HP: Ron's Red Crown

Everything else is pretty good, except for the part about sorting into houses and retrieving his real name, which is a little OOC. From this article, we know that Ron was lost as a child rather than having an accident when he was born, so the Weasley family clock (which can show the status of his family) should have responded. Even if he can't find it, it is probably alive and dead. Otherwise, why haven't he given up after searching for so many years? In addition, there is no indication in the background that the Weasley family is looking for a red-haired boy. I mean that he is directly looking for the red-haired boy when he entered school according to his age, and he has to wait for his real name to appear before he can realize it. It's a bit ooc. C. I liked the Weasley family the most in the original novel. I think with Molly's love for the children, she would have gone to Hogwarts to ask Dumbledore for the list of new students before the school started, or she would have been stuck at the station looking for someone when the school started. There are some things written by the author. It's too light. Most of it is the direct emotional exchange between Ron and Lupin (which is very touching). The emotional description between the Weasley family and Ron is a bit like a process. It's too light. There are some OOC here, but the others are very beautiful and quite good.

It's a good read. Ron is the protagonist of the article. He was abducted to the ancient forest when he was very young, met Remus and became his godson, and then returned to the magical world. The story is very interesting, it reads smoothly, and there are no bugs in the logic. It is very interesting! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Author, I hope this book has no CP in the main text. If I have to write cp, can I write it in the extra chapter? CP, I hope it can be the main attack. Author, author, please do not write CP in the text. I am so afraid, because the book will collapse if it is CP.

It's a very novel article, I like it very much, I will keep following it, thank you very much [sending heartfelt wishes]

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My evaluation is good. When I entered the Lion House, to be honest, it was a bit surprising. Although I read the introduction in advance, in terms of the previous character, I felt that it was not quite what I expected. But it doesn't matter. As long as the protagonist is not allowed to be a nanny, everything has to be guaranteed. After that, it is really unbearable.

To be honest, this book is really great. I personally really like this series of articles. At the same time, I personally really hate the stupid and reckless Ron Velez in the novel. But the Ron I see in this article is a Ron who is full of wisdom, strength, and kind-heartedness. He is really, really good-looking.

This is the first time I have seen this kind of subject matter. It is very novel and I like it very much. I will keep following it. Good cheers to the author.

It looked pretty good until the end of the branch. I just can't stand the Sorting Hat. No matter whether the protagonist is suitable or not, it always throws those who should go to Slytherin or Ravenclaw to Gryffindor to be the nanny of the savior.

It's only 46 chapters. It's so good to read. It's the first time I've seen this type of article. I hope it won't be too boring later. Come on!