Ordinary People's Time-Travel Life on Campus in Another World

The following is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me. As for why I want to post a comment in a book review, it's because I don't know what to do (justifiably) because this is one of the few comments I've made since I've been reading the book for so long. Anyway, actually I don't want to say much. Mainly because I have seen this chapter 185 now. Seeing the scene where the main character suddenly turned dark, I suddenly felt a little bad. I thought about it carefully before posting this comment. I just think that the description of the protagonist's darkening is a bit lacking in foreshadowing. It feels like the transformation is a bit abrupt when I see this. I think it would be better to add a little more foreshadowing in the front to let readers feel the character of the protagonist. It's also easier to bring in. Mainly because I think it's a bit weird that a lighthearted and funny article suddenly turns into a tough guy article. And the change of the protagonist is too sudden. No, I think the character of the protagonist should not accept it so quickly. It should be able to be watered down, but it shouldn't be able to be written a little more. I could write a little more here, and write a few more chapters to better explain the story, and let readers get into the protagonist better. In short, as I said before, I was just a little worried about the protagonist's sudden darkening, but I didn't think anything of it. Let the author change it. I just posted it to complain about it. I also know that now that I have written this, it will be difficult to suddenly change the front part. But I always feel that there could actually be a little more foreshadowing in the front.

Campus life feels okay

It's okay, but the novel is suspected of rectification, resulting in many typos, and then the two poor brothers and sisters in the second world have a little water, and there are basically no major problems in the rest. But looking at the situation in the second world, I feel a little want to throw a knife, but I feel that it is revealed too quickly. This is only the second chapter. It is not difficult to guess from the language that the teachers will end up with the price of repetition and so on. And then from Angelina's three colors of old wood, it is not difficult to guess that there may be sprouts from death!

A very good group portrait article, covering both laughter and depth, it is funny and thought-provoking, and there are some sweets that make people smile from time to time, and the author is now as good as cheating ✪ω✪

The plot is good and interesting. I quite liked it 200 chapters ago. I must have been tricked into it by the title of the book.

This novel is very good and heartwarming. I really like this type of novel, but there are too few novels of this type. This novel is quite similar to the "My Life is Absurd" that I read before. The protagonists are all nonsensical, but the protagonist of this novel is more profound. I hope the author can continue writing. I really hope to see the ending, but I don't want it to end so quickly. I feel that there are a lot of things to write. Anyway, I am looking forward to it, thank you.

Very good, I like it very much.

The plot and features are all there, and the writing is okay. But you forgot one thing that is necessary for writing novels, focus

A very good novel, not bad [like] It's really good

Very well written, please keep up the good work (=^▽^=) According to what I know about him, he is definitely holding something back. I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and the mysterious man is definitely related to the protagonist, or he may be the protagonist.

Come on, brother who writes novels! ! !

The story as a whole is very heartwarming, each student has a distinct personality, and the protagonist is also very funny. It's worth watching.

A bit novice, but okay. I like this relaxed rhythm [][][]

A very good novel

Looks good, support the author

Very nice, very nice.

Good, good, good, good!

Give you a like, I like it very much

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that it was abandoned and promoted.

The number of readers is a bit small, and there aren't many comments.

Are there finally ratings? Come on come on!

A very good book, I hope the author can continue writing

Hao Kan [laughs] If I hadn't accidentally turned a page after finishing the update at that time, I'm afraid I would never have found this novel in my life (the reason why I commented suddenly is because I also have a role to vote for [laughs])

Encourage the author Okay, it's a very interesting novel.

There's nothing to say, just watch it

It's very beautifully written.

Very good book

It's still pretty good so far

It's okay, but it looks a little strange in some places.

A very good book, worth reading