Transmigrated into the Cultivation World, Coveted by Everyone

The author wrote it very well. I thought it was a familiar routine and there was great competition. The unexpected result is that the plot very smoothly pushes the heroine to get along with the male protagonists, which is a bit bloody. But under the author's description, everything is not so important. Especially Chapter 59, which is so well written. It not only allowed me to see the sublimation of the heroine's personality charm, but also seemed to see myself, who had been trapped in the vortex of feeling unworthy and escaping from the novel. Finally, I want to say that maybe you are not lovable. In your eyes, your shortcomings are as many as stars, but I should know that your advantages are like the sun, which is always shining with dazzling light. So no matter how good something is, I want to say that you are worth it and you deserve it.

It's a subject matter that I haven't read before, and I think it's quite novel and interesting. The author's writing style is very good, and he's not the kind of person who just writes without thinking just for readers to read. I'll add it to a bookshelf and keep it. Come on, author, don't finish it.

The author's writing style is very good. Just write according to your own wishes. Don't give up, and be slow! I read dozens of chapters in one breath, the author must write it down well! ! The more male protagonists, the better. What's wrong with our female protagonist having more men? [Pork] What's the point of having a harem on a male channel? If a female protagonist has more men, she will be scolded. In fact, it's been a long time since I've read a story where the female protagonist is sincere to every male protagonist. Anyway, I like any type of female protagonist. Don't let these comments affect your mood. Just write according to your own heart.

The writing is very good, and the description is restrained without losing tension.

It's okay, but I feel like the heroine is half-hearted about meeting and loving one person [rolls eyes]

After reading it, I feel that the image of the heroine is thin. Apart from her appearance, the rest of the story is impressive but nothing impressive. Another feeling is that there are too many descriptive words and it is a bit gorgeous. For example, the heroine's inner throbbing is described in a short paragraph, which I will unconsciously skip. In short, it is a bit hard on the eyes to read. But the description is really vivid. Both the male and female protagonists feel handsome and beautiful. In addition, I am looking forward to the appearance of the next male protagonist, because the author said that the subsequent male protagonists are more abnormal than the other, and I am curious.

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is also very good, and the sexual tension is full, but he is too obsessed with reversal and logic, but is very deliberate. It seems that in order to logically reduce the sense of abuse, a second personality is created, allowing the second personality to bear the truth and abuse the male protagonist, or to eat Ye Nan in a reasonable way Xing, to restore his cultivation. I can only say that this is of no use. Even if it is emphasized that the second personality is the female protagonist Xia Zhi herself, for readers, the abused and crying female protagonist still cannot be crushed back by herself. The so-called second personality takes revenge and forgives the male protagonist. Well, it is even worse. Come on! I wish the author will become better as he writes more!

Yes, it's a different plot, very novel, the writing and rhythm are very good, and finally someone has written the atmosphere of a romance novel. It's so rare. The female protagonist is also a rational type. I like this setting. I haven't found a male protagonist yet. I finally found a book that I can read. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and there are too few that I can read. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

There is no meal replacement for the cultivating immortals by force! My wife is so pretty! I picked up the book from Genting Continent and read it all night long, unable to stop at all. I particularly like Tan Yi, and Wan Duo is also very interesting ~ Da Da is really good at "cooking", and the fragrance is so delicious that it makes people confused. Why are you so good at writing... However, this book does have a certain threshold. Those who are not well-educated in literature, or have not read many orthodox fairy tales, may not be able to read it at once. This book will screen readers, but fortunately I am not one of the ones screened out... The greatly constructed world view is really powerful, and the more you look at it, the more you enjoy it. I shed tears when I was moved 5555555 I really hope to see the third part! I must continue writing [almost crying]

The plot is very average, and the five stars are for the text. The more videos I watched, the less my vocabulary became. The description of this book is so rich that it makes me dazzled just looking at it. The point of complaint is that the vocabulary is too gorgeous. I feel that every place is written in very, very detailed, which makes it difficult to read. Especially in terms of appearance, eyes, and psychology, most of the characters are very empty. It would be more direct to just say that a person works very hard. In order to practice swordsmanship, he wakes up every morning and swings a sword ten thousand times. It's profound, and the heroine's early growth history is too long, and there are no highlights and attractions. It feels like she has only appearance and no connotation (it's not that there is no connotation, but the appearance is more prominent than the connotation). There is a second personality setting in the back, there are not many supporting characters, and there are very few passers-by, which cannot support the image of the heroine and the male protagonists. I rarely read heartthrob + non-refreshing articles, but it was really unpleasant. Coding is not easy, and it has been well received. The author will continue to work hard and produce better works!