Dragon Clan: Complete Susanu, the Dragon King Was Dumbfounded

Although what I hate most about the nanny text and the system is that it forces the protagonist to do things that are beneficial to the original protagonist and does not have any freedom, the author's subsequent description of the characters and emotional descriptions conquered me, which shows that he has worked hard to polish the characters. He is the kind of person who is very qualified. I am deeply loyal to the original work. I approve of the cooking skills. I give it five stars. I hope that the rest will have such quality and the system can be more free. The protagonist should not always suffer because of Lu Mingfei. For example, it would be weird to enter school just for a suit. Brother Lu is a bit too sweet.

So pretty, brother, the old Jiangnan thief knows nothing about dragons!

Combining elements of Naruto and Dragon Clan The author's writing style is very good, and he has the flavor of an old Jiangnan thieves

The content is novel and much better than the original "Dragon".

That's awesome, author! This is really the best Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read. The Dragon Clan fanfics I have read before have some of the same literary youth disease as Jiangnan, but Jiangnan's writing style is so good that those who imitate him are not interested in it after all. But my friend, you have come out of your own style. Gezan (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧, it can be seen that the author's writing style is very solid, but those comments that say it is more popular than Jiangnan are a bit flattering. Uh, the brotherhood in this book, um, is also very similar to the bond in Naruto (￣o￣) The male protagonist's brotherly love for Lu Mingfei in this book is similar to that of his parents, beyond ordinary brothers. I also like to read this kind of brotherly love. Blessed. Well, it should be noted that the way Lu Mingfei returns from the book board is to directly use a wrench to wrench it. It is different from other books that slowly come back like running water. If you like it, don't miss it. This author is still very good. I plan to read other books and praise the author. There are few authors I like so much. Come on!

It looks good and interesting, but Lu Mingfei and the others have watched Naruto, so if you write these skills, they should be able to recognize them when they see them. I hope the author can remember this little detail. There are too many loopholes. The character of the main character is very strange and I don't really like it.

This book is definitely Nanny Wenha. The protagonist's abilities are gained from Lu Mingfei. It's similar to following Lu Mingfei on the boat. The hook is quite big. However, the protagonist wants to change Lu Mingfei so that he can be more involved in key nodes, instead of directly killing things to get things done by himself. Therefore, if you want to read a particularly refreshing article, it is suitable for those who like to read and develop Lu Mingfei. After reading the book review, it seems likely that the protagonist will exert his strength at key points, and then continue to be beaten back to the original plot. It's a classic starting point of brotherhood. There is a passage in the book where Lu Mingfei drinks too much and cries that the male protagonist is his best brother. No matter whether the protagonist changes his marriage or Lu Mingfei changes his marriage, or the author deliberately sells it, it cannot be written like this. Only two straight men who truly believe that this is a brotherhood can feel that way. I will eat it first to respect it.

The so-called past is just a grain of dust, and there is no happiness in the past😭, EXP is above all else, you and I both know it well😈We are all forged in blood, dust, and pain, so I want to tell you a truth. In this world, either the sandman or the（""，". EXE）（，💀）

Hey, I think it's actually okay to be a nanny like this. Many scenes involving Lu Mingfei in the original work have been changed to make them less uncomfortable. Chapter 61 resurrects Old Tang. Isn't the point of the fandom to make up for regrets? In Chapter 125, what did you write about My Potato Chips and the King of TV? Does he have to die?

Brothers, all I can say is that it's pretty good, very good-looking. Come on⛽

It's not bad, but it's too nanny, so Lu Mingfei will be the same as the original work, and the part about Mai Shutoku is too poisonous, which makes up for the regret, but there is nothing new about the plot, forget it, for the sake of such luck, five stars support

It's average in the early stage and becomes stronger in the later stage. It's a slap in the face. If you like reading novels, you can read this. Moreover, the male protagonist is very loyal. He will help Lu Mingfei to block any fatal danger. And the ending is quite satisfactory [smile][smile][smile]

You are the genius Xuan Le, the peerless genius who emerged from the wild team era, the highest mountain in the world, the God of Fortune who dominates the top ten rankings all year round, the champion of the first God General Cup, Gaishen, the two most powerful opponents in the world, and the current god Junhao with 6000 points. I didn't think much of you in the first few rounds, but you are the most up-to-date. It's not that I don't want to win, I just don't want to lose. The former Gaishen is back.

It's so beautiful. I gave me a big one after looking at it. I suggest everyone come and take a look. I can't eat it alone. The author and the old gangster from Jiangnan have a good kiss under the red well.

The writing is quite good, keep up the good work [I learned it] I came here because I had finished reading "Dragon 5" given to me by a friend and wanted to read the follow-up. I feel that the writing is very good.

I feel that the author is writing about Shinji Ikari instead of Lu Mingfei. He did not cover up his character by saying bad things about Lu Mingfei, so I can only give this score tentatively.

Some passages are left-brained and hit right-brained, and some are problems with the understanding of the original work. For example, the author said that Odin was for Lu Mingfei, and Chu Zihang and his son were accidentally involved. But if Lu Mingfei got in the car that day, then Odin had to be the one who ran away. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed.

It's pretty cool to watch, but the Naruto battle is a bit overpowered. I quite like the character of the protagonist who protects the calf. In fact, I feel that this novel does not need a female protagonist at all. Just let Lu Mingfei be the heroine [laughing and crying]

It's very well written, I love reading it

The writing is good and the story is good. It does not blindly avoid the regrets in the original work, but retains the parts that make the characters grow. From the looks of it, I think the only bug is that the dragon world in the setting is based on reality, so no one recognizes Naruto after the protagonist uses so many abilities? The settings of Lu Mingfei, Lu Narusawa and Xia Ya should all know Naruto, right?

It's so well written and so vivid. Who doesn't know Jiangnan? From now on you are the author! ! ! Hope it can be finished later. Not enough.

It's enjoyable to watch, the plot is ups and downs, full of color, and the character descriptions are very emotional. Moreover, it is not too centered on the protagonist, and the description centered on Lu Mingfei is very appropriate. This is the first dragon fanfic I've read. Author, please work hard, I'm optimistic about you. Really well written

Will Shi Ling take the bullet? A bit interesting

Do what you say, and say five-star praise means five-star praise

Not bad! It's the Eternal Eye. There's no need to be afraid of those forces. If you're not convinced, just slash through it with a knife.

It really made me cry, brother. As Lu Mingfei's eldest brother, he took him out of the sea of ​​inferiority step by step. The protagonist was strong at the beginning and could defeat the Dragon King, but he was not completely invincible. The brotherhood portrayed when Lu Mingfei took action at the critical moment was wonderful.

The plot really made up for the regret I had when watching Dragons [crying]

Yes, the current line development is very good [like]

It's so pretty, lots of snacks

Needless to say, it looks good! This book is truly a treasure!