Transformers: a Journey Through Time as a Double Wave

Beautiful things are always remembered But then again I just didn't give him full stars, so his rating couldn't rise, but he regarded me as an enemy and would never stop fighting. Although He has lost His rating, He still has me! I can completely replace the score and be with him, right? I'm sorry that you can't spend this holiday happily. Let me think about how I should express my apology. If you want, I can go and perform in front of you and cry bitterly. [Sinister smile]

The current look and feel is good, I think the writing is okay, but some small details are not handled very well, and the previous chapters (not sure about the latter) have been written in the previous chapter, but some details may have been added in the later, which has become a new chapter. It does not mean anything else, it is the plot that has been seen before, and I have to watch it again later. It just doesn't feel very good, but I am afraid of missing some small details, so I think if I think the later writing is better, I can delete the first part. The subject matter is quite interesting. The stage I've seen so far is a bit stressful and depressing, but it's okay. Also, there are very few chapters at the moment, so I don't recommend writing so many extras. I looked at all the chapters, and basically the extras account for almost 1/2. In fact, I want to advance the main plot more than the extras. Ah, of course, it's just my personal idea. There must be some people who like to read extras. It all depends on the author's wishes. I just recommend it. It can be seen that the author likes to publish extras, but my suggestion is to post them in a group. When I was reading the article, I saw that you had created a group, but I don't know why I entered the group number or searched for the name, but couldn't find it. The extras can be put there, so that it will not affect the ability to read the main text.

It's not too much to give yourself a good review, right?

I was writing about happiness and gray while watching my classmates write about Transformers ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃElegance

Not bad, not bad, the update speed is very fast. There are so many updates in less than a month, and the maximum update is more than 10,000 words a day. Who else?

Another good-looking Transformers double-wave novel

Very nice but very little

I've read Chapter 10, and it feels great. The AI ​​feels a bit heavy, but it doesn't affect its beauty (approved by a bookworm who has spent more than 4,000 hours. JPG)

Interesting new topic

Good, very good, also created by two people

The writing style is okay. Logically speaking, 300,000 words shouldn't be without [anything] rated.