Ah, This Deranged Old-Timey World

It's quite interesting. It seems to be a bit of a group portrait, but the author wants to write too much. Many things are not explained clearly and can barely be considered foreshadowing. It's a bit tiring to read. I saw that it was a bit foggy at the end. The writing is not bad, but the plot needs to be strengthened. A lot of analysis is unnecessary in my opinion (in order to promote the development of the story, I didn't say it). I hope the author will get better and better [Blow kiss]

Very special writing style. At first I thought it was just the heroine's character that was difficult to understand and unexpected, but gradually I discovered that the author's writing style was just like that. The sense of suspense is very strong, the heroine is indeed a heartthrob, and every emotional line has a sense of suspense that reaches the end. There is not too much entanglement, but after reading it, I feel that there are many more follow-ups to be written. Therefore, some of my favorite male guests felt that their appearances were a bit lacking and the progress was too fast. But on average, each person actually doesn't have many roles alone. Logically speaking, this is difficult to control, but the author managed to make every male guest taste good. However, it is true that there are relatively few special writing rhythms, so maybe fewer people insist on reading? The descriptions in some places are a bit redundant, and the detailed arrangement is not very good. Some plots also like to be touched upon, giving it a sense of mystery like the Riddler. For example, the real bamboo horse that suddenly appeared at the back was a bit abrupt, so I didn't get the emotional connection with the heroine. But in general, if you want to read Su Gan, you are absolutely right to choose this article. Whether it is Nangong Yao, Dongfang Han, Xie Mo, Nangong Miyu, etc. Who spent more pen and ink, or G1, Su Gujie, Ruonuma, who wrote a few strokes; there are also the Discipline Chief and President who have many roles but little emotional development and fast progress; and Mr. Yi, who is unclear about family or love, is more complicated but appears to be more quality... There are many types. And the heroine is truly a heartthrob.

Good-looking (๑• . •๑) Although it is an ancient setting of Mary Suwen, it is clearly female-centered. There are many female characters with different personalities in the book, but when reading it, people will not suddenly realize that the author is deliberately creating an atmosphere. At the same time, there are no insulting words in the article, and everyone is polite and polite👍 In terms of language style, the author's writing is really good. It always makes people feel a touch of humor, and the description of emotions is also very delicate. When reading, people always feel sour about the emotions between them. In terms of characterization, the male protagonists are not uniform. Even though they are in a conjugate relationship in the article, they all have different soul backgrounds and are very three-dimensional. The heroine seems to be cold-faced and cute, but deep down she is a person with a somewhat humorous and strange brain. She seems to be very wooden, but she can understand the feelings and express herself clearly when dealing with cross-border emotions. At the same time, she is also a person who is not very bright morally. All in all, the author's writing is really good! Everyone has their own character arc. Finally, let me talk about a point that makes me personally uncomfortable: the brother in the twins has the same name as my junior high school classmate. Every time I see this name, I feel like there is a war between heaven and man in my head. On one side is a dank puppy and on the other is a classmate who was born three times. Don't do it😭😭 Okay, add a little more The lightning protection point may be that the author's writing style is so light that it has a kind of riddle character, and the male protagonists have a sense of fate and difficulty that is common in group portraits. All the male protagonists have a true and passionate love for the female protagonist, but their fate and the female protagonist cannot meet in the end and they can only become passers-by in a period of life, which actually makes people feel melancholy. Fortunately, the heroine is a real heartthrob, and her charisma is beyond doubt

The narrative technique is really unique, I like every character. The characters are three-dimensional and not flat, and there may be too many riddles buried in it, which may make you a little tired while watching it, but I still finished it in one sitting. It feels like only Mary Sue's background can support these characters. Every interaction has a sense of sourness and tension, which is very good. The dialogue is also very interesting and relaxed. I can't help but feel that there is no meal replacement in Good Cook, and I hope that there will be hundreds more chapters to follow. The heroine's strategy game really made me afraid that they would suddenly kiss each other, so I just made a few small picks. The key is to write it clearly and refreshingly. Although cats sometimes act out of character, they are not greasy at all. I also look forward to the heroine becoming a sharp-tongued old lady [note] and picking everyone off. There is a feeling that the story is still very long. If this was in a flower market, it would definitely be a hit. There is indeed a sense of community. Everyone has their own story and secrets. Some of them are explained without appearing redundant, but instead allow readers to understand the characters more deeply. Brilliant work! [Blowing a kiss] Rich people are really happy🌚

My wife's writing style is great, and it's really suitable for writing long, slender and flowing novels. On the contrary, short stories cannot express my wife's three-dimensional and multi-faceted story line. I look forward to my wife completing her complete novel one day. There is always a sense of destiny in Da Da's writing style (fate is really like this, people cannot want and want at the same time, so they must learn to let go and let go) After reading the story of Ice Cat, it was just as hard to let go of the previous one as there was a lot of blank space in the story. I always speculated on what the ending would be, but no matter which one, I would always be in debt to some characters and it was destined to be unsatisfactory. Just as Mi Jun was full of regrets from the moment he appeared, the 19-year age difference destined him to be restrained and destined not to reach the end; Just like Li Guo's "real" bamboo horse, the young Bing cat started to be morbidly dependent, but as Bing grew up, he could never get out of it; Just like Su Cheng and the chief discipline officer, no matter which ending they end up with, it seems too cruel to the other; Just like G1 and Xie Yuan, they never seem to get the favor of fate. Even if they are deeply affectionate, they are just one-man shows; Just like those in f4 who either don't realize it or can't express it, or they are willing to compromise or meet each other too late… In the story, it is like everyone has witnessed the most splendid fireworks together, but it is destined that no one can enjoy the fireworks alone. In the end, after meeting the unavailable person, he will die alone. Even Bing seemed to be walking quietly through this bustle, and finally returned to the beginning of this story... Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's next book! I also hope this book becomes popular!

It's very interesting. It feels like she's going crazy in a calm way. The heroine is committed to managing her facial paralysis as her own expression. So far, I can only sigh that the childhood life of the little facial paralytic was quite rich, and her calm face made everyone fly. But please note, it is not crazy literature.

Our Ali is really cute, and the interaction with the system is simply a source of joy. The outrageous yet reasonable communication made me stunned one after another. Although the plot setting is that I hate to rely on strategies to gain life, the system, parents, and friends drawn by the author are all in love with Ali. It is really very friendly, and each plot seems normal mixed with epilepsy, but is actually inexplicably harmonious and follows logic. It is very interesting, but the ending is a bit unexpected, hahaha~

Maybe I'm still a bit of a middle schooler inside? It's very interesting to me. The author's writing is a bit dry and humorous, but I feel that a lot of the plot has not been written yet, and the ending is very hasty, a bit like a bad ending... But I really like the heroine, alas😔, can we just leave it here?

The writing is very good. The characters of both the protagonist and other supporting characters are very interesting. You can fully see the character's personality instead of being flat. I don't understand why there is no rating. There are very few people who rate it and read the book. I don't understand it.

I can feel that the heroine lives in this world. There is a saying in it that is very good. The system said that it only briefly observed her life, and we only got a glimpse of a corner of her life through the novel.