A game for everyone, where each person lives a parallel life, descends upon the world. Blue Star, a backwater planet on the edge of the galaxy, is caught up in it by accident. Everyone transmigrates into the corresponding parallel plane of Blue Star, where they awaken their abilities on a planet much like Blue Star in the 1960s and 1970s.
(Transmigration happens in batches. If a player gets killed in the game, they lose their player status.)
(18) Green, 21.6/50
Sense of immersion + follow-up reading: 3+2
Writing style + imagination: 2+4
Plug-in + background: 2+2 (if you are still away)
Rhythm + plot: 2+2
Character + Logic: 2+2
Extra: -10%
Feelings: The plot is mediocre and not immersive.
Calculation: (20+1.25×2+1.5)×0.9=21.6
(1) Evaluation items
Sense of immersion: The character design of the protagonist matches the title and introduction.
Follow-up reading: The plot length is appropriately set and the quality is stable
Writing style: overall feeling, layout, etc.
Imagination: The setting is thoughtful and novel.
Plug-in: plug-in settings, in-depth plug-in development
Background: background setting, reasonable background
Rhythm: The plot is smooth and the plot is watery.
Plot: plot setting, reasonable plot
Characters: The supporting roles are reasonable and the supporting characters are well designed
Logic: reasonable settings, complete data, etc.
The protagonist should go to the hospital to find an opportunity with this ability. J should give some encouragement points.
Very good, the characters are well-written, the writing is sophisticated, and the story is logically rigorous.
(18) Green, 21.6/50 Sense of immersion + follow-up reading: 3+2 Writing style + imagination: 2+4 Plug-in + background: 2+2 (if you are still away) Rhythm + plot: 2+2 Character + Logic: 2+2 Extra: -10% Feelings: The plot is mediocre and not immersive. Calculation: (20+1.25×2+1.5)×0.9=21.6 (1) Evaluation items Sense of immersion: The character design of the protagonist matches the title and introduction. Follow-up reading: The plot length is appropriately set and the quality is stable Writing style: overall feeling, layout, etc. Imagination: The setting is thoughtful and novel. Plug-in: plug-in settings, in-depth plug-in development Background: background setting, reasonable background Rhythm: The plot is smooth and the plot is watery. Plot: plot setting, reasonable plot Characters: The supporting roles are reasonable and the supporting characters are well designed Logic: reasonable settings, complete data, etc.
The protagonist should go to the hospital to find an opportunity with this ability. J should give some encouragement points.
Very good, the characters are well-written, the writing is sophisticated, and the story is logically rigorous.
Very well written, cheers