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The author wrote it very well. I thought it was a familiar routine and there was great competition. The unexpected result is that the plot very smoothly pushes the heroine to get along with the male protagonists, which is a bit bloody. But under the author's description, everything is not so important. Especially Chapter 59, which is so well written. It not only allowed me to see the sublimation of the heroine's personality charm, but also seemed to see myself, who had been trapped in the vortex of feeling unworthy and escaping from the novel. Finally, I want to say that maybe you are not lovable. In your eyes, your shortcomings are as many as stars, but I should know that your advantages are like the sun, which is always shining with dazzling light. So no matter how good something is, I want to say that you are worth it and you deserve it.

It's a subject matter that I haven't read before, and I think it's quite novel and interesting. The author's writing style is very good, and he's not the kind of person who just writes without thinking just for readers to read. I'll add it to a bookshelf and keep it. Come on, author, don't finish it.

The author's writing style is very good. Just write according to your own wishes. Don't give up, and be slow! I read dozens of chapters in one breath, the author must write it down well! ! The more male protagonists, the better. What's wrong with our female protagonist having more men? [Pork] What's the point of having a harem on a male channel? If a female protagonist has more men, she will be scolded. In fact, it's been a long time since I've read a story where the female protagonist is sincere to every male protagonist. Anyway, I like any type of female protagonist. Don't let these comments affect your mood. Just write according to your own heart.

The writing is very good, and the description is restrained without losing tension.

It's okay, but I feel like the heroine is half-hearted about meeting and loving one person [rolls eyes]

After reading it, I feel that the image of the heroine is thin. Apart from her appearance, the rest of the story is impressive but nothing impressive. Another feeling is that there are too many descriptive words and it is a bit gorgeous. For example, the heroine's inner throbbing is described in a short paragraph, which I will unconsciously skip. In short, it is a bit hard on the eyes to read. But the description is really vivid. Both the male and female protagonists feel handsome and beautiful. In addition, I am looking forward to the appearance of the next male protagonist, because the author said that the subsequent male protagonists are more abnormal than the other, and I am curious.

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is also very good, and the sexual tension is full, but he is too obsessed with reversal and logic, but is very deliberate. It seems that in order to logically reduce the sense of abuse, a second personality is created, allowing the second personality to bear the truth and abuse the male protagonist, or to eat Ye Nan in a reasonable way Xing, to restore his cultivation. I can only say that this is of no use. Even if it is emphasized that the second personality is the female protagonist Xia Zhi herself, for readers, the abused and crying female protagonist still cannot be crushed back by herself. The so-called second personality takes revenge and forgives the male protagonist. Well, it is even worse. Come on! I wish the author will become better as he writes more!

Yes, it's a different plot, very novel, the writing and rhythm are very good, and finally someone has written the atmosphere of a romance novel. It's so rare. The female protagonist is also a rational type. I like this setting. I haven't found a male protagonist yet. I finally found a book that I can read. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and there are too few that I can read. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

The plot is very average, and the five stars are for the text. The more videos I watched, the less my vocabulary became. The description of this book is so rich that it makes me dazzled just looking at it. The point of complaint is that the vocabulary is too gorgeous. I feel that every place is written in very, very detailed, which makes it difficult to read. Especially in terms of appearance, eyes, and psychology, most of the characters are very empty. It would be more direct to just say that a person works very hard. In order to practice swordsmanship, he wakes up every morning and swings a sword ten thousand times. It's profound, and the heroine's early growth history is too long, and there are no highlights and attractions. It feels like she has only appearance and no connotation (it's not that there is no connotation, but the appearance is more prominent than the connotation). There is a second personality setting in the back, there are not many supporting characters, and there are very few passers-by, which cannot support the image of the heroine and the male protagonists. I rarely read heartthrob + non-refreshing articles, but it was really unpleasant. Coding is not easy, and it has been well received. The author will continue to work hard and produce better works!

There is no meal replacement for the cultivating immortals by force! My wife is so pretty! I picked up the book from Genting Continent and read it all night long, unable to stop at all. I particularly like Tan Yi, and Wan Duo is also very interesting ~ Da Da is really good at "cooking", and the fragrance is so delicious that it makes people confused. Why are you so good at writing... However, this book does have a certain threshold. Those who are not well-educated in literature, or have not read many orthodox fairy tales, may not be able to read it at once. This book will screen readers, but fortunately I am not one of the ones screened out... The greatly constructed world view is really powerful, and the more you look at it, the more you enjoy it. I shed tears when I was moved 5555555 I really hope to see the third part! I must continue writing [almost crying]

Treasure novel, the plot is compact and interesting! Too few people are watching! Worth recommending, the heroine continues to practice and become stronger as she pursues freedom! Tan Yi, I'm really [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I like this male protagonist the most among all the actors he has appeared in

This novel is amazing! The heroine has a special nature and embarks on a thrilling and exciting journey to survive in the world of immortality. The interactions between various bosses are full of tension. The writing is online and the plot has constant reversals. It is an addictive and enjoyable novel about immortality.

This book combines time travel, immortality, Shura field and extreme reversal, and the plot is very interesting! The heroine Tianbeng starts out but survives in danger among the bosses. The characters are interesting, the writing is smooth, and the reversal is even more amazing. The more you read, the more you become addicted.

It's not so procrastinating that you can't help but fast forward, nor is it so rushed that you can't keep up with the plot. Each paragraph is just stuck at the point where you want to continue reading. When reading, you can immerse yourself in it naturally and follow the rhythm of the book.

It's a book with great potential, and I'm looking forward to the plot development in the future! [Top post][Please update]

I almost read dozens of chapters in one go, and I was so excited to read it, but it's a pity that it's not finished yet. Woo woo woo woo woo woo woo [almost crying]

Very nice, I found another good book

The setting of this article is really eye-catching. It's not the type where you can guess the whole routine just by reading the beginning. As soon as you click in, you feel very fresh and energetic, and you don't feel tired at all. As you read, you are hooked by this fresh tone and want to read on. Even in similar themes, such settings that can jump out of the cliché framework are rare. This novelty alone is enough to make people willing to dive in and read.

Each character has his or her own unique feel, and even characters of the same type can be read with different tones. This kind of non-flat and non-repetitive character creation allows you to always have new points to grasp during the reading process, and will not feel monotonous.

The writing is beautiful, the inner description is vivid, and the characters are vivid

Very good looking, full of sexual tension, cultivating immortality with a touch of modernity, multiple male protagonists

The writing is good. The heroine is in a state of collapse at the beginning but she is able to survive among the bosses and cultivate immortality. The plot is interesting and the story is great!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good, I like it very much

Beautiful, very beautiful! ! !

The heroine wants to keep a low profile but is always disrupted by the boss. This contrast is both funny and helpless.

The author has brought the characters to life, it's beautiful

This setting really irritates me, it's fresh and delicious!

The plot is cleverly set up and fascinating.

It's a very interesting novel. The story is novel and has constant twists and turns. Cultivation of immortality can trigger so many plots. It's amazing!