The Witch's Filial Devotion Has Taken a Turn for the Worse

Evaluation after reading thirty chapters The best grain and grass (small boutique) It's a very good pseudo-invincible novel with multiple female protagonists. It's not boring, the characters are well-drawn, the plot structure is appropriate, and it feels like the curtain is slowly opening. The world view is generally laid out, and the pace is fast. Although the overall writing is relatively rigid, it is not trivial. The interactions between the characters are very good, and there are also interesting plots [smile], and various settings are also better. It is more complete, but the combat power system is rather vague (maybe because there are fewer books now, anyway, the first thirty chapters are relatively vague), the appearance of subsequent supporting characters is a bit stiff (such as the thief witch), and the connection between plots is too excessive. However, this book is indeed a new book with great potential, and the overall look and feel is good. All in all, it is very suitable for everyone to read. Subjective rating four and a half stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

The plot is refreshing and there is nothing sinister about it. I feel that the pace of the academy may be a little slow. For those who like this kind of subject, it is simply overwhelming. Is this really something I can see on Tomato? Please ask the author for his past life.

Five-star support There are many girls, and they are semi-invincible. There are basically no big poisonous points. The plot and logic are both passable, and the female protagonists also have their own characteristics. Moreover, the author's attitude is really good, and Liu Bei's author came ashore [laughing]

It's really fun to watch. The male protagonist has cleared the game countless times. He has a level of knowledge reserve. Besides the mirror only accepts witches, there are no poisonous points in the witch setting. There is a buff directly, which can isolate other people's evil thoughts. Only the male protagonist is not affected. It is equivalent to wives that only the male protagonist can see. It is very suitable for reading a few chapters to relax after get off work [laughing]

It's not bad. Although the title of the book is a bit bad, the plot is still very good. The male protagonist is not a hot-blooded idiot and has a great advantage. Although the combat power is a bit low at the beginning, he has enough back-up skills. It is not as procrastinating as the life-saving male protagonist. The world view is also okay. Although it is a bit dark, it is not aggrieved. It can be regarded as a high-quality novel among today's tomato novels.

Nothing poisonous. The only bad thing is that there are too many witches. I can hardly remember their names. I can only rely on my ability to remember them. Except for Anna, who were collected early and appeared a lot, the other witches are not well established, or a bit flat. I look forward to completing some of them when I meet the witches again in the second part, so that the witches can be more three-dimensional. Generally speaking, the story is more daily and has fewer climaxes. The first part is more like spreading out the world view. Each event introduces the local special units and the abilities of gods, and picks up some witches by the way. It's great that the male protagonist avenges his hatred on the spot. It's one of the better harem stories I've ever read. I feel like the more I write, the more boring I get. The more I read, the less I have any expectations. In the past, I could look forward to a new witch and adventures in various places. Now I feel like I have finished the plot at a glance.

I have watched it a lot, and the world view and plot are quite good. The setting details are well done, and I won't praise it for its many advantages. But there are three shortcomings. [First, the author's description of emotions is very jerky. For example, Luna's emotional line with the protagonist: the germination, development and transformation of emotions is very simple and jerky. In this regard, you can refer to works that specialize in sweet stories about love development to see how the delicate emotional development is displayed. [The second is that the author's narrative is not very mature, and there is no feeling of reading a story. Various supplements and settings are often interspersed in the narrative. Although these contents are short and concise, they lack the coherent feeling of reading a story, as if the author writes where he thinks.]

Read the latest 207 chapters on December 11, 2025. Wu Lei (This author is probably the best at avoiding harem mines I have ever seen on Tomato. He also interacts a lot with readers and will change it if he is dissatisfied. It is very cool) A cool article about a semi-invincible harem. The protagonist's strength is acceptable. Although he is not the first in the game, the current battles are very easy. At the same time, the plot is very rich, and the plot and battle content are very good. The world view and battle settings are also good and relatively complete. At the same time, there is a main line buried in it, and the main line is also advanced in the process of writing various chapters. Personally, I feel that the interaction between the protagonist and each witch is a bit lacking. It would be better if more interactive content in daily life can be added according to characters (for example, after the end of the academy chapter, there is very little description of Luna. At the same time, I feel that the interactions with Luna in the academy chapter are not many and very plump. Different female characters The lack of color shaping is also a regret of most harem novels.) Most of the female characters are well designed, such as Jing Xin, Anna and Naklis (after all, these three characters have more shaping). I hope to add some interactive plots between the protagonist and different female characters, or light Shura field content, which would be very good. I can give it a solid personal rating, but I don't know why the rating is so low and there aren't many people reading it. Overall, it is a very good Western fantasy harem novel. Looking forward to the follow-up. I see that the author seems to be a little busy and in a bad state recently. I hope that the author's life and work (writing novels) will go well together. I look forward to the follow-up.

(Because I thought it was Liu Beiwen, I rated it more harshly earlier) It is a rare high-quality Western fantasy novel, about the daily life of a witch's harem. The climax is unambiguous at all, the structure is compact, and there is no poisonous point. The protagonist is very strong, very decisive, and has a high position. He has the green light everywhere (there is someone above you, but there is no one above me (bushi)). There is no one who dares to attack him and the witch. It is useless to say so much. Just read it.

This is a book that is very suitable to my personal taste. The author has done a great job in avoiding lightning. The daily life in the harem is really sweet. The male protagonist should be strong enough to crush the villain's mouth. It is just not enough. I hope the author will work harder to make more books.