Tang San Has Become My Brother! How to Repay This Debt?

I have seen Xiao Wu dismantle Tang San, and it is not uncommon to see Oscar Ning Rongrong being dismantled. Even if Xiao Wu endured it to the death, it would be interesting to see a couple together. I have only read 20 chapters. Although the first 19 chapters have been changed a bit, aren't the second creations just different stories in the same world? I can understand it, but when I first met Dai Mubai in Soto City, Dai Mubai's magic transformation was really a bit too much for me. The author could have written this in the introduction and emphasized it. I barely had a book that was pleasing to the eye, but I fell into a trap unexpectedly [Petrochemical]

I really like it, and it also combines Under One Person and Dou Er, ah, ah, they are my favorites, and they sound very smooth. I feel like I can't read any books recently. I have seen the last chapter of this update. The emotional line is not particularly eye-catching, which is quite good. Hahaha, I finally found a good article that has not yet been rated, but I found that many Douluo fanfics have to lower their scores, otherwise they may be banned.

I have read a hundred chapters and commented. Five stars for encouragement. The main plot is 3.5-4★ And the branch plot is 4-4.3★. (Write comments wherever you think of them) The strength of the protagonist is set very well, and it's very lovable without being over-leveled. The current plot is similar to the original, but with other elements added, it's not just following the original, which is great. The protagonist's experience of going on missions in other worlds is interspersed in the middle. I personally think it is better than the main plot. The author can write a separate "one-person" novel. The following are the places where I feel like catching horses↓↓ The description of the text is a bit heavy, resulting in a slight lack of story sense and a sense of life. The characters are not very distinct and one-sided. I wanted to watch the protagonist play a game, but unfortunately, I saw the final where the protagonist only appeared for a few seconds, and the opponent was gone in an instant. In the introduction, Tang Ling and San are CPs, but in the article, their sense of CP is not strong. Ling and San's CP sense is not as strong as that of Ling and Wang Ye. She does too many things. People who focus on their career are actually not suitable for love. You can look at it as if there is no CP.

This book is super good. My language expression is not very good, but I really recommend reading this book. The content is very exciting. In the beginning, the heroine's father took him to escape and eventually died. Then the heroine traveled through time in the river and became the baby, and then met Tang San... The heroine became Tang San's sister. After Tang San awakened, he did not go to school, but waited until the heroine also awakened before going to school... Female Later, the Lord also met people from the Mo clan who came to see her. Her identity was the young clan leader... Later, she also traveled to other worlds, one of which seemed to be anti-Japanese, and the other was Wang Ye's anime (it seemed to be called Under One Person), and she also traveled to the world of Douluo II. I liked watching it... The author's writing style is really good, highly recommended👍🏻

Who is the male protagonist, Tang San?

It's so good. To be honest, this is the best Chinese Douluo fan fiction I've found. I can really read this one. Unlike other diplomas, I almost didn't have the desire to read it. The logic is okay.

It's very beautiful. The heroine's martial spirit is very strong, and the family background behind her is also very deep. Even Bibi Dong's Enshrinement Hall is afraid of it. Moreover, this book has split the original CPs Dai and Zhu, which is a bit dark and Dai Mubai, but the author has found an original CP for Zhu Zhuqing. I won't reveal the details! The relationship with Tang San is also very good. Everyone, go watch it, it's very interesting! !

If you like it, come and see more. I will definitely vote for this novel, it's so good

Awesome, good-looking, the subject matter looks great, I was fascinated by it as soon as I saw it, but it's a little lacking

Can you let the heroine suffer more injuries? I want to see the three of them protecting me, Ling Er.

Invincible Universe is beautiful.

Who is the fanfic with whom?

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Why didn't the author update it later? I watched it wonderfully, but the result told me that it was gone.

It looks good, but why did Dai Mubai get written like this? 😂

I like this book, please update it more often [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Does anyone else like to read articles where the protagonist is a girl as much as I do?

It would be great if he could wear Zhu Xian and change Baguio's life because he is so beautiful.

I feel like it very much

Please update soon, I've been waiting for a long time to move the bench!

It's so good to see it.

Nice! Love watching! Like to watch!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

. It has a different taste, which really surprised me.

Love it, love it, really love it, but it's just not enough [cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting, keep up the good work, and write the second version of the peerless Tang Sect Tang San and Tang Ling's daughter CP Huo Yuhao

Although it's a little different from the original, it's still pretty good.

Ahhhh, the author is great, it's so good. I'm really looking forward to the author's follow-up updates! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

This is the best score. I think it's super invincible and looks great.

I think it's really, really beautiful.