[Wasteland Reincarnation + Dual-Wielding Maid + Master and Servant + Two Transmigrators + Glitched System + Technology-Focused + Fourth-Dimensional Disaster]
The moment she opens her eyes, Ji Li finds herself priced for sale on an auction block. Achievement unlocked: reincarnated into the wasteland, enslaved on arrival!
Someone buys her at the auction. She plans to be an ordinary servant, slacking off and staying alive, but instead she ends up at the young master’s side…
Forced to become the personal maid of a strange young master, she spends every day split between “swinging her blades to hack monsters” and “serving tea and water.”
Then one day, the young master discovers the little maid’s secret and calls her by her original name.
The mute Li, who had kept her head bowed, suddenly looks up.
“Y-y-you…! Big Sis, is that you?”
Their eyes meet, and sparks fly like thunder and lightning: a sibling kind of love! Both Systems fully activate!
Not long afterward, an immersive virtual game called Wasteland Online quietly launches on Blue Star.
The siblings, now master and servant, stare thoughtfully at the “control panel” appearing before them.
Maid Li grips her mop. “Sis, are we ripping off the players this time, or becoming wasteland tycoons?”
Xia Ran wears a smile like a capitalist. “Adults don’t have to choose. Obviously, we make it a win-win!”
Xia Ran: “So, my dear maid, you’re writing the design documents!”
Maid Li: “???”
(Slams the panel down.) When siblings work together, they can cut through gold? No, they can scam players like nobody else!
Ji Li’s disastrous start: free arrival > immediately arrested > shackled > transported to auction > forced to become a maid
The introduction is quite attractive to me, but after reading through it (as of Chapter 24), I feel the following problems: First, the plot unfolds slowly. At least I didn't see a deeper world view in more than 20 chapters, and I didn't see anything particularly explosive (such as what The emotional relationship between siblings, the conspiracy of the system, the game plot that was not mentioned in the first few chapters but has obvious important roles in the introduction, etc.) Can attract me to continue watching. It is basically a daily routine plot of being caught-auctioned-and trained by a maid. In short, it is too dull. Secondly, the relationship between the characters is not prominent enough. The expedition team spent a few chapters in the early stage but was basically not mentioned later. It was only called back at the end of the auction. So far, it does not feel that it has any important role; and, the sister's role is too little! (It's a pity that I didn't see the much-loved story about the deep love between brother and sister.) Thirdly, in terms of settings, I looked through the chapter titles in the updated catalog and found that it is almost 100,000 words long and the main plot has not yet been fully developed. Where is the fourth natural disaster? I read the first half of the updated story and didn't notice any foreshadowing or foreshadowing related to the game. The disability system is a bit unclear. Let's talk about the problems first. Generally speaking, the writing of this book is acceptable, but the storytelling is a bit watered down, and the plot rhythm and setting are too slow. The current progress focuses more on the daily life of the new maid, and the master-servant (sister-sister) linkage that is featured in the title of the book is not prominent enough. Overall, this book is very slow to develop, and it is a story with potential that needs to be explored in depth. I hope the author can produce more high-quality content! Four stars for encouragement
The pace of the opening chapter is indeed slow, but it's really hard to say this. I have some experience with it (I've experienced it at times, and everyone's grasp is different). I still have high expectations for the following content. Of course, the story is still in its initial stage, and there should be a lot more to come. , Come on little by little, the character image is reflected, the description is okay, the content is understandable to non-professionals, and there is no big problem, as long as you put your mind to it. Finally, from my own perspective, being able to write what you want into an article is a success in itself, accumulate slowly and make progress slowly.
Currently updated to chapter 45, the pace is relatively slow, which is the type I like to read. The connection of some events is also good. The number of words is still relatively small. If you like a slower pace, you can give it a try💕 Urge for updates😜