当直男穿成聊斋里的倒霉王生

Read 50 chapters. Advantages: The plot and writing are excellent, the rhythm is tight, and it has the classical charm of a Chinese chat room, with a strong sense of substitution and a well-created ancient atmosphere; the events are drawn out naturally, and the refreshing points are appropriately arranged; the writing style is humorous and humorous, and the characters are distinct and full of personality; the protagonist is cute as a group favorite, and the writing is graceful and smooth, in line with the characteristics of female channel works. Disadvantages: The author often spoils the story in the comments, which affects the reader's interactive experience; the character creation of the character is too weak, and the ability is insufficient but he often puts himself in danger. His kindness lacks deep personality charm, and relies more on his superior background, outstanding appearance and talent, which is shown as a kind of alms pity; the plot setting is slightly idealized, such as falling in love at first sight, showing all-out good intentions, and lagging rationality. Insufficient; the offensive character has a weak sense of boundaries, excessive possessiveness and protectiveness, a huge disparity in strength between the two sides, and a lack of motivation for growth; the subject does not refuse or take the initiative when flirting with women, and although the title says "straight man", this is not reflected in it. He has shown little desire for beautiful characters many times, and he is more of a "cute mascot loved by everyone"; although the emotional line is sweet, it falls into the traditional template of the boss's little wife, with limited innovation.

Good-looking and good-looking, Little Couple 99, Wang Yuanqing, the name sounds good, it sounds like (meaning it sounded like in ancient times) the son of a noble person, Li Suifeng, the name also sounds good, it sounds like a monk at first glance, both of them have good-sounding names, it can be seen that the author has obtained it carefully, and this is a light-hearted and cruelty-free sweet cookie! Everyone, feel free to rush! The most important thing is that there is no deputy CP, no ex-girlfriend/boyfriend literature, and Bai Yueguang/Cinnabar Moles and other literature. The two of them love each other, 99

It's so interesting. I read it in one sitting. Everyone is so cute, especially the group of children from aristocratic families. The furry and little paper figures of Vision are so cute. Hahahaha.

Very interesting! First of all, I like to watch heartthrobs, so I came here for the heartthrobs. But after reading the latest version of this article, I feel that the main character is not a heartthrob, but it doesn't matter, it is very interesting anyway, mainly because of the story! The protagonist is actually an ordinary person, but a very cute ordinary person. I like it very much! ! It feels a bit like self-defeating, hehe, and then, the little paper man is very cute! And the little paper man can be regarded as a distraction, so you can knock him out hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, I really like the interaction between the protagonist and the little paper man! I'm so cute!

I chased it all the way, and I personally felt that it was very good-looking. Li Daoren is really like a cold-faced person who washes underwear. He is arrogant but always explains for Wang Yuanqing or deceives himself. Like a love brain, Wang has his own difficulties and so on. The other characters are also designed to be full-bodied. I am really looking forward to the follow-up development. The plot is also very suspenseful and logical.

Personally, I feel that the summary of CP is "Man and machine have no brains × Bian Mu is unhappy" (?) "Super cute interaction + daily life of strange people" light comedy! Everyone who has seen it said it's good! (Is it really a light comedy? (I really feel happy... (Knelt down))) The author is very good at writing, and it feels like a light weight. In short, it is a very, very comfortable reading experience... A book that can be read smoothly once you accept "This is a Liaozhai" Go ahead. …I thought I would be surprised. The plot of "someone unilaterally believes that they are already talking about it" was also shown very well and not embarrassing at all (⁍̥̥̥᷄д⁍̥̥̥᷅)… Is this right? But I love this one, boss! . . . I will follow! ! ! Ahem, then the hawking starts! Don't miss it if you pass by! We are brothers and we will watch "Being a Straight Man Dressed Up as the Unlucky Prince from a Chinese Liaozhai" together! (Confusing behavior) Once you accept "This is a Chinese Strange Story", you will have a great time reading it...! ! ! (Suddenly appears with a rose in his mouth) Sa! This is the author's super story beatdown! ! You should try it too! ! ! ! (Shakes head) (strokes bangs) (winkwinkwinkkkkk)

A very "measured" book. The novelty of the Liaozhai theme has won half the battle, and the "property" aspect has directly raised the quality of the entire book to a new level. Many Tomato writers end up writing novels that are either too full or too spacey, or the whole book's rhythm collapses, both in terms of plot and writing style. This is the most subtle point of the author. It is not just a pile of words that makes the text empty, nor is it too vain to make the writing childish and lacking. The vernacular flavor of the characters' dialogues cannot be faulted, and it has surpassed many people in Western countries. It is also because of "proportion" that the lightness and sadness between the lines are fully revealed. The theme of Liaozhai is a product of satire on the political climate of the time, and sorrow is inevitable. The cleverness of this article is to use the most bland narrative to resolve excessive sorrow. While the original text laments the decline of the world, it also has a good look and feel. It combines the examination of the times and the self-view, and the author's literary quality is evident. Talking about the novel itself, the emotional line and the plot line of the whole text are smoothly connected and not separated. From the first love and hidden feelings to the declaration of love and staying together for a long time, there is no abruptness. It's difficult to describe the emotional drama skills of many authors. The author's literary drama and psychological analysis are not top-notch, but they are definitely above the average level. If you feel good, you can watch it with confidence. Compared with the first three hundred chapters which focus on emotional development and plot advancement, I personally think that the last thirty chapters of Wang Yuanqing's life are the most outstanding part. The progress of the last fifty chapters of the book speeds up significantly, just like life - the best years always have infinite colors that can be painted, while the indifference after experiencing the glory of spring is as fleeting as running water. Use realistic writing and plain narrative to tell the second half of Wang Yuanqing's life after he became a highly respected minister, retired after success, and became an immortal. Life is like this, life is as gorgeous as summer flowers and then comes to a dull end, and death is shocking without too much description. Of course, as the first book of a new author, the shortcomings are quite obvious. Wang Yuanqing's past is actually not fully written. Past life experience is actually very important for character creation. Whether the current protagonist has changed from the previous life and the reasons can greatly complete the character's color. I hope the author can be more refined in shaping the protagonist in the next book! Finally, I would like to express my favorite ending sequence - "As Li Suifeng goes further and further away, the two people's figures are gradually erased from the world." This is what it feels like to feel lost. Ps: Looking forward to the author's new book & I hope the author can randomly drop some extra stories ε(○´∀`)з in the future

It's a very nice book. I've rarely seen such a well-written book. However, there was a scene in the middle where I was almost mad at the protagonist because he was born in a thatched cottage and was not afraid of tigers. He finally got a little paper figurine but showed it off. When I saw this, I almost gave up the book because I was really pissed off. The protagonist is so stupid, but I saw the author promised that after this time, the protagonist will not be stupid again, so I insisted on reading it. I found that the subsequent plots became more and more interesting as I read them, so book friends who come later must insist on reading. This book is really good. I highly recommend [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]

Good-looking, really good-looking! At first, I had a dispensable mentality, because I had read a novel about Liaozhaizhushou before, and the protagonist was stupid enough to leave the show. Then in this book, when I saw the plot where the protagonist got the little paper figurine and couldn't wait to see it, I felt like it was coming again, and it was coming again, and then I felt like it was this stupid protagonist again, knowing that there are tigers in the mountains, but preferring to go to the tiger mountain. But at the time I was listening to the book, and I left it on while doing other things. However, after listening to it, I found that the author actually wrote the plot quite fully, and the characters had logic. The protagonist also grew up later, and he was very aware of current affairs. The obsession between the attacker and the enemy was heart-warming. Judging from the level of many current authors who can only express industrial saccharine, the emotional progression and entanglement of the attacker and the enemy in this article are still relatively natural and real.

I can't get enough of it😭😭, the little couple is so adorable that my heart skips a beat, they are so cute.😋The boss is so down-to-earth, the portions are very generous, the taste is also popular, and the price-performance ratio is very high. From now on, he will become the royal chef of my family. The packaging is really thoughtful, the taste, quality and service are as good as ever, and the quality is definitely worth the price. It's a daily delicacy. The portion is too big and can't be eaten by one person, but it's delicious. If you like it, write about the service attitude. The delivery is fast and the taste is great. I will come again next time!

It's good to read, and the subject matter is very novel. Anyway, I haven't seen any articles with the theme of Liaozhai on Tomato. The writing style is good, the plot is also good, it's quite relaxing, it's almost equal, and there are no surprises. The most uncomfortable thing is that I have to wait for the update again (tears)

This book is the first one I have read on the subject of Liaozhai. It is very interesting (I even want to read the original Liaozhai (╹▽╹)). The character of the male protagonist is very much like that of a young master from an aristocratic family (≧▽≦). The author's writing style is also very good and very attractive to read (☆▽☆)

A very delicious book (๑´༥`๑)𐂐, the author has perfectly integrated the world view of Liaozhai with the novel. The young couple is so good to eat⌯>ᴗo⌯ .ᐟ.ᐟ It's so fun for us, Xiao Wang and Lao Li, to get along with each other ૮₍ˊᗜˋ₎აLittle Couple 99ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ The female authors in Liaozhai who were oppressed by feudal ideas also gave them a good ending. Evil people will be rewarded with evil ヾ(･`⌓´･)ﾉﾞOur Wang Yuanqing has a very correct outlook on life! ! ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡Finally, I wish the little couple 99 author a happy day every day ૮₍♡>𖥦<₎ა

It's good to watch, but it's missing one star because the scene between Chang'e and the fox happened to be my favorite, because in my opinion, the fox's brave courtship is a one-sided selfish entanglement. He doesn't hesitate to affect the career of his sweetheart and only considers himself. If you change the gender, you will be an illegitimate idiot. In the end, Chang'e is the victim. I felt that I had been bewitched and demoted to the mortal world. I was a coward who never dared to face my own weaknesses. I was not qualified to be cold to the fox. Then I left hand in hand with the fox. The victim and the selfish idiot were happily reunited. Maybe I didn't like the fox because I hadn't read the original story.

It's so sweet and cute. It's a very sweet and cute book [a heart-warming gift] that's perfect for reading when you're decompressing. It's so sweet that I kept making my aunt laugh while I was reading it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I just hope that the Taoist priest and the protagonist can communicate with each other as soon as possible. I feel that the protagonist still has a good impression of the Taoist priest. How can he be so clingy to a good brother? Come on, come on, it makes me anxious. I want to put my head down and let these two kiss mouth to mouth. It's so good to watch, and it's tied now. After seeing the parents, the author is really good at writing sweet articles. It's so sweet that I'm rolling around [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] I quite like watching the plot of Xiao Wang being teased by the Taoist Priest. It's very pitiful, cute, and cute. People like Xiao Wang are very suitable for acting like a spoiled child and especially suitable for being teased by bullies. The character of the Taoist priest is also very good. I love watching this kind of plot where he becomes a jealous man and eats all the time and gets angry at every turn. But he is also unambiguous when it comes to being handsome or domineering and protecting his wife. It is very delicious. [Like] The two of them are really sweet and match each other very well. They are so cute and sweet. This is the sweetest article I have ever eaten in Tomato. It is very delicious.

It's so beautiful. I accidentally clicked in to read the introduction. I found it very interesting. After I clicked in and read it, I felt so good. I really like it. Wang Yuanqing is a very lovely person, he also respects women and has very upright views. The other male protagonist is also very cute and has a bit of a tsundere attribute. When he fell in love without knowing it before, he already had a crush on the male protagonist unconsciously [admiration]. I like to watch their interaction. It's especially fun when Li Suifeng is jealous. Finally, author, don't be tired, but don't be idle either. It's best to update 40 chapters in one day [laughing] [shy]

It's a very novel subject matter. I personally like the book "Liao Zhai" very much. I can see the author's interpretation and preference for "Liao Zhai" from the author's writing. Moreover, the author's writing style is really great, allowing me to follow the plot step by step, and since we share the story. Then of course I will support it too.

It seems to be quite interesting so far. The author knows a lot about Liaozhai. However, the protagonist may be a bit unlikable in the early stage. After all, the scholars in Liaozhai world like to commit suicide, but later on, they will be very cherishing their lives. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is also very good and kind, but not too kind. I can completely understand why such a pure, easy-going, generous, good-looking and clean person is so popular.

It's really good to read, and the plot is lively and interesting. I haven't read much of Liaozhai, but this article is really different. I was reading the article while reading the unit stories of Liaozhai, but it doesn't matter if I don't understand it. The main story is about our cute protagonist and the family and friends around him. There are also questions in the comment area to answer questions. Yuan Qing is really cute and cowardly, and Sui Feng is also an arrogant cool baby. The author's language is also very cute, but there is a sense of eloquence. I like it very much. Of course, the cat is also very cute [full]

I was so engrossed in watching it, the writing is very good, and the characters are well developed. Although I haven't watched Liao Zhai, it doesn't affect my viewing. The parallel combination of emotional and plot lines is natural and gives people the desire to read on. Very beautiful [love] [send heart]

I finished watching it. It was a great read. I wanted to continue reading it, but it's a pity that it's over. [Crying] [Crying] The protagonist is really cute and charming. He has always adhered to his moral principles and has not wavered in his heart. He has not acted recklessly with three wives and four concubines just because he traveled to ancient times. Instead, he has stuck to his heart and helped many people who were wronged in the feudal era. A woman with great empathy. Although the protagonist has some shortcomings, sometimes he is reckless because he is worried about his friends, but this is what he has as a normal person. A normal person cannot be perfect, there will always be shortcomings, but these are what make Wang Yuanqing a kind, lively, lovely and charming Wang Yuanqing

Super pretty! This novel won my heart very much [Blowing Kiss] There are ghosts and ghosts in the plot, but because of the relationship between the protagonists, the atmosphere is not very scary. When I first met Li Suifeng, I thought he was a bit annoying, but later I thought he shouldn't be too favored [smirk] [snicker] Wang Sheng grew up from a rich second-generation dude who only knew how to lie down at home to a stable and responsible Wang Shangshu (although he was promoted later, my favorite is still to call him Wang Shangshu [smirk]). Although I only passed by in a hurry, the supporting characters in the novel are all very vivid. Until the end of this book, I felt quite uncomfortable. Maybe it was because I couldn't let go of this book [crying] [crying] The recommendation index is worth 5 stars. If I can only give 5 stars, I can give 10 stars [send heart][send heart]

The author's writing style is very good, and he quotes from classics. He is very cultured and logical. All the foreshadowings are written out without digging holes at all. The author even combines the short stories from Liaozhai into one, and the life experiences of the two male protagonists are throughout the whole text. The plot is very rich. At first glance, the author has a special cultural background. I really like it, and The love story between the two protagonists is very exciting and cute. I loved it so much that my scalp went numb [shy]. I really recommend it. I have been sleeping and forgetting about it for the past few days until the finale is approaching. I finally thought of writing a review. Forgive me for not being literate and unable to write. The author's writing style is very good. [Crazy] Don't be dissuaded by the title of the book. [Blow a kiss]

Looks good! The main character's name sounds like it's true to its name, and there's no inexplicable emotional line. The main reason is that I really like the theme of "Liao Zhai", but Yuan Qing is really a bit cute [shy] and Li Suifeng hasn't figured it out yet. This will make the fight exciting! Two little cuties... Forget it, little lovers 99 [love] [love] [love]

Finished reading! It is a high-quality article that is quite rare in Tomato. The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are distinct. The whole article is fluent, integrating all the stories in the original Liaozhai, and the characters' actions are logical and smooth. I feel that the author should have good works on other platforms. If it is the first time to write a long novel, his talent is really terrifying (x. What I like very much is that many books whose protagonists are heartthrobs are often pretentious and untrue. Readers of this book can appreciate its charm even if the male protagonist is a hero, and the likes of others are justified. As a fan, it is very rare to continue the spirit of the original work. I can feel that the author has put great care into it. It is very good-looking and strong!

[Fresh genre recommended! [Like]I can't bear to finish it. The content is interesting and it cleverly connects various short stories from the Chinese chat room, especially the rewriting of the unfair experiences of women in the original book, which is thought-provoking. The characters in this article are distinct. At first, I disliked the male protagonist, but then I thought about it. The male protagonists in Liaozhai seemed to be weaklings. Later, I also saw the growth of the male protagonist [laughing and crying]. Small shortcomings (only personal subjective): As the most familiar stories of the White Snake and Xiao Cui, the White Snake turned black, and Xiao Cui did not go away free and easy. It is a pity. In the early stage, I felt that although the author had compassion for the women of that era, there was not much God-like indifference. Later, it became more humane. Overall recommended, super nice

The author strings together the stories of Liaozhai little by little, but you will only feel that they are real events of this era, rather than happening suddenly, because his world is so colorful, with monsters and ghosts coexisting. The protagonist of this article is the unlucky Wang Sheng who is very common in Liaozhai. He is a time traveler. At first, he was very trusting, or maybe because he was afraid of ghosts, but then he couldn't believe that there were such mysterious things in this world (the episode where his outlook on life was shattered was very interesting). I know that he really faced it head-on. She is timid and curious and very cute. This is a book with two male protagonists. It's okay for us, Wang Sheng, to be the heartthrob. I think the character of the other one is also very cute, a bit arrogant, and a bit short-tempered. However, some people may not like it. I hope everyone can respect the author.

It's so good-looking, the two young lovers are so cute~ Baby Yuanqing: Breathe. Daochang Li: What a great method!

I really like this book... And have recommended it to many friends. I really like this book. Qingqing is super charming, good-looking and arrogant, very cute, and the interaction with Li Suifeng also really poked me. Li Suifeng's crazy personality and feelings that he doesn't care about the world, but he is only attracted by Wang Yuanqing also really poked me. The kind of sparks that the two people collided with before, I really like it, and this article is about the world of Liaozhai, I actually don't. I have read the original work of Liaozhai, but this book is really interesting. I am a person who likes Taoist literature very much. I really like the Taoist elements in the book, and Gong happens to be a Taoist priest. There are also many Taoist-related things in the article, which really arouses my interest. So overall, I give this article five stars, not because I only have 5 stars in my heart, but because Tomato only has 5 stars. The overall evaluation is full of stars!

The subject matter is fresh and the plot is fascinating. The plot about various monsters and the emotional development between the male protagonists are well integrated. What I like most is the author's creation of characters. The characters and interactions of "Classmate Xiao Wang" and "Old Li" made me laugh and feel very warm and at ease at the same time. In particular, the author will not dig holes that make people feel heartbroken. Although there is a brief amnesia episode, the transition is very fast and the two protagonists' responses are also very sensible and reassuring [Blow kiss]