The National Destiny of Collapse of Iron: Playing as Chang Yeyue, Teammate Xi Lian

Change Bai, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and women's bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. A very good article about the national sports, the antagonistic relationship between various countries and the interaction between netizens in the live broadcast room are all well written. The heroine is also well portrayed, the descriptions are spot-on, and the plot is also very well written, especially the fusion of the original plot and the original plot. All the exciting points are well written. It would be better if the description of the battle scenes can be more detailed. I look forward to the follow-up plot. This book can be regarded as the first echelon whether it is a story about national destiny, a story about transformation, or a story about iron collapse~ Come on! Great author!

Although I have only watched the beginning, what I want to say is that this performance is not Xi Lian's, but Alicia's. . . Xi Lian always has two creators who portray her as someone who is obsessed with girls, but even Alicia is different depending on the occasion. Moreover, Xi Lian has no tendency in this regard. Please don't replace Alicia with Xi Lian. I beg you authors.

What you will see next is... [The year when Colombia was so hungry that he gnawed branches from trees] King Fa drove his light world force spacecraft to the continent of Teyvat and started the environmental transformation plan of the man-made ark. King Fa and the indigenous bosses did not like each other, and seven indigenous bosses fought with King Fa. 7 Indigenous bosses called dragons [Dharma King, later known as the original boss] The one at the beginning should be called Dharma King. He has big shiny white bird feathers. He was not born from his mother, but from an egg. It's a shemale He said that this is how I think about creating the world. But I missed So I want to wrap the world in eggshells Isolate the universe from the eggshell At the same time, the shadow shrouded by the eggshell appears in the universe In order to facilitate the unfolding of the plan, he divided his shadow into four parts [40 years after Colombia was so hungry that he gnawed tree branches] In 40 years, an indigenous king fought with the French king to the end of the world Even the space is obliterated The fire is extinguished and the sea is boiling Finally they all surrendered Praise the invincible Dharma King King Fa started his man-made ark plan and began to transform the environment So we, the first people in this world, appeared [400 years after Colombia was so hungry that it gnawed tree branches] King Dharma and his shadow, the transformation of the world is initially completed Then start making creatures Finally started making us [The year when the Ark Project started] Tribute to the legendary lover king——Fanes "I'm thinking, as long as people are happy, I will be happy. If you dare to hurt my Haki, you are finished." [The second year of the Ark Project's departure] Under the guidance of King Dharma, people practiced slash-and-burn farming and developed civilization. The Ark plan was well organized and prosperous. Wine! Knife! Anyone who offends my Teyvat will be attacked and destroyed by law! Woohoo! A unique Chinese New Year time in Teyvat Tribute to the legendary lover king, Dharma King If you are hungry, I will give you food. If you are thirsty, I will give you water. If you feel poor, I will give you gold and silver mines. If you are unhappy, I will respond to you in heaven I am god The year when the earth fell apart The ultimate boss of 7 indigenous kings is back To express the distinction, we call him the Second Throne, and the invincible Dharma King the First Throne. Our ancestors were also beaten to this strange place It's really bad now It's so dark in Teyvat, and the sky is falling for my family. Physical sense [The year after the sky fell] This place where birds don't poop is actually full of water. The people of the seven kings have ruled here for so long. Our ancestors fought with the dragon for a long time We shine, they shine Damn it, Dharma King, save me, Kuya Oh, bad signal 😂

It looks good and the quality is also very good. It would be better if there were more.

It's one of the most interesting fanfics I've ever read. It's very interesting. I really hope it can continue to be updated. This is the only shortcoming, so I give it four stars. One thing to say, this is really the only fanfic that I still want to read in school, and the writing style really pokes me. Again, is it true that it can't be updated again? I really still want to see it...

I hope there won't be a break in updates. It's so good. I suggest the author to update more than a dozen times a day.

It's beautiful, I must write it down

In this case, it can be set to "Ξ - Omniscient Level" which transcends all conventional classifications. Reaching this level means that Athena has an almost "godly" ability. She can hold the universe in her arms and spread her wings to cover the void. This shows that her existence and power are not limited by any dimensions or rules, and she has complete control over the laws of all cosmic levels. She can change, create or destroy everything in the universe at will. All known danger levels are not worth mentioning in front of her. Her influence and destructive power have reached the realm of omniscience and omnipotence.

It's very interesting, but the author just finished it

One VIP in the front row

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The biggest mistake is to meet you now. There are too few of you now, not enough to watch [crying]

Five stars for Xiao Yeyue [laughs]

Fortunately, I only watched it because I like March.

The writing is very good, there's nothing particularly OOC about it, and the two pink girls' posts are also very eye-catching.

Okay, okay, I like posting

Come on, author, come on

Not bad, the only pity is that it ended too early

It's a pity that the author has finished it. I feel that it has great potential. Anyway, I still look forward to more good works from the author [please update]

It was pretty good, but it was a pity that it ended so suddenly

I've read it before and forgot to give a rating. This time I suddenly found this book and remembered it. I'll give it a rating. It's a pity that I stopped updating it.

Very beautiful, Chang Yeyue and Xi Lian are both cute👍

It looks great, and I feel it fits the role of Chang Yeyue very well. Come on, author! ! !

Curious about who it is and who it is

A pretty good book

It's very beautiful, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Personally I think it looks great.

It was so beautiful, but it suddenly disappeared.

It's okay, not too watery

Not bad, very good