National Games Invasion: Playing the Female Version of Zhang Qiling at the Beginning

It looks great. I hope I can have a chance to draw the Zhang family's little ones in the future. I love them [adoration][adoration][adoration] and want to see the scene between them and the patriarch. [Love] [Love] [Love] Moreover, we can also see that the Zhang family's Zaizai and the patriarch have joined forces to overcome obstacles together, so that the patriarch doesn't have to be so tired, woo woo [cry]

It's not bad, but I don't like having cp. Isn't pure friendship bad? I'm really looking forward to the interaction of pure friendship. Please don't write too many ambiguous interactions between the two of them.

It looks pretty good, and it feels like the heroine is not playing someone, she is her. Although the emotional line is a little abrupt, it is not ugly. The description of other participants is not very good, especially the female members. More than once, other participants were described as freezing and screaming in dangerous moments. Although each has its own highlights, it still feels relatively useless. It's still very interesting, I hope the author can write better and better.

The adventure plot is well described, exciting and thrilling, the heroine and Wu Xie are very close to each other, and the relationship between the iron triangle goes from shallow to deep very smoothly. Looking at other players' perspectives in the early stages is a bit boring and could be reduced a bit.

It's super, super good-looking. Although it made me feel sad in the middle and later stages, in the end I really felt Ah Ling's happiness. She was finally no longer alone, and there was a group of people who would firmly choose her forever. I was really touched. From feeling sorry for Ah Ling to feeling happy for her, my tears never stopped. Author, why are you so good at writing? It seems that this is the second time I have commented so long, and it is all about novels related to Aling. I always thought that I did not like Aling very much, but when I encountered the novel that was written in my heart, I discovered that "I was shocked that I didn't show my lovesickness, but it turned out that it was just because my love was deep in my bones, and I didn't know where it started."

The plot isn't great! Not bad, the plot is interesting, I like it! ≧^≦ Keep it for now and look forward to further development. It ended really quickly = ͟͟͞͞(꒪^꒪ ‧) Woohoo~

Wow, how can it be so beautiful! I've rewatched it twice and I still feel like I can't get enough of it! Every character in it is very personal. I really like this book written by the author. No matter how many times I read it, I will never get tired of it. And I really love the two-way relationship between Brother and Wu Xie and others. It makes people's hearts warm when they watch it. I hope everyone will be well in the end and leave no regrets.

The author really writes well. Whether it is the protagonist's concern for Wu Xie or the reaction of subconsciously protecting Wu Xie after the onset of aphansia, it all gives me the feeling that she is Zhang Qiling.

Very good, I feel like the female version of the guy. The writing is quite good, but the fat guy's writing is not very three-dimensional. The fat guy is too lively and funny at the moment. Is it using AI? It's not that I object to it, I just feel that it's a bit long-winded and over-emphasized. I'm not saying it's bad. Every author can write very well!

I have collected the teacher's book before, and it is a good book with great potential. However, I did not accompany him in the update later because of his emotional relationship, so I feel regretful here. But I read it again today and found that the teacher's writing style is more mature than before. I hope the author and teacher will continue to work hard. But I still want to give some small suggestions to teachers. What is necessary is about the emotional line (don't criticize it as just your personal opinion). First of all, I feel that Zhang has become more energetic since I met Wu and gained weight. The teacher handled this very well. However, Wu's feelings for Zhang feel a bit abrupt, and seem to be progressing too fast (whatever it is). The teacher can try to slow down the emotional line and describe more psychological aspects and some small partialities in details, but it does not need to be so obvious. (You can also try to describe some interactions with other players) Afterwards, under the premise of such details, the enhanced relationship will be less abrupt and more natural. Then there is the issue of the strength of teammates and opponents. To be honest, the combat power of other people with fighting ability is a bit overpowered. (Uh-huh, I read the introduction a long time ago. Maybe I didn't notice that the teacher had done something like this) Regarding strength, another important point is that the teacher does not need to focus on writing those characters. In addition to the protagonist, you can also describe more about other people. [Although I don't know what qualifications I have to evaluate such a great author and work, I still want to remind the teacher of these points! Come on, teacher, I hope your books and your writing skills will become better and better.

It's great. Although the protagonist plays the role of a younger brother, he has his own ideas.

It seems like I saw a silent snatching of the body

The writing is very good, no occ feeling, great, recommended! !

I really like Pingxie CP, it's so beautiful [admiration]

So sweet, I like this pair of cp [shy] author, please don't give up, I will keep chasing

What struck me the most about this novel was Guan Gen (the middle-aged version of Wu Xie), who is really amazing! The collision of youth and middle age, the transformation of good into evil. When I heard the name Guan Gen, I felt so familiar. Later I remembered that it was Guan Gen in the Sea of ​​Sand, referred to as Evil Emperor. Wu Xie in the Sea of ​​Sand is the most charming and craziest. The writing is very good. We can come together even when time and space are intertwined. Friendship transcends love. Give the author a thumbs up! ! !

I really can't hold back Zhou Rui and Lei Tao, they are so beautiful, everyone is so sweet, they are all good babies Fire Tongs Liu Ming So well written! Absolute top fan! ! ! The character interactions are sweet and humorous. It's so beautiful. Seriously, I'll cry if no one watches it.

I really failed, how could I be so good? Just imagine, if you change the gender a little, you will definitely be the real guy. He already is, just change the title slightly. Just change the person's pronoun, it won't look any better໒꒰ྀི ∩⸝⸝∩ ꒱ྀི১

Not bad, but not enough. Can you update a few more chapters?

The logical structure is clear and makes people look at it without getting dizzy.

It's very good to watch, the female lead looks very similar, and it has some funny content, which is just right. The author keeps up the great work!!

Looks good. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it. I like it.

I laughed so much that my stomach hurts from laughing now

It's so beautiful. I feel so sorry for you. I'm going to cry to death when I see it. There's also innocence.

It's so addictive, so good-looking, the heroine looks like the female version of the guy who has already experienced it once

Since the words in it have pinyin, I get full marks.

Nice! If anyone says he doesn't look good, I'll slap him [laughing evilly]

Not bad. If you want to read this kind of material, you can read this book

Like industrial saccharine, too many barrages, but the plot is pretty good

Very beautiful, I am very satisfied with the CP [Admiration]