[Wasteland Reincarnation + Dual Sword Style Maid + Master and Servant + Double Traversal + Cracked System + Master Technology + Fourth Natural Disaster]
As soon as he opened his eyes, Ji Li was put up for sale on the auction stage - a happy achievement: reincarnation in the wasteland, landing as a slave!
After being photographed at an auction, I wanted to survive as an ordinary servant, but in the end I had to go to the young master's side...
After being forced to become the exclusive maid of a strange young master, she divided her time between "slashing monsters with a knife" and "serving tea and water" every day.
Until one day, the young master in front of him discovered the secret of the little maid and called her by her original name.
Mute Li, who had his head lowered, suddenly raised his head.
"This, this, this...!! Is this you, eldest sister?"
Their eyes met, the thunder from the sky stirred the fire from the earth (sister-sister love version)! Both systems are fully activated!
Not long after, an immersive fugue called "Wasteland OL" was quietly launched on Blue Star.
The brother and sister (master and servant) looked at the "console" that appeared in front of them and fell into deep thought.
Maid Li held a mop in her hand: "Sister, is it Wasteland Tycoon who is tricking players this time?"
Xia Ran showed a capital-like smile: "Only adults make choices, of course it must be a win-win situation!"
Xia Ran: "So, my good maid, you will write the planning copy!"
Maid Li: "???"
(Slams the panel) If siblings work together, they can break gold? No, it's so pitiful!
Ji Li's Skyfall Beginning: Landed for free > Arrested on the spot > Shackled > Transferred to auction > Forced to become a maid
Reader comments
The introduction is quite attractive to me, but after reading through it (as of Chapter 24), I feel the following problems: First, the plot unfolds slowly. At least I didn't see a deeper world view in more than 20 chapters, and I didn't see anything particularly explosive (such as what The emotional relationship between siblings, the conspiracy of the system, the game plot that was not mentioned in the first few chapters but has obvious important roles in the introduction, etc.) Can attract me to continue watching. It is basically a daily routine plot of being caught-auctioned-and trained by a maid. In short, it is too dull. Secondly, the relationship between the characters is not prominent enough. The expedition team spent a few chapters in the early stage but was basically not mentioned later. It was only called back at the end of the auction. So far, it does not feel that it has any important role; and, the sister's role is too little! (It's a pity that I didn't see the much-loved story about the deep love between brother and sister.) Thirdly, in terms of settings, I looked through the chapter titles in the updated catalog and found that it is almost 100,000 words long and the main plot has not yet been fully developed. Where is the fourth natural disaster? I read the first half of the updated story and didn't notice any foreshadowing or foreshadowing related to the game. The disability system is a bit unclear. Let's talk about the problems first. Generally speaking, the writing of this book is acceptable, but the storytelling is a bit watered down, and the plot rhythm and setting are too slow. The current progress focuses more on the daily life of the new maid, and the master-servant (sister-sister) linkage that is featured in the title of the book is not prominent enough. Overall, this book is very slow to develop, and it is a story with potential that needs to be explored in depth. I hope the author can produce more high-quality content! Four stars for encouragement
The pace of the opening chapter is indeed slow, but it's really hard to say this. I have some experience with it (I've experienced it at times, and everyone's grasp is different). I still have high expectations for the following content. Of course, the story is still in its initial stage, and there should be a lot more to come. , Come on little by little, the character image is reflected, the description is okay, the content is understandable to non-professionals, and there is no big problem, as long as you put your mind to it. Finally, from my own perspective, being able to write what you want into an article is a success in itself, accumulate slowly and make progress slowly.
Currently updated to chapter 45, the pace is relatively slow, which is the type I like to read. The connection of some events is also good. The number of words is still relatively small. If you like a slower pace, you can give it a try [Send Heart]
urge for updates [make faces]
The introduction is quite attractive to me, but after reading through it (as of Chapter 24), I feel the following problems: First, the plot unfolds slowly. At least I didn't see a deeper world view in more than 20 chapters, and I didn't see anything particularly explosive (such as what The emotional relationship between siblings, the conspiracy of the system, the game plot that was not mentioned in the first few chapters but has obvious important roles in the introduction, etc.) Can attract me to continue watching. It is basically a daily routine plot of being caught-auctioned-and trained by a maid. In short, it is too dull. Secondly, the relationship between the characters is not prominent enough. The expedition team spent a few chapters in the early stage but was basically not mentioned later. It was only called back at the end of the auction. So far, it does not feel that it has any important role; and, the sister's role is too little! (It's a pity that I didn't see the much-loved story about the deep love between brother and sister.) Thirdly, in terms of settings, I looked through the chapter titles in the updated catalog and found that it is almost 100,000 words long and the main plot has not yet been fully developed. Where is the fourth natural disaster? I read the first half of the updated story and didn't notice any foreshadowing or foreshadowing related to the game. The disability system is a bit unclear. Let's talk about the problems first. Generally speaking, the writing of this book is acceptable, but the storytelling is a bit watered down, and the plot rhythm and setting are too slow. The current progress focuses more on the daily life of the new maid, and the master-servant (sister-sister) linkage that is featured in the title of the book is not prominent enough. Overall, this book is very slow to develop, and it is a story with potential that needs to be explored in depth. I hope the author can produce more high-quality content! Four stars for encouragement
The pace of the opening chapter is indeed slow, but it's really hard to say this. I have some experience with it (I've experienced it at times, and everyone's grasp is different). I still have high expectations for the following content. Of course, the story is still in its initial stage, and there should be a lot more to come. , Come on little by little, the character image is reflected, the description is okay, the content is understandable to non-professionals, and there is no big problem, as long as you put your mind to it. Finally, from my own perspective, being able to write what you want into an article is a success in itself, accumulate slowly and make progress slowly.
Currently updated to chapter 45, the pace is relatively slow, which is the type I like to read. The connection of some events is also good. The number of words is still relatively small. If you like a slower pace, you can give it a try [Send Heart] urge for updates [make faces]