Arknights: The Sarkaz Who Escaped Babel

It can be seen that the author must have a relatively long-term plan. The foreshadowing of Longmen and the reveal of the protagonist's abilities can be seen that the author at least has an outline for the later plot. The female protagonist, a native of Terra, has no system. Weibai (for now) has strong Origin Stone skills but can't use them (this can ensure that the combat power will not collapse and can be reasonably strengthened in the later stage). The plot makes sense logically (at least I didn't find anything particularly unreasonable). The rhythm is moderate, the thinking is clear, and it's worth reading [Chigua] Of course, there are problems. Amiya's OOC is a bit serious. Although Amiya prefers girls, she will never do the kind of thing in Chapter 6 of Volume 2, and it is impossible for Kelsey to not know about Amiya's psychological condition (if this is also foreshadowing, let's talk about it separately).

Shocking and delicious Let's talk about the conclusion first. This article has strong general applicability and strong countermeasures. It is a super big cup. The pace is moderate and the emotional descriptions are delicate. The most important thing is that the author updates basically a large chapter of three to four thousand words (more than), which is large and full.

The character portrayal is good. If there were similar memes like "This Land" every day, more people would be attracted to it. After all, it is also a good choice to appropriately increase the interest of the article. Also, what kind of cup is Xue Xiang? If the author has time, he can "create" an operator file and skill module about Snowfall. It feels good to have a curse healer as a template. After all, the protagonist can heal and deal damage. All in all, I didn't feel any discomfort while reading it. I hope the author can add more chapters.

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4s would have died if hit by A1 strafing. Other than that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with Huaguoshan A sentence said by 108 Monkeys: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation towards the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, clear system, many foreshadowing and immersive fighting scenes, and the character description is very good! This book is very well written. Good, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash Q to save Transformer Q when Sun Wukong The inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng Q? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from Q, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone to Siguo Cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong Q, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting

In the early stages of the novel, the description of Amiya's yandere attributes felt a bit too deliberate, and the protagonist seemed a bit aggrieved in the early stages of Dragon Gate. But the author has also slowly corrected some shortcomings in future writing. It can be seen that the author really wants to write this book well. But this book has a very fatal flaw - it is updated too slowly and is not enough to read. (Purely personal opinion, please ignore if you don't like it) Lao Zuo, don't force me, please. Please update more, otherwise the children will starve to death. 😢😢😢

Xue Xiang is really cute and has been growing up. The early stage was indeed difficult, but she still has people who love her and people she loves. You can also handle W easily, which is good 😄

This book is one of the few Ark fan fictions that I still read. I like to see the interaction between Xue Jiang and others. It only had 100,000 words at the beginning and now it has hundreds of thousands of words. It is not very short. I would like to give it a five-star encouragement. Author, if you don't update, I'll spank you [OK].

The person Miu Miu likes is the protagonist's sister. Those who don't accept it can leave, and then it's quite sad. The abuser comes. Although the protagonist is very strong, the past he carries is too heavy. I feel that the direction of this book is not about redemption but about watching a person live in pain until he dies. No matter where the protagonist is, there will be plots that will jump out and make the protagonist lose control. It tortures the protagonist's psychology. I feel a little uncomfortable reading it. The writing is quite satisfactory.

Arknights fan fiction is considered to be an above-average batch. After reading it for so long, I feel really good. Xiao Xuexiang has been growing up, which is really good. Everyone's feelings are well written. There are basically no OOC situations. They are all handled very well. Gravity, please come more hehehe [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] Boss, please update a few more pictures. I see that there are no big problems until now. Please update, boss [sending my heart]

Very nice author, keep up the good work