Miss Witch's Filial Piety Has Gone Sour

Evaluation after reading thirty chapters The best grain and grass (small boutique) It's a very good pseudo-invincible novel with multiple female protagonists. It's not boring, the characters are well-drawn, the plot structure is appropriate, and it feels like the curtain is slowly opening. The world view is generally laid out, and the pace is fast. Although the overall writing is relatively rigid, it is not trivial. The interactions between the characters are very good, and there are also interesting plots [smile], and various settings are also better. It is more complete, but the combat power system is rather vague (maybe because there are fewer books now, anyway, the first thirty chapters are relatively vague), the appearance of subsequent supporting characters is a bit stiff (such as the thief witch), and the connection between plots is too excessive. However, this book is indeed a new book with great potential, and the overall look and feel is good. All in all, it is very suitable for everyone to read. Subjective rating four and a half stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

The plot is refreshing and there is nothing sinister about it. I feel that the pace of the academy may be a little slow. For those who like this kind of subject, it is simply overwhelming. Is this really something I can see on Tomato? Please ask the author for his past life.

Five-star support There are many girls, and they are semi-invincible. There are basically no big poisonous points. The plot and logic are both passable, and the female protagonists also have their own characteristics. Moreover, the author's attitude is really good, and Liu Bei's author came ashore [laughing]

It's really fun to watch. The male protagonist has cleared the game countless times. He has a level of knowledge reserve. Besides the mirror only accepts witches, there are no poisonous points in the witch setting. There is a buff directly, which can isolate other people's evil thoughts. Only the male protagonist is not affected. It is equivalent to wives that only the male protagonist can see. It is very suitable for reading a few chapters to relax after get off work [laughing]

It's not bad. Although the title of the book is a bit bad, the plot is still very good. The male protagonist is not a hot-blooded idiot and has a great advantage. Although the combat power is a bit low at the beginning, he has enough back-up skills. It is not as procrastinating as the life-saving male protagonist. The world view is also okay. Although it is a bit dark, it is not aggrieved. It can be regarded as a high-quality novel among today's tomato novels.

Nothing poisonous. The only bad thing is that there are too many witches. I can hardly remember their names. I can only rely on my ability to remember them. Except for Anna, who were collected early and appeared a lot, the other witches are not well established, or a bit flat. I look forward to completing some of them when I meet the witches again in the second part, so that the witches can be more three-dimensional. Generally speaking, the story is more daily and has fewer climaxes. The first part is more like spreading out the world view. Each event introduces the local special units and the abilities of gods, and picks up some witches by the way. It's great that the male protagonist avenges his hatred on the spot. It's one of the better harem stories I've ever read. I feel like the more I write, the more boring I get. The more I read, the less I have any expectations. In the past, I could look forward to a new witch and adventures in various places. Now I feel like I have finished the plot at a glance.

I have watched it a lot, and the world view and plot are quite good. The setting details are well done, and I won't praise it for its many advantages. But there are three shortcomings. [First, the author's description of emotions is very jerky. For example, Luna's emotional line with the protagonist: the germination, development and transformation of emotions is very simple and jerky. In this regard, you can refer to works that specialize in sweet stories about love development to see how the delicate emotional development is displayed. [The second is that the author's narrative is not very mature, and there is no feeling of reading a story. Various supplements and settings are often interspersed in the narrative. Although these contents are short and concise, they lack the coherent feeling of reading a story, as if the author writes where he thinks.]

Read the latest 207 chapters on December 11, 2025. Wu Lei (This author is probably the best at avoiding harem mines I have ever seen on Tomato. He also interacts a lot with readers and will change it if he is dissatisfied. It is very cool) A cool article about a semi-invincible harem. The protagonist's strength is acceptable. Although he is not the first in the game, the current battles are very easy. At the same time, the plot is very rich, and the plot and battle content are very good. The world view and battle settings are also good and relatively complete. At the same time, there is a main line buried in it, and the main line is also advanced in the process of writing various chapters. Personally, I feel that the interaction between the protagonist and each witch is a bit lacking. It would be better if more interactive content in daily life can be added according to characters (for example, after the end of the academy chapter, there is very little description of Luna. At the same time, I feel that the interactions with Luna in the academy chapter are not many and very plump. Different female characters The lack of color shaping is also a regret of most harem novels.) Most of the female characters are well designed, such as Jing Xin, Anna and Naklis (after all, these three characters have more shaping). I hope to add some interactive plots between the protagonist and different female characters, or light Shura field content, which would be very good. I can give it a solid personal rating, but I don't know why the rating is so low and there aren't many people reading it. Overall, it is a very good Western fantasy harem novel. Looking forward to the follow-up. I see that the author seems to be a little busy and in a bad state recently. I hope that the author's life and work (writing novels) will go well together. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's a good-looking story about an invincible harem. The protagonist never gets frustrated throughout the whole process. The main plot is to wander around looking for tarot cards (very powerful props) to find witches. The world view is okay. The power of the world has been stolen by the righteous gods. The outer gods come to the world because of the lack of authority in the world. The witch is the darling of the world and has the status of killing gods, so she is besieged by all the gods. The protagonist is very high and belongs to the player status. The goal is to kill gods. The main plot is relatively dull because the protagonist is too powerful and there is no climax, but there is no poison either.

This is a book that is very suitable to my personal taste. The author has done a great job in avoiding lightning. The daily life in the harem is really sweet. The male protagonist should be strong enough to crush the villain's mouth. It is just not enough. I hope the author will work harder to make more books.

(Because I thought it was Liu Beiwen, I rated it more harshly earlier) It is a rare high-quality Western fantasy novel, about the daily life of a witch's harem. The climax is unambiguous at all, the structure is compact, and there is no poisonous point. The protagonist is very strong, very decisive, and has a high position. He has the green light everywhere (there is someone above you, but there is no one above me (bushi)). There is no one who dares to attack him and the witch. It is useless to say so much. Just read it.

It's great. I like this worldview very much. It has a high degree of freedom. I can write whatever I want. It can well realize the imagination and yearning of myself and the audience. It's very satisfying for an abstract person like me [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After reading 30 chapters, the overall feeling is very stable. The male protagonist has a brain and the plot is not confusing. The author also listens to the readers' opinions [like]. It is that the description of the maid is too inconsistent. Maybe I haven't read enough and it is a bit inappropriate for the novelty-seeking gameplay. Anyway, five stars for encouragement.

Overall recommendation Pros: The writing is pretty good in Tomato, the multiple female protagonists are an attractive point, the characterization is average (actually I don't think it's very good or awkward, but in Tomato it's at least somewhat well-developed), the power system is interesting Disadvantages: Some key information was not given enough. By more than fifty chapters, I only knew that mages had different levels, specific power expressions, and rarity. Likewise, the strength of the witch was unclear. I only knew the approximate strength of the complete body. It's also vague about the world at large. Resulting in a confusing look There are some poisonous points. After living for twelve years, the male protagonist has never asked the silver-haired heroine about her past. This is a big logical error. The mirror thing and the male protagonist just happened inexplicably. There was no foreshadowing, and there was no description of the male protagonist's feelings. It was really abrupt that they suddenly got together after not doing it for the past twelve years. The main plot also feels confusing. Is it to kill gods? The description is not detailed enough, and there is no obvious refreshing point. You can tell that the male protagonist is very strong, but because the author's power system is not introduced well, it still seems strange. So why is it still recommended? Because there are too many tomato stones, this is already an idea. Book review as of chapter 89: There is no tension in the plot. To put it simply, there is no sense of tension and no ups and downs. The protagonist knows too much. The so-called facing difficulties and disasters just pass by. There is no feeling. It is really bland and has no obvious excitement. Originally, the interaction between men and women in this subject would be interesting, but the author's writing is boring. The new witch's affection for the protagonist is maxed out in a few chapters. The performance of some female protagonists is also the same style. , That Yinmao has always been like that, repeatedly writing about how he loves the male protagonist, which is boring. If the author wants to write about the charm of the heroine, he cannot fall in love with the hero so quickly. He must carefully portray the psychology of the heroine and arrange the plot to highlight their highlights. Now I feel that those witches are just tools. It is recommended that the author mention more character labels, especially when men and women interact, to enhance the sense of the picture. I can't even remember what the witches look like.

1. The protagonist is not the Virgin but is kind-hearted and must avenge her enemies. 2. The female protagonists have unique personalities and there are no clues so far, and the male protagonist does not live up to their love or nourish their stomachs. 3. Not completely invincible, but the hero's smart analysis and powerful knowledge of the world make up for this shortcoming.

It's full of lightning protection, the world view is interesting, and I just love God of War. This is the kind of book I should read [laughing]

It is a very nice book. I personally think it is in the T0 category among witch-type novels. The writing, plot, and characters are all very attractive. The protagonist is invincible, but he is not like a pure novel where he fights all the way to the end and is invincible by various provocations. Instead, he has the brains to put his identity out there and directly suppress people, or he can directly defeat the invincible. Moreover, he can avenge his revenge immediately without feeling uncomfortable at all. The female protagonists are also very lively and very special. It's very pure, and doesn't have any of the poisonous spots of Green Edge. It looks very comfortable. In terms of settings, tarot cards, composers, and eternal viewers are also very new in Tomato's books. It can definitely be given to 9.2 And go up. It's a pity that the score is not good, but I still hope that the author can complete it and give a good ending. There was a book of "The Original Sin Baron" that was of the same type. Eunuch, I had to use AI to continue writing and read it myself [face covering] [face covering]

It's a blast, with strong emotional lines for multiple women, distinct characters, the witch setting is perfect, no drama, no random jokes, the humor and abstraction are just right, it's not literary, the foreshadowing is well laid out, the outline is clear, and the settings are interlocking

Book review details This book has so many advantages, and they can be clearly felt in other books. Most of the uncomfortable problems can be solved in this book. 1. The protagonist's reputation is very high. As long as he does not go to another continent, On this continent, no matter where the protagonist goes, the place will send special personnel protection, and most churches respect the protagonist very much, many rules Moments are nothing for the protagonist. For example, copied from a book This paragraph: "Okay, then I'll go in first and you park the car first. "Wait a minute, you haven't received the invitation yet! "I brush my face. The hand that the vampire handed over the invitation hung in the air, but finally accepted it. Go back. Loren is right, he can indeed enter and exit any place by scanning his face If he is really stopped, it means that the level of this place is not high enough. The high reputation is reflected in the book saying that many enemies even before death Knowing that the protagonist wants to kill him beforehand, the enemy will not think that the protagonist wants to kill him If you kill him, you will think that the protagonist has to kill him or is being threatened. Forced. 2. The protagonist has high intelligence, caution and strength, and no one else knows about the protagonist. Strength. For example, this piece of IQ in the book: "What's wrong? Master Tutor. " "The maid just called her master 'Vampire Viscount'. Vampires are very particular about names. In newspapers, they always call themselves As a vampire, Ophemia's maid was even there when we were in the car. Correct Loren's title. And judging from the attitude of the little vampire girl towards her maid, she We are already very familiar with each other, and he trusts the maid very much. But in this situation, On this occasion, the maid called her master a vampire. And this paragraph (be cautious) With Loren's character, even if he knew that Paqina's secret power was useful, he wouldn't We can't all count on Paqina. Loren still has to implement the original plan. Of. As for being strong and others not knowing that the protagonist is pretending to be weak, It is reflected in many places. 3. Most of the female protagonists have high IQs, and one or two with low IQs are also It's stupid, not stupid. I read it in other books, the heroine wants to help The plot of the protagonist, who turns out to be self-defeating and is kidnapped by the enemy, will not be included in the story. Appears in this book. (The heroine may cause trouble to the protagonist, But it is unlikely to cause trouble to the protagonist) 4. The conversation will not be interrupted at critical moments. In this kind of plot, you can I have read in many books, whether they are sweet novels, martial arts or fantasy, they are all There is such a plot. This is what the book says: "What's wrong with Serafina? You keep staring at her. Loren guessed that Paqina's secret power had discovered something, but she was not sure. Just say it. "Maybe I misjudged the politics..." "I hate the Riddler the most. Even if you see it wrong, you still have to correct yourself. Say what you just saw. "Serafina... She... "The meal is ready, Master Tutor. "You find a place to hide for a while, I want to communicate with Paqina alone. Serafina responded obediently and hid in the kitchen. "Okay, now you say it. "She's not human. "You guys take the food out first, I'll have a word with Serafina words. "Yes.... The other maids carried the food and went out, leaving only Sera in the kitchen Fina and Loren. She was kneeling on the ground, her kneeling posture was very upright, her head was lowered, and she looked guilty. The mistake is waiting for punishment. "I am your maid, your possession, you are my master, my All of me. 5. This book has many advantages, but I have been reading it for too long and I can't remember it clearly, but it is very comfortable to read. As for the poisonous points, it is also because I have been reading it for a long time and I don't know what the poisonous points are. I watched it for a long time, not 31 hours, but I started watching it in October last year, but I watched it on and off for a long time, so I can't remember the previous plot clearly. "Do as your mentor says! What the mentor gives is always the best solution. Even if the mentor lets you die, it is because you will face something more terrifying than death! "

Let me talk about my thoughts. I have been reading this book for a while, and now I have read 600 chapters at once. First of all, the author listens to the readers very well and knows what the readers want to see. I like this book because of its positioning and xp. Although this book has some problems in some places, such as the sudden acceleration of the pace and the suspicion of rushing to schedule, it doesn't matter to me because I saw what I wanted to see, which is why I gave it full marks. The only shortcoming of this book is that the resistance of the protagonist is too small, and it feels like everything is easy. There is no way that all the magical resources are given to the protagonist, but it just makes me feel this way. The female characters in it all have good positions, and the protagonist has at least nine years of compulsory education and socialist core values. I haven't seen these two in many other novels. I was really convinced. Due to the character of the witch, I naturally accepted the trashy plot in it. Overall this book is still very good, 8.8 Is a bit low, it should be around 9.2

It is one of the best and most comfortable Western fantasy novels I have read on Tomato. It is obvious that the author really wants to write well and is passionate about it. Although he is a newbie, his awareness of avoiding poison in harem novels is very good. Basically, there will be no points that will make you depressed. You can read it even if you are on guard. It is obvious from the plot that the author has an outline, various foreshadowings, and the protagonist's intentional or unintentional backhand in the plot makes the role of the protagonist's mentor very suitable and reassuring. Among the many books I have read, he has also created a very good protagonist. He is paranoid, but sober, and dual-minded. He is brave but does not hide it, is world-weary but has a conscience, has great love but is open-minded but does not suffer internal conflicts. He avenges himself on the spot. Sometimes he will take out a notebook to write down the revenge if he cannot avenge it at present. No matter whether he is a decent person or a villain, he has a complete filter for the protagonist. I can only say that the mentor is still too authoritative (lol) Most of the female protagonists are impressive, focusing on a contrast, the conservative and noble former mentor Jing Xin, the evil (hungry) witch Anna, the cold goddess Bai Yueguang Scarlett (wrong), three maids who may be normal people but may not be normal, may not have a good memory but always remember you, eat the most delicious candy but never buy it again I specially left it to give to important people to eat. I was afraid that I would forget it, so I wrote a note to remind myself that after a hundred years, she has very few things, but they are all carefully left behind. She doesn't know what you want, but she is willing to give you everything she has examined, kind and pure Lilith, and the list goes on. In short, I highly recommend

It's a very good book. I think it has a rating of at least 9.2. The male protagonist is the kind of man who is very controlling and stable. He doesn't give people the image of a kid who has never seen the world. The plot is harmless in my opinion. Can be seen

Generally speaking, this book is one of the few that I have seen nowadays that does not have such high requirements for emotional description. Why? Because the general framework given by the author is understandable and the context is very clear. Rather than simply pursuing sensory stimulation, I would rather watch the ending in one go. The setting is also good, there is nothing difficult to understand, and the story arrangement of each volume is also reasonable. I suddenly remembered Nolan's movies. Inception took half an hour for all viewers to understand the background setting and main plot. This book has no threshold. Except for the vague description of the combat power of gods and angels, readers can quickly understand the social structure and character relationships. The various skills and magic are also well explained. The sense of participation is relatively high, and it is easier to empathize with the characters in the book. If the protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent, there should be no unexpected risks or escapes in the plot. The author is still a bit conservative in this regard, and the setting of the Tarot cards is also very clever, but they always appear in the hands of inexplicable people, and there is no pattern. I hope that the sudden turn of events is just to speed up the progress and properly control the number of main characters, otherwise a lot of ink will be wasted on character creation. After all, saving the witches is not collecting stamps. The witches' feelings for Loren are very real, but it is very troublesome to make decisions without listening to the advice. It has the potential of a high blood pressure novel, and I hope it can be suppressed reasonably.

Read Chapter 535, brief review. The plot and setting are classic western fantasy and two-dimensional light novels, and it can reach the level of 9 points on the radio. There are too many characters in the later stage, at least 15+ supporting female characters. It's hard to draw satisfying characters after 300 chapters. It would be much better if the female supporting plot could be compressed into about 5 parts. (The seven deadly sins do not necessarily correspond to the seven witches) To sum up, the overall score is no problem, it is 8.9 Points, a half-step novel with 9 points.

What kind of things are those time-travel games that are still secretive and afraid of affecting the main plot, and keep people searching and searching, and the emotional line is not moved? This book is truly a high-end game. After time travel, you are confident, generous, egoistic and subjectively kind. You kill decisively without losing your humanity. I enjoyed reading it. After reading Chapter 100, except for the lack of foreshadowing for my good brother Laila, which makes people feel that the emotional line is extremely strange, everything is fine.

Well written, the plot is reasonable, no thunder and no depression, qcqs

Very nice. Although there is a harem, each character has a distinct personality, the character image is fully portrayed, and each person's story is relatively rich. The main battle, strength improvement, and continuous management of forces feel very good. At least everything before chapter 660 is good. After chapter 660, I feel it is not as good as before. However, most novels feel that the first part is better, which is normal.

It is still a good book, and it is very comfortable to read. The male protagonist handles the way of life very well, and he does not dare to resist without suffering a disadvantage. There are not many minor flaws, but there is a problem with the rhythm. It felt too scattered to me. The writing is very good, and the human world is well handled, but the content is a bit monotonous. The strength is considered to be first-class in Tomato, but it is only first-class, and it is a little short of the top-notch content. Overall, it is a 9.2-9.4 Book.

Very nice, I like it. The most important point is that this is definitely Liu Beiwen! ! All I can say is watch it early and enjoy it.

Great story and made my brain spin. The plot is very good, but the author's writing style is a bit jerky, and it doesn't feel smooth to read. Maybe it's because I've eaten too much rice bran, but it's not bad.