[Shelter] [Survival] [Store supplies] [No Stallion] [Humor] [No Virgin]
When Lin Ran woke up, he found that he had been taken to a swamp. The swamp was full of dangers, which also meant that there were opportunities everywhere.
He got his first partner and maid, Sun Qiao: "Lin Ran, you pervert, spying on people taking a bath!"
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Wonderful places such as swamps and hanging mountains take turns, sometimes relaxing, sometimes sad...
Focus on survival, collect supplies, fight together, and grow together with the slaves.
Reader comments
Chapter 1 is good. The description of the scene is very clear. Some metaphors, such as "a small house with pink lights and curtains on the roadside" have a sense of imagery and personal characteristics. Chapter 2 begins to lose its personal characteristics, the sense of graphics is completely lost, and the plot content is cliche. The chat channel, cutting down trees and then trading are completely routine... By Chapter 7, I can't stand it. This kind of writing can predict all the plots in the subsequent hundreds of chapters, which is boring.
Chapter 1 is good. The description of the scene is very clear. Some metaphors, such as "a small house with pink lights and curtains on the roadside" have a sense of imagery and personal characteristics. Chapter 2 begins to lose its personal characteristics, the sense of graphics is completely lost, and the plot content is cliche. The chat channel, cutting down trees and then trading are completely routine... By Chapter 7, I can't stand it. This kind of writing can predict all the plots in the subsequent hundreds of chapters, which is boring.
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