel. Let me take another look.

This book is endlessly beautiful! ! ! I originally wanted to stock up on bicycles and turn them into motorcycles, but I couldn't help it [crying] [laughing] Only then did I realize that it was locked in a dark room. I will wait until it is released! ! ! On the day it is released, will the boss be so happy that he will update 100 chapters? ! (Dreaming.

I've finished watching the first world so far, and I really like the plot! Although the author has not handled some of the more spectacular and stunning scenes so well, it is really very good! I like both the characters and the worldview very much! I can see it very quickly. I hope the author will work hard to update it and don't let me catch up with you!

It looks great. I really like the characters in the first world. I couldn't help reading it after reading the introduction. I don't care if the article is finished or not. Dear author, please turn into a typewriter! Ten updates a day is not a dream! I haven't watched the second world yet, but I can't help but comment first! The long-haired beauty in red, my love [blowing kiss]

This book is really, really, really beautiful. I can guarantee that this is the most beautiful book I have ever read. And the main thing is that the story in it is also the most beautiful, and it's really, really, really, really beautiful. The main reason is that this kind of book cannot be thought of or described in any language. Really, really, really, really beautiful. Hey, the main thing is that it's really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really good to read. Well, if you're book hungry and bored, then please open this book. It's really, really, really, really, really good to read.

I hate that I found this book too early, but I also hate that I found it too late (´O｀)

I found it after seeing the tweet; it's really good to watch. I stayed up late to finish reading it, but it wasn't enough. I'll update and update [send my heart] [send my heart]

The content is very interesting \(//∇//)\, I am really looking forward to the world of Gu Master! ! !